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    Re: Statues and Bananas

    Thanks...I totally accept that. Thanks a lot.
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    Re: Statues and Bananas

    Yeah I agree with Ex. At first, the last line sort of hurt my overall view of the poem, man! But hell, I'm more than willing to look past that. Your wording was excellent and your whole concept was something I really enjoyed. I found this to be a compelling read with a few twists lol. Interesting title, too. The opening few lines were my favourite. Imagery was nice throughout because of your descriptive wording. Overall a great drop man, hit me up for a poetry collab and please, RTF!
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    Re: Statues and Bananas

    Interesting <--- that word basically sums up this whole piece for me, I liked it. It was something that made me think a little and actually go into some depth. I liked the carbon line...like carbon dating...type thing....Technically it was good, imagery, good words usage. All in all a good piece man. Great way to enter the poetry scene.
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