Some Thoughts

[Bigot Hitman]

Look at the cold face on'em wear'in a mask of depression
Nah this how i look all the time,
That's only like every other cresent//
What you say'in is I don't look nice
Unapproachable like the source of a phobia
Which spawned from a stereotype//
Yeah be close minded your a angel in the sky
Your white right, pure and clean
Not a bengal in disguise//
About to break the neck of its prey, no you can't be
Perfectly raised,
Childhood was a field of Pansies//
But its shit in everyone not so "deep" inside
That you can't reach it before your "last breath"
Of a life changin' "dive"//
You just need sumthin to push you in the water
For some its just phrase or slur
Other's its a genocide slaughter//
Revaluate their selves then make it right
Pay'in homage won't buy respect
My sane is "forgive but i won't forget"//
Don't get me wrong i'm not one to hold a grudge
Like a innocent convict out on parole
About to murder the judge//
That's part of forgive'in, but why forget the
True colors,
Life's a lock, truth's the pick so get a picture//

Like it says, just some of my thoughts.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...35#post6301835

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...my-364871.html

[Que-C]

for a runnin mind and random thoughts its ill and the abstract flow helped portray that. some of the vocab seemed to be a different tone then the rest along with a couple punch lines. and for a verse and a half a good 95% of the lines were worded perfectly to help push the piece along (no fillers). even still i would like to see a more particular topic. prolly be a better audio story tellin

[Bigot Hitman]

good shot dun

[Bigot Hitman]

lemme get 1 more

[Bigot Hitman]

is it that hard to read?

[Dayvid Aimz]

I liked this but it worked more as a poem than a rap in my opinion.
it was cool how the topic was kinda random.
Gave you space to talk about what you wanted.
Next time, try to write more on a topic...I think you'll get more elaborate feed.
and also when you got time check out the poetic scriptures forum.
I think you're stuff would fit alot better there.....feed some pieces
and drop again......

Peace outt and stay up.