16 lines/Due midnight tonight.
Check.
16 lines/Due midnight tonight.
Check.
I scare my own nightmares, nigga
I cant make it tonight, my heads fucked up.. I wrote a verse for two tournies and an FL battle.. make this due tomorrow otherwise I wont accept. sorry
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Alright... We'll drop tomorrow. No worries, geeza.
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100 characters... Weird.
I scare my own nightmares, nigga
yeah, that's right, you're gonna get completely smashed, guy
everyone calls him dot2dot guy.... i just call him a fucking asswipe!
it'll happen in a bit, it's evident i'm gonna be consuming this hater
ya had to push the date back...... but ya going out sooner or later!
if you're lookin to catch a boot, i'll go ahead & cast ya verse!
but, yo, its obvious hes chasin, jus check the score afterwords-.
asoon as i take you to the cleaners, thats your fight lost
then i'll knock the black off your ass and make this a white wash
yeah, maybe you're strong, in the same sense you're risky
& if your punches can break awol, then i'm sorry you missed me!
for the whack verse ya drop, you can't fake clearin it
........ coz i'm just being honest, guy! you'll get 8, period!
dot's had gay rapists in n out of him more than gates of prisons...
& he couldnt make accrue, so he's lost interest in being successful
..pssh......... like it makes a diff'rence!
there's no seeing me, when you equiped a wrong view
& let's mention your winning streak, since i just stripped it from you
I scare my own nightmares, nigga
This is my 12th battle this week lol, My brains sore.
Check out those bitch slaps this fools tryna hit is with
theres no doubt Qiem's Ill, until I add on the iterate
Fuckin little prick, swear dude's just a waste of time
an artist with parkinsons could draw up straighter lines
punches'll break my face? nah, that wont happen fam
cos they couldnt disfigure if you battled an Action Man
you should of hatched a plan, to try and quit, clean
I know I asked for a deadline, but I didnt want another 15
faggity drag queen, look Qiem, you aint no fuckin thug
only time you run with heat is when you wear muscle rub
I'm just too fuckin good, yeah you best beleive it sucker
this battles nothing to me dude, and neither was ya mother
Thinks he's teaching me a lesson with that wack ass verse
he couldnt get hands up asking questions to a class of nerds
I love to bash on herbs,
and leave heads smashed on kerbs
^just keeping to the rules of 16<
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Aight - Let's get some votes. Good luck, dotty.
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I scare my own nightmares, nigga
seems that votes & decent battles are hard to come by everywhere on the internet these days. ugh.... depressing, to say the least....
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I scare my own nightmares, nigga
ill be optimistic and up this.
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I scare my own nightmares, nigga
stop sleepin.
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I scare my own nightmares, nigga
yeah, that's right, you're gonna get completely smashed, guy
everyone calls him dot2dot guy.... i just call him a fucking asswipe!
no
it'll happen in a bit, it's evident i'm gonna be consuming this hater
ya had to push the date back...... but ya going out sooner or later!
meh
if you're lookin to catch a boot, i'll go ahead & cast ya verse!
but, yo, its obvious hes chasin, jus check the score afterwords-.
lol, not bad.
asoon as i take you to the cleaners, thats your fight lost
then i'll knock the black off your ass and make this a white wash
hes not even black, yo.
yeah, maybe you're strong, in the same sense you're risky
& if your punches can break awol, then i'm sorry you missed me!
ok
for the whack verse ya drop, you can't fake clearin it
........ coz i'm just being honest, guy! you'll get 8, period!
no
dot's had gay rapists in n out of him more than gates of prisons...
& he couldnt make accrue, so he's lost interest in being successful
..pssh......... like it makes a diff'rence!
this line, no.
there's no seeing me, when you equiped a wrong view
& let's mention your winning streak, since i just stripped it from you
no.
Your shit had no punches, it was mostly statements. 1 quoatable.
vs.
Check out those bitch slaps this fools tryna hit is with
theres no doubt Qiem's Ill, until I add on the iterate
eh
Fuckin little prick, swear dude's just a waste of time
an artist with parkinsons could draw up straighter lines
not bad
punches'll break my face? nah, that wont happen fam
cos they couldnt disfigure if you battled an Action Man
aight
you should of hatched a plan, to try and quit, clean
I know I asked for a deadline, but I didnt want another 15
no
faggity drag queen, look Qiem, you aint no fuckin thug
only time you run with heat is when you wear muscle rub
no
I'm just too fuckin good, yeah you best beleive it sucker
this battles nothing to me dude, and neither was ya mother
nah
Thinks he's teaching me a lesson with that wack ass verse
he couldnt get hands up asking questions to a class of nerds
ehh.
