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    Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    The Devil's Masquerade

    (RB's Largest Cllaboration Ever!)



    Baron P. Mortuus:
    Welcome to the burlesque avenue- glad you
    could navigate via gondolas to sip my wine to
    sing a line of blues till sunrise & dine on bills
    of dollars & pounds astound at my skills
    to ground coffee out of a poor man’s labor
    worry not your hedonistic charm- my behavior
    is ironic- seeing I’m fickle & a hypocritical peer
    a sooth seer- I see a future of dreams so dear
    I tell you what you want- with a harmonic tongue
    a charlatan I make use of smoke, bones, lungs
    and concoct a potion- in reality a placebo
    but it keeps you mellow, to see the show- hello
    and welcome- come to the spectacle of the sage
    & behind him pleasure with the stripping masquerade



    Tim:

    Welcome To A Place
    shrouded from the sheepskin that seeps sin, i'm seeing
    perceiving the resistance, persistance keeps breathing
    reminding me of why i've made others blind to me
    designed a seed, to flourish only when it's right for me
    disaster's sight's on me, offensively, taking me back
    brain racked, and cherry-bombed completely off of the track
    retracting back in the shade, my luscious concrete glade
    is fine enough, though my feet are rough, still standing still in my grave
    this grave decision must be written, i know now the sun is smitten
    with anger, for it's day-child, snatched by a stranger and bitten
    seeing much stranger days than this, i quickly tightened my fist
    left the light to it's plight, and fell back to where i'm not missed
    i must admit, i felt pissed, cause even i was forced to orbit
    the bright light, sensitive sight, with no way to distort it
    implored it, "Helios, Please set me down!", commandeered by my faith
    though, the apparition, apparently, viewed me as the wraith
    i tasted enough, sat back, and felt the cool ground cuddle my skin
    befuddled by the irony, i felt my mind switch from cycle to spin
    with no way to end that which never began, shaded
    i felt forced to free myself,
    in the stripping masquerade finally, belated



    Twixn:
    Welcome to the Stripping masquerade
    where mask are made from the savage taste
    left on ur tongue after a bombing trace
    -ash half-laced with gun powder and mace
    its a strange occurrence this avenue
    of the mind, designed to ask you
    certain questions seldom respond true
    with lap dances and bonded youth
    to old single men, hoping not to die alone
    or right there, a heart attack postponed
    you can be right at home, or as far from it...
    depending on your soul and how the drum hits...
    some it pounds egos into torn flesh
    others are born again, wondering whats next
    a strong hand over cheap latex?
    undoing strings?
    or back here for more dances and that sting
    the man inside wishing for more... untrusting
    wishing for more than just sex, but love
    instead they mend dry blistered lips with blistex
    and pack money full to buy more hex's
    covering a thin layer over the soul with espestice



    Ratz:
    .. Welcome to a twisted, black display
    of cast away stars in the universe's vast domain!
    .. A masquerade; a waltz that never seems to end -
    Each perverted step basking in the reverie of sin!
    .. The melody ascends - Pasting layers of lies
    onto a seemingly blank canvas shading the shy,
    sapient mind beneath an eternal blanket of lust!
    .. Unknowing victims of desire's extraneous clutch -
    Once the curtains raise & the dust settles beneath
    the masquerader's trembling feet, Fear assembles the fleet
    & prepares to strip you bare of the streams
    of the ever-fraudulent viels tearing your dreams!
    .. Your first step in the grief filled abyss of conformity -
    In the corner, you can find your individual torn & beat!
    .. The end of the story's bleak - You continue to waltz
    growing accustomed to the mask's fitting facade ..



    Cry:
    welcome all to my masquerade, find if it's fact for fate
    but it's still for men to decide where I'm at today
    or where the money's payed... but its truth is dead
    pimps don't run the streets, we do it instead
    then to fill up their heads, our services bring 'em cash
    how much we bring, is just up to this thing and that
    they got us feinding crack, so we follow as trash...
    knowing - but not knowing where we're wallowing at
    crawling to macks, we weaken on every corner
    fighting the attacks like we were cleverly born hurt
    I'm a whore and a mother, but each side knows one
    and on each side, something still seems to grow up
    for rent my whoring's just, that dime will get it
    and my time is done after they've erected
    I'm pathetic, and as my mask never fails to cover
    on any halloween, my costume would pale to others



    Nomad:
    Welcome to hell...be amazed, take a look around
    Because the fact is that I already hooked you now
    So look about - and realize all of the human natures
    Get you some ass - because no one's going to save yours
    Take tours - get familiar since this is your home now
    ...try to leave and you'll hear how your bones sound
    You're alone, bound - this is where you'll stay eternally
    I've yearned to see you scream in pain while you burn for me
    I've earned your keep - so enjoy this celebration while it lasts
    Because hell begins when we're done and drop this pile of masks
    I'll smile and laugh - until the next forbidden soul joins us
    Then the stripping masquerade begins again to coin lust
    Forget about your skin...it will be burned to black and red
    Forget about your face...it will be covered with tracks of death
    Forget about your heart...it will rust and weather
    Forget about your life...it will rot in hell forever

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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    Kiss me through the camera lens.
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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    so that was the topic...

    whoever pm'ed me it forgot to mention the topic....

    i thought it was the stripping masquerade.

    haha.
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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    Yeah me too. I think Ledge titled it himself after he read it. Well let's get some feed, I know it's long but it's worth the read...

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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    lmao i think we all did, but its still dope tight pictures

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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    word if we get some fucking feed now.lol.
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    yep, we're crazy... world's largest collab and no body's reading it.



    it would be sick if we all did audio, then we'd be like the DJ Kahled of RB...
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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    RBs largest collab ever!..i expected a verse from LegendZ.

    too big to go through right away..


    I read the first 2 stanzas. I liked how both ended off with the same ...the stripping masquerade....rhyme pattern


    will add to it later.
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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    aight because this is SOOOO large...i wont break it down verse by verse ill just give a general opinion of their strong points...firstly i think you all did very well with staying on topic, with seven people writing that could have been hard to do yet you all executed that very well. The biggest eye catcher for me was how the verses varried and we were able to clearly see the different styles in each verse....Mortus had that poetic make you think type feel and i would say out of all of you...nomad's verse was the harshest and most emotional...it was a bit angry and attention grabbing. You all had good flow as well and i would have to say tim put it down in the department of multi execution...i think that cry best told a personal story...not of himself but of quickly creating a character and conveying said characters emotions and tribulations...ratz use of vocab conveyed a message of darkness, macabre and melancholy...twixn had a verse which was a bit carnal, making it seem like for some this is a bad place but for others its just what the doctor ordered and he put that across quite well...opus verse was all about tempo...he had short, quick-hitting lines that kept that going and kept you feeling his vocabulary and message through his verse...so i hope this is a good enough break down...congrats on a job well done and hope i didnt leave anyone out.

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    ^^would appreciate feed from all

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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    Yeah I'm sure we'll get to that man. Thanks for the feed...

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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    No. it's not Rb's longest collab ever.
    Always Impervious an Axis Power.


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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    What is?

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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    Uppin for feed.
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    Come on dudes.
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
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    Re: Grandeza Collective: The Devil's Masquerade

    this one was hot...i don't have time for the lengthy feed id like to leave so ill just try and get to it later for sure

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