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    HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

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    Re: HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

    smh....between 20-30

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    Re: HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

    w/eva. jus match
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    Re: HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

    the question is...



    are you shittin me kid? why the fucks my crew name still in ur sig?
    i ain't hungry...so it's no suprise the whole leagues splittin ur ribs
    & he's a bitch, you aint gay? then why act so emotional dog
    man this fags grip on the league...s'prolly got lotion involved
    come from a chain of ho's, & nah dude i wouldnt dare erase it
    your so bitchmade you n you mom share a cage in my basement
    i got 'em last time we battled, n when i got it i neva flop the ball...
    so to set the record straight...i shoulda never dropped at all
    n your worlds bout to end, but atleast ya never snitched on a friend
    so even though you aint a pig, we constantly see you bring dirt to a pen
    n im def prepared for war, wont hesitate to run n smash a dork..
    man how come when ? gains heat, we all sprint to snatch a fork
    i smoke weed not cigarettes...so last weeks champ match look so silly
    fuck's got me smokin a square when i really should be blazin a philly
    your mom must be like a wall, stoppin me from tearin limbs apart
    so if shes just holdin Back talent, s'cuz i never seen a bitch bend so far
    im burnin the 'vets' in the league, & ya muscle ain't shit to ignite bitch
    'cause if your a fine tuned machine...then dog i feel like a spike strip
    n ya last verse seemed familar...atleast i can say that it felt read
    so if you make it we'll see playoffs....of what everyone else said..
    my right hooks land clean, and it's knows i don't take jaw-jab to hart
    man ill hit you so hard, you'll think i jacked vaskez's avatar..
    i'll wrap ya, up in a back pack i snatched from the hall
    man i must be a teacher leavin this question in chalk..




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    Re: HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

    Well..

    Heres the thing, your quick ass verse didnt sting and my hunch is...
    You wrote your verse in less than an hour...coz i only see minute punches
    I clump kids, it takes you ages to produce wack shit you bring to the fight
    If you ever throw a good punch, the bins gon be rumaged through all night
    See the light dont go on in ya head, quit tryna run before you even crawled
    Forget tryna switch your style, your dome already has dimmer installed
    Your rhymes always involve incomplete hits when it comes to the crunch
    Putting your wack writing in a ring binders only time they see a whole punch
    Eat you for lunch, cant match me faggot, iono what you in the zone meant
    I came up with a lot of wit, you came up on the back of wack ass opponents
    10 points n a title match? you should be do or die not chasing awards
    Coz lately youve masterd the cling on like you bout to audition for starwars
    I rape whores, your heading for the little league cos ya style aint swell
    Your dad mustve had the same name, way you were destined for junior ancel
    Ima dwell on the fact no one likes you n you aint one to admire
    Coz if it was your fanning the flames, no one in the league would be on fire
    Call me a liar but i see a lot of weak shit in ya verse that i`ll eat for lunch
    Your verse has plenty of character, just none of them formed a decent punch
    Its coming down to the cruch n your computer skills suck in this
    But youve mastered the space bar...producing 2 lines of pure nothingness


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    Re: HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

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    are you shittin me kid? why the fucks my crew name still in ur sig?
    i ain't hungry...so it's no suprise the whole leagues splittin ur ribs
    Fresh concept. Decent here.
    & he's a bitch, you aint gay? then why act so emotional dog
    man this fags grip on the league...s'prolly got lotion involved
    Funny one, wording was on point.
    come from a chain of ho's, & nah dude i wouldnt dare erase it
    your so bitchmade you n you mom share a cage in my basement
    I think this one was iffy... maybe I'm not catchin it
    i got 'em last time we battled, n when i got it i neva flop the ball...
    so to set the record straight...i shoulda never dropped at all
    ...ok...? This was statementish
    n your worlds bout to end, but atleast ya never snitched on a friend
    so even though you aint a pig, we constantly see you bring dirt to a pen
    I see what you're tryna say, decent.
    n im def prepared for war, wont hesitate to run n smash a dork..
    man how come when ? gains heat, we all sprint to snatch a fork
    Idk... how come? lol...
    i smoke weed not cigarettes...so last weeks champ match look so silly
    fuck's got me smokin a square when i really should be blazin a philly
    Not too much of a diss
    your mom must be like a wall, stoppin me from tearin limbs apart
    so if shes just holdin Back talent, s'cuz i never seen a bitch bend so far
    This concept as a whole is a stretch... Wasn't feelin this.
    im burnin the 'vets' in the league, & ya muscle ain't shit to ignite bitch
    'cause if your a fine tuned machine...then dog i feel like a spike strip
    This was coo.
    n ya last verse seemed familar...atleast i can say that it felt read
    so if you make it we'll see playoffs....of what everyone else said..
    "Play off" actually is played, ironically. The way this is worded is coo though.
    my right hooks land clean, and it's knows i don't take jaw-jab to hart
    man ill hit you so hard, you'll think i jacked vaskez's avatar..
    Once again, not much of a diss, kinda filler-ish.
    i'll wrap ya, up in a back pack i snatched from the hall
    man i must be a teacher leavin this question in chalk..
    This was sloppy, seemed rushed.

