Funny Colors In My Magic Mushrooms - Will RTF!

[Soule]

rtf please?

[Orc]

Word what he said^.

[Compton.]

Lmao at the imagery overload in this piece, trippin' me out and shit... Lol. Words were conveyed real nice, with the whole laid back, yet trippy scene going on, the whole calmness of it all really made me want to read on, relaxed and all that. Nice job there...

Only criticism I can really give is the fact that it could have been longer. You had so many dope concepts in there I really think you should have just expanded onto it, piling in as many different themes as you possibly could... It's an overall solid poem otherwise.