Breaking Concrete.

[P. Mortuus]

bit more of an experiment, which is good as it isn't something I usually see you do. I liked the piece, I wasn't overly fond of they rhymescheme but I can't knock it as it read fluid enough. The main thing I liked about this was that it was practically one big lump of imagery. good work.

[Soule]

Thanks.. will get two more links once I up this once more after more feed drifts in.

[HighEngineChief]

I liked this piece, it had alot of good imagery that shows through consistintly through the entire piece. It flowed really good with the rhyme scheme, wich is plus, poems dont have to rhyme but it's always more fun when it's done right so good job with that. All in all i liked this piece, it was pretty good