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    Heres the thing, your quick ass verse didnt sting and my hunch is...
    You wrote your verse in less than an hour...coz i only see minute punches
    Wording was crisp, 'minute' is close to being played. Good one though.
    I clump kids, it takes you ages to produce wack shit you bring to the fight
    If you ever throw a good punch, the bins gon be rumaged through all night
    Ehhh... it's a stretch, it's ok I guess
    See the light dont go on in ya head, quit tryna run before you even crawled
    Forget tryna switch your style, your dome already has dimmer installed
    Ah, this was nice. Creative
    Your rhymes always involve incomplete hits when it comes to the crunch
    Putting your wack writing in a ring binders only time they see a whole punch
    Damn, 3 outta the first 4 punches are about his punches? Meh. This one was yuck.
    Eat you for lunch, cant match me faggot, iono what you in the zone meant
    I came up with a lot of wit, you came up on the back of wack ass opponents
    This was ok...
    10 points n a title match? you should be do or die not chasing awards
    Coz lately youve masterd the cling on like you bout to audition for starwars
    So-so.
    I rape whores, your heading for the little league cos ya style aint swell
    Your dad mustve had the same name, way you were destined for junior ancel
    Creative, not too hard-hitting, but creative.
    Ima dwell on the fact no one likes you n you aint one to admire
    Coz if it was your fanning the flames, no one in the league would be on fire
    Meh, I kinda missed it. The wording is off a bit
    Call me a liar but i see a lot of weak shit in ya verse that i`ll eat for lunch
    Your verse has plenty of character, just none of them formed a decent punch
    Another 'punch' punch, lol. This was on the weak side too.
    Its coming down to the cruch n your computer skills suck in this
    But youve mastered the space bar...producing 2 lines of pure nothingness
    This was pretty good, idk why you said 2 lines and not 'a whole verse' or something like that

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    are you shittin me kid? why the fucks my crew name still in ur sig?
    i ain't hungry...so it's no suprise the whole leagues splittin ur ribs(ehh...)
    & he's a bitch, you aint gay? then why act so emotional dog
    man this fags grip on the league...s'prolly got lotion involved
    im burnin the 'vets' in the league, & ya muscle ain't shit to ignite bitch
    'cause if your a fine tuned machine...then dog i feel like a spike strip (ehh...)

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    Heres the thing, your quick ass verse didnt sting and my hunch is...
    You wrote your verse in less than an hour...coz i only see minute punches (ehh...)
    See the light dont go on in ya head, quit tryna run before you even crawled
    Forget tryna switch your style, your dome already has dimmer installed
    Its coming down to the cruch n your computer skills suck in this
    But youve mastered the space bar...producing 2 lines of pure nothingness
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    Idk if I'm judging too harsh or what, but this was a disappointing Champ Match. Let's see, Ancel, a lot of your concepts were new, but not necessarily good. Like, the record straight one, that's not even a diss. The mom punch? Wasn't really a diss. And then a couple of the bars had wording that took away from their quality. Gaining heat and question in chalk shoulda been reworded.
    Q, clearly you either didn't take your time, or just didn't care cuz this doesn't compare to the last two weeks. You had 2 dope lines (the minute punch would be dope, if 'minute' wasn't used often), and a bunch of mediocre lines, and then the rest just filler. And what's up with basically dissing the same thing 4 times in one verse? That's how I know you ain't take your time lol. Next week you better concentrate, cuz I plan on coming wit a hot 30-liner, and this won't cut it.
    But yeah, due to the fact that Ancel just had more 'bad' lines, and Q's quotes were better by a small margin, he got this. Votes'll most likely be close though.


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    Re: HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

    thanks for vote, and good battle Q.

