Behind The Lens [Fractured, Mariah, Quo And Tim]

[Pacino]

Behind the Lens
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In Order
Fractured
Mariah
Tim
Quo




I've always wanted to see, but behind the lens...

behind the lens my life is condemned
no further a blur, but floats within sense
and what if the lens brought me death
showed me something, but stole my breath
does happiness exist or is this life's best?

behind the lens is a true human
being the best he can to woman.
truth is he can't be the gentlemen
he wishes to be because he's sin
within a world of nightmare living'
just like her, he's also unforgiven
so he thinks to himself...
behind the lens.

I've always wanted to see, but behind the lens...

behind the lens - I try my defense
in hopes to stretch across the universal
hopes of an interpersonal fence.
I pause and look into the clause of
murder and herd love into a commercial mirage

behind the lens? I'm completely upset
for I know I'll regret living in suspense
with a sustained reason to tuck lame
treason into a chest and lock in a beacon
of light in the sky - away from the heathens

I've always wanted to see, but behind the lens...

behind the lens
Allusive movements fumbled inside a home
Escaped the turning sand pillar of blessed oath
Aerial souls in the air waiting for patient eyes
Songs of sky less heavens painted nice
temperature rises a phoenix with spiritual guidance
colored in colors that dissolve my own silence
Study my psychopathic regions till I suffocate
Sincere apologies sent into golden crushed plates.

I've always wanted to see, but behind the lens...

behind the lens the fog disappears
for once my eyesight becomes clear
often time's I’ve tried to see
but lost myself with relative ease
do i exist or is this all a dream ?

behind the lens my visions crept in
conceptions showed my past transgressions
as my head lifts into the heavens
tried to find myself but merely left him
is this real or are we simply guessing ?
i wonder....

behind the lense i'm always blind, struggling to see
where does it begin ? i try to find a path to the beat
of life that we trapped within,but its so dimly lit for me
i stumble to the end, is this really destiny ?
or fate, a twisted chance of hand, a path i haven't taken yet
should i live to take a stand or fall back with great regret
i squint so hard but the lense just won't let me see the next step

It's not as beautiful behind the lens.

[Pacino]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...nz-357860.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...xn-357783.html

[Pacino]

Budump.

[Cody Nash]

wow @ this being slept on. ps MUST be dead.




real nice collabo here... no real faults here... two rookies and two vets collide in this piece to make for a great read and showing the readers how well your styles all collide. I liked how this poetry had a consistant flow to it... and I loved how quo and tim stayed on the same track together towards the end. Mariah and Fractured did good for a beginning as well... the "behind the lens" concept has so many different directions and you guys took the indepth one describing the passion and greatness behind the lense. it was a really interesting read though, and I enjoyed it a lot.




feel like feeding on a piece then go hit mine and twix's freestyle poetry verse called "The People's Politics"... good read again guys. Nom'ed.

[Cody Nash]

upping this because when I commented it didn't up.

[Pacino]

wow, thanks a lot. And I'm sure that 'thanks' isn't just from me. But all the writers in this piece. Up.

[Dayvid Aimz]

nice piece as for as the writing goes....but the concept is so sketchy and illusive...were they talking about wanting to view something from the outside as outsiders.......why would that be so awe-inspiring......then at the end its like y'all changed y'all minds..

It's not as beautiful behind the lens.


the concept seemed sketchy and I feel that the writers were all in auto-pilot
just kinda rambling on to a subject that they weren't even sure of what it was.
pz...thats my honest opinion....someone would really have to explain to me what the topic was...before I could leave any positive feed on this.

Did y'all even know what y'all were talking about
it didn't stay on topic....each verse was incoherent with the next...