Open Collab - my verse already done

[Jonezy]

[SOUNDCLICK]6259580[/SOUNDCLICK]

still need some one on this

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6259580

record n send it to me

[Steeze XL]

Dude you got great emotion behind this which i really dig. The production quality can use some work you need to work on making your words clearer its hard to make out what your saying just pronounce them better. The bar count seems to be quite different for this song and is that a bridge after the second chorus for about 6 bars? I could make it work with a little apology speech and go into a 16 from bar 58 to 74. Who's the sample by and are you getting it cleared? Is the beat legal to use? I like it a lot not your usual boom boom clap i can playwith my flow. Tell the beatmaker to turn up the master volume let the levels max out or else it may play quiet in some stereo's etc... If you dump the Mp3 file into cool edit you can see the difference where your verse is and where open spots are. Good quality songs now days the levels are all maxed even before verses. But yea I'll throw a verse on this.

[Steeze XL]

The chorus is a part of the first verse by

Artist Name:

Smile Empty Soul

Song Title:

With This Knife

[®andom]

i'd kill this shit. PM me if you down.