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    Re: HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

    are you shittin me kid? why the fucks my crew name still in ur sig?
    i ain't hungry...so it's no suprise the whole leagues splittin ur ribs
    decent
    & he's a bitch, you aint gay? then why act so emotional dog
    man this fags grip on the league...s'prolly got lotion involved
    eh, okay
    come from a chain of ho's, & nah dude i wouldnt dare erase it
    your so bitchmade you n you mom share a cage in my basement
    eh
    i got 'em last time we battled, n when i got it i neva flop the ball...
    so to set the record straight...i shoulda never dropped at all
    eh
    n your worlds bout to end, but atleast ya never snitched on a friend
    so even though you aint a pig, we constantly see you bring dirt to a pen
    eh
    n im def prepared for war, wont hesitate to run n smash a dork..
    man how come when ? gains heat, we all sprint to snatch a fork
    lol
    i smoke weed not cigarettes...so last weeks champ match look so silly
    fuck's got me smokin a square when i really should be blazin a philly
    nice
    your mom must be like a wall, stoppin me from tearin limbs apart
    so if shes just holdin Back talent, s'cuz i never seen a bitch bend so far
    wordin was off, but aight
    im burnin the 'vets' in the league, & ya muscle ain't shit to ignite bitch
    'cause if your a fine tuned machine...then dog i feel like a spike strip
    nice
    n ya last verse seemed familar...atleast i can say that it felt read
    so if you make it we'll see playoffs....of what everyone else said..
    lol
    my right hooks land clean, and it's knows i don't take jaw-jab to hart
    man ill hit you so hard, you'll think i jacked vaskez's avatar..
    na
    i'll wrap ya, up in a back pack i snatched from the hall
    man i must be a teacher leavin this question in chalk..
    eh, decent

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    Heres the thing, your quick ass verse didnt sting and my hunch is...
    You wrote your verse in less than an hour...coz i only see minute punches
    eh
    I clump kids, it takes you ages to produce wack shit you bring to the fight
    If you ever throw a good punch, the bins gon be rumaged through all night
    eh
    See the light dont go on in ya head, quit tryna run before you even crawled
    Forget tryna switch your style, your dome already has dimmer installed
    lol
    Your rhymes always involve incomplete hits when it comes to the crunch
    Putting your wack writing in a ring binders only time they see a whole punch
    nice
    Eat you for lunch, cant match me faggot, iono what you in the zone meant
    I came up with a lot of wit, you came up on the back of wack ass opponents
    decent
    10 points n a title match? you should be do or die not chasing awards
    Coz lately youve masterd the cling on like you bout to audition for starwars
    eh
    I rape whores, your heading for the little league cos ya style aint swell
    Your dad mustve had the same name, way you were destined for junior ancel
    this concept was dope but poorly executed
    Ima dwell on the fact no one likes you n you aint one to admire
    Coz if it was your fanning the flames, no one in the league would be on fire
    eh
    Call me a liar but i see a lot of weak shit in ya verse that i`ll eat for lunch
    Your verse has plenty of character, just none of them formed a decent punch
    lmfao
    Its coming down to the cruch n your computer skills suck in this
    But youve mastered the space bar...producing 2 lines of pure nothingness
    decent

    i think both of you had some extremely weak points and then some pretty dope punches, just alotta hit n' miss. i cant say i fully feel either one of your verses, because the points you fell off weren't just like normal fillers.. they were pretty bad. i think question had the creativity and fresh concepts... he just didnt word them right at all, aside from a few. ancel came more direct with a lil more sting, but when he fell off, he fell OFF. kinda makes it hard to pick a winner. but...

    imma have to vote - ancel for havin a bit more sting.

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    Re: HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

    ancel -

    are you shittin me kid? why the fucks my crew name still in ur sig?
    i ain't hungry...so it's no suprise the whole leagues splittin ur ribs
    - aight, pretty cool.

    & he's a bitch, you aint gay? then why act so emotional dog
    man this fags grip on the league...s'prolly got lotion involved
    - lol. disgusting.

    come from a chain of ho's, & nah dude i wouldnt dare erase it
    your so bitchmade you n you mom share a cage in my basement
    - meh not feelin the flip w/ this concept.

    i got 'em last time we battled, n when i got it i neva flop the ball...
    so to set the record straight...i shoulda never dropped at all
    - hmm ok.

    n your worlds bout to end, but atleast ya never snitched on a friend
    so even though you aint a pig, we constantly see you bring dirt to a pen
    - ha nice concept, never seen this before.

    n im def prepared for war, wont hesitate to run n smash a dork..
    man how come when ? gains heat, we all sprint to snatch a fork
    - decent.

