Heavyweight Title Match: Philly (20) vs ..?.. (17)

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[Philly®]

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[Big Question]

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[Philly®]

if u think ur gonna knock me out then your a fuckin retard...

you punch weak as shit, so call me a bitch, w/e u say it's true
..but i'm sure this isn't the first time a bitch wouldn't go dwn on u
i'm waiting to receive a hit from dude, yea i'm on the edge of my seat
cuz we all kno QB throwing bombs, n seem to always fall incomplete
beat the fav5, n for the question guy, if he lies i'll make his beak bend
cuz if he's at his peak, then it's obvious y there's free nights and weekends
i thought u'd beat me last HW match, but big Q is beyond a disgrace
so yea i was feelin stupid.. everytime my fist went across his face..
i'm the father figure of this text shit, give it up or go pound for pound
cuz i take time to raise kids.. let em go n laugh when he hits the ground
i'm sendin no love around, step out n i'll have to put him back in check
n if cupid his hands on me, i'll feel the desire n passion to break his neck
philly brick house kids too, but even Q spits just flow sick..
cuz he's put out alot since i came by with that eviction notice
now on to the bitches, n i'm sure he's never had a problem with chicks
but they all think ur a QT, which usually has a UI an ER in the mix
ya lines let u down when it counts, so here's a lesson for dude
cuz shit, even the lines in your palm says your destined to lose


18

[Big Question]

First of fuck records, im the more skilled when it comes down to it kid
Might have more points than me, but everyone one of em is poorly worded
Im absurd kid, your talents sliding n its just not getting any better
You might be able to rhyme sick...
...but you`ll struggle with any more than four letters
You gotta be well versed in audio right? n thats not just a guess son
You must have a solid grounding, coz your tracks dont leave an impression
Youll need an army of help, so go round em up before you come to battle fool
And if you have to call your freinds here, its because you suck at text too
I like rap, got love for cassidy so why is it that im not feeling that ya illy?
I feel sorry for the state of your rhymes...your a damn disgrace to philly
Really i could own you in a flash, your ass, you aint a vet son
This battle takes you back to ya school days...
...way youve got no answer to the question
Fucks with the custom title? we all got eyes to see for our self bitch
I mean how you just better, when no one ever noticed you were sick
Your entire verse is trash from start to finish, it simply cant match mine
You aint the joke of the league, what kinda joke doesnt have a punchline
You wont shine, think your gon champ the league ya outta luk kid
Your king of the front lines, shame you got nothing to back em up with


MEH
18

[N. James]

you punch weak as shit, so call me a bitch, w/e u say it's true
..but i'm sure this isn't the first time a bitch wouldn't go dwn on u
lol
i'm waiting to receive a hit from dude, yea i'm on the edge of my seat
cuz we all kno QB throwing bombs, n seem to always fall incomplete
decent
beat the fav5, n for the question guy, if he lies i'll make his beak bend
cuz if he's at his peak, then it's obvious y there's free nights and weekends
lol
i thought u'd beat me last HW match, but big Q is beyond a disgrace
so yea i was feelin stupid.. everytime my fist went across his face..
lol, good again
i'm the father figure of this text shit, give it up or go pound for pound
cuz i take time to raise kids.. let em go n laugh when he hits the ground
eh
i'm sendin no love around, step out n i'll have to put him back in check
n if cupid his hands on me, i'll feel the desire n passion to break his neck
lol
philly brick house kids too, but even Q spits just flow sick..
cuz he's put out alot since i came by with that eviction notice
eh, just decent
now on to the bitches, n i'm sure he's never had a problem with chicks
but they all think ur a QT, which usually has a UI an ER in the mix
eh, quitter, just wasnt that harsh
ya lines let u down when it counts, so here's a lesson for dude
cuz shit, even the lines in your palm says your destined to lose
lol, coulda been worded better though

very consistent verse.

vs.

First of fuck records, im the more skilled when it comes down to it kid
Might have more points than me, but everyone one of em is poorly worded
lol
Im absurd kid, your talents sliding n its just not getting any better
You might be able to rhyme sick...
...but you`ll struggle with any more than four letters
lmfao
You gotta be well versed in audio right? n thats not just a guess son
You must have a solid grounding, coz your tracks dont leave an impression
lol
Youll need an army of help, so go round em up before you come to battle fool
And if you have to call your freinds here, its because you suck at text too
eh
I like rap, got love for cassidy so why is it that im not feeling that ya illy?
I feel sorry for the state of your rhymes...your a damn disgrace to philly
eh, just decent
Really i could own you in a flash, your ass, you aint a vet son
This battle takes you back to ya school days...
...way youve got no answer to the question
decent
Fucks with the custom title? we all got eyes to see for our self bitch
I mean how you just better, when no one ever noticed you were sick
wording was off, but decent
Your entire verse is trash from start to finish, it simply cant match mine
You aint the joke of the league, what kinda joke doesnt have a punchline
eh, you were ALOT more witty than this starting off
You wont shine, think your gon champ the league ya outta luk kid
Your king of the front lines, shame you got nothing to back em up with
decent

i think you were extremely witty, and with one more good bar you would have won this, but for more consistency im going to have to vote philly. this was extremely close though.