this verse wasnt bad. it had a quoatable or two. You came direct tho.
v/ - ....... for coming more direct.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...se-359042.html
if you dont mind, thanks man.
yeah, that's right, you're gonna get completely smashed, guy
everyone calls him dot2dot guy.... i just call him a fucking asswipe!
no
it'll happen in a bit, it's evident i'm gonna be consuming this hater
ya had to push the date back...... but ya going out sooner or later!
meh,decent at most.
if you're lookin to catch a boot, i'll go ahead & cast ya verse!
but, yo, its obvious hes chasin, jus check the score afterwords-.
lol,best bar so far.
asoon as i take you to the cleaners, thats your fight lost
then i'll knock the black off your ass and make this a white wash
no,not even a personal.
yeah, maybe you're strong, in the same sense you're risky
& if your punches can break awol, then i'm sorry you missed me!
Decent.
for the whack verse ya drop, you can't fake clearin it
........ coz i'm just being honest, guy! you'll get 8, period!
naw.
dot's had gay rapists in n out of him more than gates of prisons...
& he couldnt make accrue, so he's lost interest in being successful
..pssh......... like it makes a diff'rence!
No.
there's no seeing me, when you equiped a wrong view
& let's mention your winning streak, since i just stripped it from you
no.
Very weak you need to come with better concepts and punches that hit more direct.
vs.
Check out those bitch slaps this fools tryna hit is with
theres no doubt Qiem's Ill, until I add on the iterate
Decent.
Fuckin little prick, swear dude's just a waste of time
an artist with parkinsons could draw up straighter lines
Decent,could of been better.
punches'll break my face? nah, that wont happen fam
cos they couldnt disfigure if you battled an Action Man
okay.
you should of hatched a plan, to try and quit, clean
I know I asked for a deadline, but I didnt want another 15
naw.
faggity drag queen, look Qiem, you aint no fuckin thug
only time you run with heat is when you wear muscle rub
no.
I'm just too fuckin good, yeah you best beleive it sucker
this battles nothing to me dude, and neither was ya mother
meh.
Thinks he's teaching me a lesson with that wack ass verse
he couldnt get hands up asking questions to a class of nerds
meh.
Solid verse from you it was enough to win still overall a weak battle in my eyes.
v/.......
Vote here please.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-358660.html
If you dont I will never vote on ya'll battles again.Seriously.
Kiss me through the camera lens.TNL
yeah, that's right, you're gonna get completely smashed, guy
everyone calls him dot2dot guy.... i just call him a fucking asswipe!
[no]
it'll happen in a bit, it's evident i'm gonna be consuming this hater
ya had to push the date back...... but ya going out sooner or later!
[meh]
if you're lookin to catch a boot, i'll go ahead & cast ya verse!
but, yo, its obvious hes chasin, jus check the score afterwords-.
[meh at best]
asoon as i take you to the cleaners, thats your fight lost
then i'll knock the black off your ass and make this a white wash
[no]
yeah, maybe you're strong, in the same sense you're risky
& if your punches can break awol, then i'm sorry you missed me!
[eh.. maybe]
for the whack verse ya drop, you can't fake clearin it
........ coz i'm just being honest, guy! you'll get 8, period!
[no]
dot's had gay rapists in n out of him more than gates of prisons...
& he couldnt make accrue, so he's lost interest in being successful
..pssh......... like it makes a diff'rence!
[blahhh n stretched]
there's no seeing me, when you equiped a wrong view
& let's mention your winning streak, since i just stripped it from you
[poor n played]
vs
Check out those bitch slaps this fools tryna hit is with
theres no doubt Qiem's Ill, until I add on the iterate
[no]
Fuckin little prick, swear dude's just a waste of time
an artist with parkinsons could draw up straighter lines
[good]
punches'll break my face? nah, that wont happen fam
cos they couldnt disfigure if you battled an Action Man
[hmm... wording is a little iffy.. cool concept]
you should of hatched a plan, to try and quit, clean
I know I asked for a deadline, but I didnt want another 15
[good flip, this concept has been done before though]
faggity drag queen, look Qiem, you aint no fuckin thug
only time you run with heat is when you wear muscle rub
[heh]
I'm just too fuckin good, yeah you best beleive it sucker
this battles nothing to me dude, and neither was ya mother
[blahh... played]
Thinks he's teaching me a lesson with that wack ass verse
he couldnt get hands up asking questions to a class of nerds
[blahh... week]
parkinsons n muscle rub line were pretty good, they took the battle
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