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    Mikey B
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    Sanity Shift

    alright guys its been forever but im back so tell me wwut u think plz....thanks

    sanity shift.

    we live to hate the end
    yet we hunger from within
    to forget that we're condemened
    to finish what our past begins

    a lost soul inside
    dreams and destiny collide
    and then red eyed i lie in wait for the shift

    theres a needle in the haystack, a plague in her smile
    the memories i begin to see soothe me for a while

    and then it shifts!!!!!!

    caged insanity!
    temptation begins demanding me
    to lend my thoughtless apathy
    to those corrupt that dont do crap for me

    I hope the shift comes soon!!

    Because i dont know how to turn to ash
    this hell that burns within my past
    from first to last......
    as the shift begins I search for sanity to grasp..

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    Written Voices Jon's Avatar
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    Re: Sanity Shift

    eh, awkward.

    havent seen you in forever.. but i guess you could make a comeback, you got lots of work to do.. i didn't really like this piece because you tried to do something that would have been a good idea, have this piece been more thoughtout.. nice try though.. keep writing.
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