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    Ēl Core De Carnage; [Mach and Morph]

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    black painted fingernails
    ...death stenches;
    fumigate the cuticles
    wrapping hands coincide
    at the necks of doves
    strangled to flyless limits;
    and a roadside view
    ...peircing the elegance with coke residue
    and years of boycotted hygiene


    the white cracked skin flimsy
    under years of blue collar discourse
    punching the clock and
    the day swims by again
    here's the filth pervading,
    here's the angst parading,
    the night comes so quick
    slaving inside all day

    Onyx horizons;
    Break a white moon…
    And the man upon it;
    Stumbles through the galaxy
    Into séance orbs
    lay to rest…
    Ēl core de carnage;


    a cavernous round
    climbs up through gravity
    the chamber it abandons
    vibrates smoke and twilight crime
    the young fledgling
    slinger sweats
    a thin layer of perspiration
    made oblique by the draining plasma
    he gasps
    for a moment looking like Romeo
    or Othello, or Hamlet, on the day
    they died too, but no fateless words
    escape his summerparched lips

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    Re: Ēl Core De Carnage; [Mach and Morph]

    yerp.

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    Re: Ēl Core De Carnage; [Mach and Morph]

    nice.

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    Re: Ēl Core De Carnage; [Mach and Morph]

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    Hit this link for me guys..
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-359668.html

    Alright, so other then the brilliant concept. Which wasn't HEAVILY complex, but not even close to basic. The piece was great. Your wordplay was really something that satisfied me. It was just so, unelementary and well done. Along with the flow which really fixiated onto my mind and tongue. I really liked it. Could follow perfectly. The imagery was really nice, and painted so many different sculptures into my mind that I felt as if I was at a museum or something similiar. The emotion was beautiful as well. Really felt like it connected with me. It upsets me to be the FIRST too feed this piece. But keep writing guys.

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