    i smoke weed not cigarettes...so last weeks champ match look so silly
    fuck's got me smokin a square when i really should be blazin a philly
    - meh not really feelin.

    your mom must be like a wall, stoppin me from tearin limbs apart
    so if shes just holdin Back talent, s'cuz i never seen a bitch bend so far
    - kinda reachin on a played-ish concept..

    im burnin the 'vets' in the league, & ya muscle ain't shit to ignite bitch
    'cause if your a fine tuned machine...then dog i feel like a spike strip
    - aight decent.

    n ya last verse seemed familar...atleast i can say that it felt read
    so if you make it we'll see playoffs....of what everyone else said..
    - decent flip.

    my right hooks land clean, and it's knows i don't take jaw-jab to hart
    man ill hit you so hard, you'll think i jacked vaskez's avatar..
    - mehh nah.

    i'll wrap ya, up in a back pack i snatched from the hall
    man i must be a teacher leavin this question in chalk..
    - meh, c'mon now..

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    ...?... -

    Heres the thing, your quick ass verse didnt sting and my hunch is...
    You wrote your verse in less than an hour...coz i only see minute punches
    - aight pretty nice.

    I clump kids, it takes you ages to produce wack shit you bring to the fight
    If you ever throw a good punch, the bins gon be rumaged through all night
    - kinda cornyish .. aight.

    See the light dont go on in ya head, quit tryna run before you even crawled
    Forget tryna switch your style, your dome already has dimmer installed
    - setup helped .. decent overall.

    Your rhymes always involve incomplete hits when it comes to the crunch
    Putting your wack writing in a ring binders only time they see a whole punch
    - needed rewording for harsh effect, too simplistic.

    Eat you for lunch, cant match me faggot, iono what you in the zone meant
    I came up with a lot of wit, you came up on the back of wack ass opponents
    - alright.

    10 points n a title match? you should be do or die not chasing awards
    Coz lately youve masterd the cling on like you bout to audition for starwars
    - meh not really ..

    I rape whores, your heading for the little league cos ya style aint swell
    Your dad mustve had the same name, way you were destined for junior ancel
    - lol weird but okay.

    Ima dwell on the fact no one likes you n you aint one to admire
    Coz if it was your fanning the flames, no one in the league would be on fire
    - nahh

    Call me a liar but i see a lot of weak shit in ya verse that i`ll eat for lunch
    Your verse has plenty of character, just none of them formed a decent punch
    - heh ok.

    Its coming down to the cruch n your computer skills suck in this
    But youve mastered the space bar...producing 2 lines of pure nothingness
    - aight.

    this was a pretty even battle all the way around. i think both had 3 quotables that i liked, and both pretty much had the same consistency. but as far as who had LESS lines i didnt like, i'd have to go with ...?..., ancel kinda fell off towards the end, dunno if he was rushin it or w/e, but i think Q came a little better overall, so he squeeks this out.

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    & he's a bitch, you aint gay? then why act so emotional dog
    man this fags grip on the league...s'prolly got lotion involved
    n your worlds bout to end, but atleast ya never snitched on a friend
    so even though you aint a pig, we constantly see you bring dirt to a pen
    i smoke weed not cigarettes...so last weeks champ match look so silly
    fuck's got me smokin a square when i really should be blazin a philly
    n ya last verse seemed familar...atleast i can say that it felt read
    so if you make it we'll see playoffs....of what everyone else said..
    i'll wrap ya, up in a back pack i snatched from the hall
    man i must be a teacher leavin this question in chalk..
    ^^nice fresh hit on his name

    vs.

    I clump kids, it takes you ages to produce wack shit you bring to the fight
    If you ever throw a good punch, the bins gon be rumaged through all night
    See the light dont go on in ya head, quit tryna run before you even crawled
    Forget tryna switch your style, your dome already has dimmer installed
    Your rhymes always involve incomplete hits when it comes to the crunch
    Putting your wack writing in a ring binders only time they see a whole punch
    I rape whores, your heading for the little league cos ya style aint swell
    Your dad mustve had the same name, way you were destined for junior ancel

    close battle, I almost gave it to Q but a few of his punches weren't executed smoothly enough plus he used like one style of punch for his whole verse

