The Blind & the Dead

[The Vortex]

The Blind & the Dead



False preachers are leeching the spirits of weakened beings
Mixing truth wit bullshit, - doctrines flipped for convenience
Speaking on the pulpit… a script fit for the pope written
A living joke wrote by a clergy -- prone to cokes sniffing
Satanic sermons result in these cults of pure negligence
Hence the tumult, - as sinful men insult your intelligence
Severing your pathway to YAWEH, grey cells decay to dust
Calling upon idols when they pray… then all Hell opens up
Weird prophecies; it costs to be saved, love just isn’t enough
Their policy is to get paid… plus the devil must get his cut

I’ve seen demonic bitches twitching - victimized by the vain
An obscene Masonic mistress is selling lies without shame
No one complains, since miracles appear to heal the lame
Religion steals the brain, so Baal worshippers feel restrained
Stained in poison, they remain chained to crazy superstitions
Faith is transfixed by insane tricks of these lewd magicians
We face fascination, patiently waiting for the fall of time
In a mindless nation - blinded by bloody symbols & signs
The werewolf wears lambs wool to fool all into coming close
A wise disguise, he hides treacherous tools beneath his coat





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[I Write...U Bite]

this one was sickening here on the multi's very good job on those...the emotion was very visible in this piece...didnt have to search for anything when it came to that...Imagery was good as well...it was a really moving attack on the facade of the religious figures who preach to the masses yet sit in secret with his devils in the night...great job here...fantastic drop...and props.

you stay up...im out

[Plan B.]

I have to agree with Nicest on this one. The emotion was indeed on point, as well as the concept and content. You also brought it out even more with the dope multi's and the imagery, feelin this piece hardbody, when you get a chance get at me for a collab fam.

Hopefully, you could get at my piece in my sig with feed also. You know us writers have to give critique together or all is lost, lmao.

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[NiNjah Red]

thanz 4 checkin it out

yea ill chek ya piece plan b later today hopefuly

[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

this was a nice short enjoyable read. your multis were on point and everything flowed in my head nicely. You used alot of imagery in a sense but in some lines it just didnt seem like enough. But through all that I didnt really get what this was about, I didnt get a grasp on the topic and that really killed the whole piece to me. I expected a little more so maybe a clarification can help

[The Vortex]

sorry skudz i cannot clarify the verse any more clearly than it already has been in the verse..IT'S PLAIN AS DAY,

Now are you blind, or dead?

[Jon]

wtf yo. why are you so good with the multies? it kills me.

anyhow, i like this read, it was short n sweet... it had a nice little meaning to it, but obviously who gives a fuck when it flows like water.. you're a good writer dude. need to collab after wop n ss.. and ie & lll.. rofl.. but yeah, good shit dude..

if you could hit my piece the big picture..

[Dayvid Aimz]

No one complains, since miracles appear to heal the lame
Religion steals the brain, so Baal worshippers feel restrained
Stained in poison, they remain chained to crazy superstitions
Faith is transfixed by insane tricks of these lewd magicians
.....I loved these lines they gave me the impression of some type of Televangelist reaching his hands out and "Healing" people.

these lines were also dope and eerie:

The werewolf wears lambs wool to fool all into coming close
A wise disguise, he hides treacherous tools beneath his coat


The part we're you're like "Wise disguise"....I just really love the way that sounds.....had alot of imagery and great multi's throughout this piece.






THANX FOR THE NICE READ.........holla.

[The Vortex]

yea thanx 4 da feeds ya'll


woot @ vincible seeing the picture of televangelists spitting they thang,. your eyes are open brother
f'assho

pz

[The Vortex]

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[The Vortex]

raise the dead

[Ink Poyzin]

wow dude some killer multi's. I don't understand why people are sleeping on this so much.. the emotion was deep. the imagery was okay.. you put some good use of vocabulary into action which proves alot. you didn't fail to keep a writer in shock.. even though this was short it was still dope. none-the-less one of my favorites.. so keep writing. stay active so I can read more from you dude.. people need to wake up on this board. really quit ignoring skills.. sorry for not droppin' some feed sooner but I've been tied up lately. just everywhere..

[Soul Slayer]

Speaking on the pulpit… a script fit for the pope written
A living joke wrote by a clergy -- prone to cokes sniffing
Satanic sermons result in these cults of pure negligence
Hence the tumult, - as sinful men insult your intelligence

This was what i would call a sweet en short piece. Sweet in the sense that it was a great read. The flow was there, wording was also on point. great multies by the way. you had great concepts in this piece man.

Keep up the marvellous work.