Paid Programming

[_Lyrics]

Welcome to paid programming..


I seen alot of commersial shit lately. so I thought i'd...

switch the channel, entertainment flipping pannels-
-4AM, you dont pay shipping to the same villian vandals..
Truth's ahead of waiting, rather be rude instead of patient.
& my tools demonstration?
Refused by the drug & food administration.
items that impress the best of all... wireless electrical
we buy the endings, the liars sending-expecting direct results.
your eyes in heaven, but expressionless, infected vegetables!
cables in shreds for shows,
that make me rip sections & reset the code..
I swear this shits a joke, telling what you should've done got..
Your hood with gunshots, turns to- you'll be good, with sunblock.
filling all mannors.. millions still, while flaws stand here
where meds kill & pause answers to diet pills that cause cancer
were running back to get stuck, sunk.. facts of a fucked bunch
gunning for quacks like duckhunts, stacks of bucks dumped..
to payback the advertisement, blades stab and stabbing violent
so stay back, you wont be able to take back our passing triumphs
the rapping clients, i'm the one that never had to buy it
fast to write it, and never sad relying with acting childish
and highjacking prices with schemes that seem to spare them
crossing toxin concoctions, then tell you to drink the 'serum'
thinking fear from a place thats grotesque, it's known best
I hold threats to anyone leaving me homeless with a bowflex
from the go get, notice a target, your own motives are prospect
and my opponents are products of your every component's composite
..frozen and frosted, cold as someone you can't rationally talk to
or I could make you feel estatic... that can actually shock you
while I dramatically walk through all of these wannabe's
that want to be fond of me, and cover it up by trying to copy me
like a bunch of poppy seeds, and im the top bun, the top gun
& I can still compliment the condiments, until it's all done
all crumbs, til theres not one..


Program ended
the amount due, 9.95
will be processed on your next cable bill
.....peace

[_Lyrics]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...om-357058.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...st-356517.html

[Boxin Mics]

damn this was pure dopeness.. your vocabulary brought
alot to this piece. and the flow was amazing. first to see
rap about this "paid programming" ish. truth is reading the
thread i didnt think this was gonna be dope at all...

"I hold threats to anyone leaving me homeless with a bowflex"

man that was my favorite.

keep on writin, man..
hopefully ill read more from you soon..

[Lauren.]

Wow this was better than I expected. Some parts were a little confusing, but I liked the underlying message. Your vocab in this piece was very good, and I liked how the structure changed a bit throughout the piece, but stayed easy to follow. You had a lot of good internal rhyming, and almost none of the rhymes seemed forced which is very hard to do. Overall this was a dope piece

[Morbid Dream]

This was pretty good. The flow was hot and the vocab was good too. There were some vocab flaws and the multis wrer sometimes forced, sometimes even not making sense. But it was still ok cos since you used the wrong words, i'm guessing intentionally, it was still clear what you meant. As for content..i guess it was clear you were speaking on topic but it was a bit vague sometimes.

Overall ..very good.

RTF

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...me-356811.html.

[_Lyrics]

upping this

[Man of Steel Man]

i thought this drop was cool and all that...as usual you had a good flow going with some nice multis and metas...your imagery was good in this one and it had some good emotion in it as well. It looked like you wer a bit tired with the bull crap they always try to convince you to buy just to get your money when they know 99 percent of that stuff just doesnt work...criminal really...anyway that was my take...liked it...kudos and cheers...out

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...rd-357446.html

^^^please hit that...hope its enjoyable

[Man of Steel Man]

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[Man of Steel Man]

i fed this one when the site was not functioning properly so it never made it to the top...so im putting it up there now...just thought id let it be known

[Floyd Powell]

Yo, this was ILL.. The topic is something new to me, too.
You rocked it nicely. Vocab, multis and imagery was on
point. The whole verse had a smooth flow to it. Yeah, you
definitely got skills. That's for sure. So, I enjoyed it.
Keep on writin' and elevatin'. This was ILL...

[Cody Nash]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...mr-357345.html
^Trace Boredom Feat. Mr.Write, feed that shit... it's long but it's been in the works for like a week or two.







bob, shit was awesome... been a while since i've read anything from you and this was definitely some dope shit. I enjoyed the entire read, flow seemed flawless... got a bit tounge tied to be honest. your style has changed a lot, and I like the new you. the whole concept of the piece was so original, you started and ended perfect. the picture went good with the piece too.. the whole thing's just so intricate and it makes you think about what you're reading... this stops you from getting a smoothe read, but it also benefits you if you want to read something that leaves a sensation in your way of thinking. it was good man... keep it up while I nominate the shit.

[_Lyrics]

upping
thanks nash, floyd, steel

[The Vortex]

yes i found this piece interesting, flow and vocab was nicee...
the whole perspective you took on the topic was most original.
had some cool wordplays as well. you did have some difficult word pairings though which threw me off a little bit here and there
most of your rhymes were pure dopeness for real though, sure wasnt on no basic shit at all, internals were hype and carried the lines very well
all in all a most entertaining joint

spark it up

pz1

[The Vortex]

yes i found this piece interesting, flow and vocab was nicee...
the whole perspective you took on the topic was most original.
had some cool wordplays as well. you did have some difficult word pairings though which threw me off a little bit here and there
most of your rhymes were pure dopeness for real though, sure wasnt on no basic shit at all, internals were hype and carried the lines very well
all in all a most entertaining joint

spark it up

pz1

[The Vortex]

yes i found this piece interesting, flow and vocab was nicee...
the whole perspective you took on the topic was most original.
had some cool wordplays as well. you did have some difficult word pairings though which threw me off a little bit here and there
most of your rhymes were pure dopeness for real though, sure wasnt on no basic shit at all, internals were hype and carried the lines very well
all in all a most entertaining joint

spark it up

pz1