...Strange, lol. Yeah, storyline was dope, the ending was unexpected which was refreshing, believe me. Some parts I had to re-read though because the flow was a little edgy, it wasn't off per say but it was just rough sounding or awkward. Imagery was cool, nothing overly vivid or anything - it was eerie though, sinister. However, the complexity of the plot more than made up for any technical mishaps/errors on the flow and the rhyme-scheme was different so yeah it was a dope drop man, keep it up. And feed my piece, thanks.