    v/Ancel, by a hair

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    are you shittin me kid? why the fucks my crew name still in ur sig?
    i ain't hungry...so it's no suprise the whole leagues splittin ur ribs
    [iight]
    & he's a bitch, you aint gay? then why act so emotional dog
    man this fags grip on the league...s'prolly got lotion involved
    [ha, liked it]
    come from a chain of ho's, & nah dude i wouldnt dare erase it
    your so bitchmade you n you mom share a cage in my basement
    [ehh, iffy]
    i got 'em last time we battled, n when i got it i neva flop the ball...
    so to set the record straight...i shoulda never dropped at all
    [doesn't come off insulting really, its a clever idea but yea]
    n your worlds bout to end, but atleast ya never snitched on a friend
    so even though you aint a pig, we constantly see you bring dirt to a pen
    [meh/iight]
    n im def prepared for war, wont hesitate to run n smash a dork..
    man how come when ? gains heat, we all sprint to snatch a fork
    [ha, funny but could use stronger context probably]
    i smoke weed not cigarettes...so last weeks champ match look so silly
    fuck's got me smokin a square when i really should be blazin a philly
    [meh, played on philly so..]
    your mom must be like a wall, stoppin me from tearin limbs apart
    so if shes just holdin Back talent, s'cuz i never seen a bitch bend so far
    [reaching]
    im burnin the 'vets' in the league, & ya muscle ain't shit to ignite bitch
    'cause if your a fine tuned machine...then dog i feel like a spike strip
    [i liked this alot]
    n ya last verse seemed familar...atleast i can say that it felt read
    so if you make it we'll see playoffs....of what everyone else said..
    [meh at best, playedish]
    my right hooks land clean, and it's knows i don't take jaw-jab to hart
    man ill hit you so hard, you'll think i jacked vaskez's avatar..
    [meh at best, not about him enough]
    i'll wrap ya, up in a back pack i snatched from the hall
    man i must be a teacher leavin this question in chalk..
    [meh/iight a new approach on the personal but i wasn't diggint the wording]

    vs

    Heres the thing, your quick ass verse didnt sting and my hunch is...
    You wrote your verse in less than an hour...coz i only see minute punches
    [this is played]
    I clump kids, it takes you ages to produce wack shit you bring to the fight
    If you ever throw a good punch, the bins gon be rumaged through all night
    [clever]
    See the light dont go on in ya head, quit tryna run before you even crawled
    Forget tryna switch your style, your dome already has dimmer installed
    [iight]
    Your rhymes always involve incomplete hits when it comes to the crunch
    Putting your wack writing in a ring binders only time they see a whole punch
    [above average]
    Eat you for lunch, cant match me faggot, iono what you in the zone meant
    I came up with a lot of wit, you came up on the back of wack ass opponents
    [meh]
    10 points n a title match? you should be do or die not chasing awards
    Coz lately youve masterd the cling on like you bout to audition for starwars
    [no..]
    I rape whores, your heading for the little league cos ya style aint swell
    Your dad mustve had the same name, way you were destined for junior ancel
    [iight maybe]
    Ima dwell on the fact no one likes you n you aint one to admire
    Coz if it was your fanning the flames, no one in the league would be on fire
    [eh]
    Call me a liar but i see a lot of weak shit in ya verse that i`ll eat for lunch
    Your verse has plenty of character, just none of them formed a decent punch
    [clever]
    Its coming down to the cruch n your computer skills suck in this
    But youve mastered the space bar...producing 2 lines of pure nothingness
    [nah]

    ? had some clever punches but didn't seem to bring the same harshness Ancel did

    v/ Ancel
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    Re: HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

    are you shittin me kid? why the fucks my crew name still in ur sig?
    i ain't hungry...so it's no suprise the whole leagues splittin ur ribs
    n your worlds bout to end, but atleast ya never snitched on a friend
    so even though you aint a pig, we constantly see you bring dirt to a pen
    im burnin the 'vets' in the league, & ya muscle ain't shit to ignite bitch
    'cause if your a fine tuned machine...then dog i feel like a spike strip
    i'll wrap ya, up in a back pack i snatched from the hall
    man i must be a teacher leavin this question in chalk..

    vs.

    See the light dont go on in ya head, quit tryna run before you even crawled
    Forget tryna switch your style, your dome already has dimmer installed
    Your rhymes always involve incomplete hits when it comes to the crunch
    Putting your wack writing in a ring binders only time they see a whole punch
    10 points n a title match? you should be do or die not chasing awards
    Coz lately youve masterd the cling on like you bout to audition for starwars
    Its coming down to the cruch n your computer skills suck in this
    But youve mastered the space bar...producing 2 lines of pure nothingness



    this is def. close. ? has a different type of style than Ancel for sure. Ancel had more of a swagger, which makes the lines come off harder. Q, your concepts are pretty creative but some of them don't seem very relevant. Like the cling on concept, that was creative, but the diss is stretched. I'm going to keep this short, basically my fav. line in the battle was from Ancel, that dirt to a pen line. That was worded really well. This is close, but off of the quoteables i'm going toward Ancel.