vote - philly

[Vaskez]

beat the fav5, n for the question guy, if he lies i'll make his beak bend
cuz if he's at his peak, then it's obvious y there's free nights and weekends
i'm sendin no love around, step out n i'll have to put him back in check
n if cupid his hands on me, i'll feel the desire n passion to break his neck
philly brick house kids too, but even Q spits just flow sick..
cuz he's put out alot since i came by with that eviction notice
^^haha

dunno man, A LOT of your lines seemed played to me. But that above were pretty fresh to me

vs


First of fuck records, im the more skilled when it comes down to it kid
Might have more points than me, but everyone one of em is poorly worded
Im absurd kid, your talents sliding n its just not getting any better
You might be able to rhyme sick...
...but you`ll struggle with any more than four letters
^^haha, seems familiar, but cant remember so whatever, good punch
Really i could own you in a flash, your ass, you aint a vet son
This battle takes you back to ya school days...
...way youve got no answer to the question
^^lol
Fucks with the custom title? we all got eyes to see for our self bitch
I mean how you just better, when no one ever noticed you were sick
^^better/sick shits been done, but this was a nice flip
Your entire verse is trash from start to finish, it simply cant match mine
You aint the joke of the league, what kinda joke doesnt have a punchline
You wont shine, think your gon champ the league ya outta luk kid
Your king of the front lines, shame you got nothing to back em up with

damn, Q came with a lot of wit. A few were more flips than completely fresh, but I think he outdid philly whose lines seemed more played

v/..?...

[Untold.]

i'm sendin no love around, step out n i'll have to put him back in check
n if cupid his hands on me, i'll feel the desire n passion to break his neck
^this was a lil stretch. i ususally purnounce it qu-pid! not qu-put! just lettin u know, killa.
philly brick house kids too, but even Q spits just flow sick..
cuz he's put out alot since i came by with that eviction notice
ya lines let u down when it counts, so here's a lesson for dude
cuz shit, even the lines in your palm says your destined to lose

vs.

Im absurd kid, your talents sliding n its just not getting any better
You might be able to rhyme sick...
...but you`ll struggle with any more than four letters
Really i could own you in a flash, your ass, you aint a vet son
This battle takes you back to ya school days...
...way youve got no answer to the question

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Fucks with the custom title? we all got eyes to see for our self bitch
I mean how you just better, when no one ever noticed you were sick
Your entire verse is trash from start to finish, it simply cant match mine
You aint the joke of the league, what kinda joke doesnt have a punchline
You wont shine, think your gon champ the league ya outta luk kid
Your king of the front lines, shame you got nothing to back em up with
^and all these were cool.. but ur punches are gettin too generic. im startin to see a similar pattern with setupz to executionz here.

ok, overall pretty good battle. i really think philly's not puttin his all into this shit anymore. i mean, the verse was cool but definately not up to the old philly standardz. but trust me sonz. im right there wit ya. as far as ..?.. good job dude. uve been comin wit fire lately. but u need to work on wordin man. ur shits either becomin to generic or its just becomin too predictable. u have good ideas and concepts. but venture out wit ur wordin a bit. ur last few punches had all similar styles wit 'em. i see u got the talent, just switch shit up a bit. u'll get it. but overall, for consistancy. i gotta go wit question guy. he pulled it off wit better concepts and consistancy.

v/ ..?..

[Vaskez]

yeah good point by untold, good advice, needa switch up styles, vary the style of punch a bit, i meant to put that in my vote, but untold said it first

[Forreal?!]

beat the fav5, n for the question guy, if he lies i'll make his beak bend
cuz if he's at his peak, then it's obvious y there's free nights and weekends
i'm sendin no love around, step out n i'll have to put him back in check
n if cupid his hands on me, i'll feel the desire n passion to break his neck
philly brick house kids too, but even Q spits just flow sick..
cuz he's put out alot since i came by with that eviction notice


vs


Im absurd kid, your talents sliding n its just not getting any better
You might be able to rhyme sick...
...but you`ll struggle with any more than four letters
Fucks with the custom title? we all got eyes to see for our self bitch
I mean how you just better, when no one ever noticed you were sick


overall this was close....Q had some ok stuff, but i felt philly was wayyy more witty n i lol'd at more of his ish.

v/ philly

[J.Hens.]

