http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-365745.html

Nyce and I would love some feedback bro.

Best poem from you yet. I know, you don't need feedback to tell you that. You said it yourself, you read your own piece and said 'holy shit, what pornstar did I fuck to bust this idea?' The wording was by far more of worth in here then anyother piece from you. Flowed very fucking well. Your imagery was really something dude, some really powerful visuals. Emotion was heart robbing, your mom cried when you read this to her.. that says something lol. Keep writing, this'll be hof with no trouble.