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    Re: HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

    & he's a bitch, you aint gay? then why act so emotional dog
    man this fags grip on the league...s'prolly got lotion involved
    n your worlds bout to end, but atleast ya never snitched on a friend
    so even though you aint a pig, we constantly see you bring dirt to a pen
    i smoke weed not cigarettes...so last weeks champ match look so silly
    fuck's got me smokin a square when i really should be blazin a philly
    n ya last verse seemed familar...atleast i can say that it felt read
    so if you make it we'll see playoffs....of what everyone else said..
    i'll wrap ya, up in a back pack i snatched from the hall
    man i must be a teacher leavin this question in chalk



    vs



    I clump kids, it takes you ages to produce wack shit you bring to the fight
    If you ever throw a good punch, the bins gon be rumaged through all night
    See the light dont go on in ya head, quit tryna run before you even crawled
    Forget tryna switch your style, your dome already has dimmer installed
    I rape whores, your heading for the little league cos ya style aint swell
    Your dad mustve had the same name, way you were destined for junior ancel



    the whole punch line was done way better the first time around by whoever did it


    V/ancel

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    Re: HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

    n your worlds bout to end, but atleast ya never snitched on a friend
    so even though you aint a pig, we constantly see you bring dirt to a pen
    im burnin the 'vets' in the league, & ya muscle ain't shit to ignite bitch
    'cause if your a fine tuned machine...then dog i feel like a spike strip
    i'll wrap ya, up in a back pack i snatched from the hall
    man i must be a teacher leavin this question in chalk..

    vs.


    Forget tryna switch your style, your dome already has dimmer installed
    Your rhymes always involve incomplete hits when it comes to the crunch
    Putting your wack writing in a ring binders only time they see a whole punch
    10 points n a title match? you should be do or die not chasing awards
    Coz lately youve masterd the cling on like you bout to audition for starwars
    I rape whores, your heading for the little league cos ya style aint swell
    Your dad mustve had the same name, way you were destined for junior ancel
    Call me a liar but i see a lot of weak shit in ya verse that i`ll eat for lunch
    Your verse has plenty of character, just none of them formed a decent punch


    read this shit pretty close but i got ? taking it with one more punch.

    v/ ?

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    Re: HW CHAMP MATCH ..?.. (20) vs. Ancel (10)

    are you shittin me kid? why the fucks my crew name still in ur sig?
    i ain't hungry...so it's no suprise the whole leagues splittin ur ribs
    & he's a bitch, you aint gay? then why act so emotional dog
    man this fags grip on the league...s'prolly got lotion involved
    n your worlds bout to end, but atleast ya never snitched on a friend
    so even though you aint a pig, we constantly see you bring dirt to a pen
    i smoke weed not cigarettes...so last weeks champ match look so silly
    fuck's got me smokin a square when i really should be blazin a philly
    n ya last verse seemed familar...atleast i can say that it felt read
    so if you make it we'll see playoffs....of what everyone else said..
    my right hooks land clean, and it's knows i don't take jaw-jab to hart
    man ill hit you so hard, you'll think i jacked vaskez's avatar..
    i'll wrap ya, up in a back pack i snatched from the hall
    man i must be a teacher leavin this question in chalk..

    vs.

    See the light dont go on in ya head, quit tryna run before you even crawled
    Forget tryna switch your style, your dome already has dimmer installed
    Your rhymes always involve incomplete hits when it comes to the crunch
    Putting your wack writing in a ring binders only time they see a whole punch
    I rape whores, your heading for the little league cos ya style aint swell
    Your dad mustve had the same name, way you were destined for junior ancel
    Its coming down to the cruch n your computer skills suck in this
    But youve mastered the space bar...producing 2 lines of pure nothingness

    hmm, not a bad battle. ancel did alot better than i expected. he kept the heat and the hits comin thru out most of his verse. alot of solid punches and like hens said, he had the swagger which made his punches more impactful. question seemed like he didnt really try this week or just ran out'a good material. especially from what i saw from his last week. his dimmer punch did make me smile tho. either way, not a bad read. kept my interest thru most of the battle but ancel had that swag and was more consistant

    v/ ancel

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