you punch weak as shit, so call me a bitch, w/e u say it's true
..but i'm sure this isn't the first time a bitch wouldn't go dwn on u
it's aight
i'm waiting to receive a hit from dude, yea i'm on the edge of my seat
cuz we all kno QB throwing bombs, n seem to always fall incomplete
was feelin it, finished aight, overall pretty cool.
beat the fav5, n for the question guy, if he lies i'll make his beak bend
cuz if he's at his peak, then it's obvious y there's free nights and weekends
alright, diss is a bit unclear, the wp connects well tho.
i thought u'd beat me last HW match, but big Q is beyond a disgrace
so yea i was feelin stupid.. everytime my fist went across his face..
nah, this is kind of an overused diss.
i'm the father figure of this text shit, give it up or go pound for pound
cuz i take time to raise kids.. let em go n laugh when he hits the ground
wordin seemed off, kinda eh
i'm sendin no love around, step out n i'll have to put him back in check
n if cupid his hands on me, i'll feel the desire n passion to break his neck
bit forced, still creative. 2nd half of the diss was decent
philly brick house kids too, but even Q spits just flow sick..
cuz he's put out alot since i came by with that eviction notice
aight, set ups jumbled, not a bad idea tho
now on to the bitches, n i'm sure he's never had a problem with chicks
but they all think ur a QT, which usually has a UI an ER in the mix
kinda clever wit the name stuff, just a bit forced
ya lines let u down when it counts, so here's a lesson for dude
cuz shit, even the lines in your palm says your destined to lose
eh, not a hard close



vs.

First of fuck records, im the more skilled when it comes down to it kid
Might have more points than me, but everyone one of em is poorly worded
was solid
Im absurd kid, your talents sliding n its just not getting any better
You might be able to rhyme sick...
...but you`ll struggle with any more than four letters
pretty cool
You gotta be well versed in audio right? n thats not just a guess son
You must have a solid grounding, coz your tracks dont leave an impression
cool
Youll need an army of help, so go round em up before you come to battle fool
And if you have to call your freinds here, its because you suck at text too
eh nah, just kinda fell off after that last line
I like rap, got love for cassidy so why is it that im not feeling that ya illy?
I feel sorry for the state of your rhymes...your a damn disgrace to philly
it's just too simple, and seems really forced, especially with the set up
Really i could own you in a flash, your ass, you aint a vet son
This battle takes you back to ya school days...
...way youve got no answer to the question
alright
Fucks with the custom title? we all got eyes to see for our self bitch
I mean how you just better, when no one ever noticed you were sick
didnt feel this so much
Your entire verse is trash from start to finish, it simply cant match mine
You aint the joke of the league, what kinda joke doesnt have a punchline
alright, not a hard diss
You wont shine, think your gon champ the league ya outta luk kid
Your king of the front lines, shame you got nothing to back em up with
eh close




i have ? winning. Overall his lines just came off cleaner, and his concepts were developed better. Philly was solid, and both had some poor lines, but I think Philly had a couple lines that were played and it brought down the overall quality of his verse. ? had some downpoints, but started pretty strong, and had a a couple lines after that to seal it.



vote- ?

[Vaskez]

3-2 (updated)

edit: ok, having registered, and with Com's agreement, john's vote counts

to avoid the situation where one outside voter comes in, votes for one guy, and we accept it cos he's respected, than another outside vote comes in, votes for the other guy, and we reject it, and where this makes us look biased, we introduced a rule that outside voters have to be approved in the external voters thread in the office. Therefore, your feedback is appreciated John, but until you're in the league or registered as an outside voter, I can't count it to be fair

[Tony B]

you punch weak as shit, so call me a bitch, w/e u say it's true
..but i'm sure this isn't the first time a bitch wouldn't go dwn on u
i thought u'd beat me last HW match, but big Q is beyond a disgrace
so yea i was feelin stupid.. everytime my fist went across his face..

vs

Im absurd kid, your talents sliding n its just not getting any better
You might be able to rhyme sick...
...but you`ll struggle with any more than four letters
You gotta be well versed in audio right? n thats not just a guess son
You must have a solid grounding, coz your tracks dont leave an impression


ok, the disgrace to philly line.....philly ain't a state soooo...lol
i barely quoted both of Q's lines. it's like, they're creative but it's like watching a fight between jackie chan n bruce lee. seems that Q has all the fancy hits n shit, but they just don't hit hard n sting like bruce lee's lol if that makes any sense. guess i just prefer philly's style more. good battle tho

v/ philly

[Qualm]

i'm sendin no love around, step out n i'll have to put him back in check
n if cupid his hands on me, i'll feel the desire n passion to break his neck
philly brick house kids too, but even Q spits just flow sick..
cuz he's put out alot since i came by with that eviction notice
ya lines let u down when it counts, so here's a lesson for dude
cuz shit, even the lines in your palm says your destined to lose

vs

First of fuck records, im the more skilled when it comes down to it kid
Might have more points than me, but everyone one of em is poorly worded
Im absurd kid, your talents sliding n its just not getting any better
You might be able to rhyme sick...
...but you`ll struggle with any more than four letters
Really i could own you in a flash, your ass, you aint a vet son
This battle takes you back to ya school days...
...way youve got no answer to the question
Your entire verse is trash from start to finish, it simply cant match mine
You aint the joke of the league, what kinda joke doesnt have a punchline

close, got ? taking it by one more bar. Q seemed to just have a bit more
about his verse. philly had some decent hits and some poor ones which could be said vice versa for q but I think when it come down to it he just had one more bar that i liked.

v/ ?

[J.Hens.]

edit, posted in chat. go ahead and delete this.