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    “The Kingdom”

    “The Kingdom”

    Behold the chalice- golden & rare
    aesthetically pleasing- full yet svelte
    As I sip eternal life from another soul
    searching for the holy grail, in my hand
    it shall stay as but a trinket of a world
    that was once great & once fell…

    I’m a leper king for I have no kingdom
    no kinship and no freedom,
    in the summer my sweat bathes me
    humid & oppressive it becomes one
    with my flesh like an adhesive;
    only to rip apart when I lay
    on my duvet; rags & halfhearted wishes
    keep me warm at night, me a king
    in a kingdom of lonely nights…

    As I strum the jester’s banjo I weep;
    for I have no audience,
    I’m a King with no feet
    And any peers I had
    have long taken their leave,
    The grungy walls are my tomb
    I’m a mummy but I have no child,
    lying there a broken King,
    Entertaining as a host
    to my fast evaporating materials…



    The pink petals of Penelope’s lips
    were so fragrant and sweet,
    though, she did to flee
    away with dear life in tow…
    As I sit back a foul smell of soul
    lingers in the air…why so?
    Have I not sold mine long ago…?
    Sold for a Kingdom only I can rule;
    oh how literal were those words…
    non serviam-
    so now I rule…rule alone with shells
    of men and women..alone I rule
    in my Kingdom, in this hell…

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    Re: “The Kingdom”

    Sick picture B. I love that pic. Anyways, this was pretty slick - the stanza under the picture was dope...I loved that Penelope's lip line, shit was detailed as fuck. I wondered how well you wrote poetry and well, now that I know, I'm worried, but excited to face you, to say the least. This was overall a nice, very solid drop. Keep doing you Baron, this shit was cool.

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    Re: “The Kingdom”

    Thanks. checked link.
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
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