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    From My Heart to Yours

    From My Heart to Yours
    November 14, 2007

    O, how I tremble to find speech sufficient
    To express this fire that rages within me
    I dare not call it love, for it was love at first sight
    And since that initial glance it has grown beyond words
    Ye, even the language of the Gods could not justly express
    This feeling that overwhelms my mind, heart, body and soul
    With most omniscient power and devotion, yet
    Like the Universe it knows not bounds
    For it expands and grows endless
    In your presence and absence both
    Untainted by the human condition
    It stands immortal and eternal
    Fearless in the eyes of folly

    Estoy locamente enamorado de ti
    If there was an asylum for such insanity
    I would surely dwell therein
    Trapped from your love?
    Nay, these are but feeble attempts
    For there is no such wall
    On Earth nor in Heaven
    With the strength or pinnacle
    To keep my heart from yours
    Or yours from mine

    Thou art living testimony of Gods divinity
    For only he could personify all the virtues and beauty’s
    In your silhouette; angels are but prototypes in your comparison
    Sight of your smile triumph’s over Life’s most atrocious tyrants
    And conquers its vile corruption
    Thou art everything wonderful and pleasant;
    As pure as the First Garden
    As chaste as Penelope
    Thy beauty puts Helen’s to shame in assessment
    So unbelievably so, I often doubt my eyes deceive me
    Nevertheless, I am besieged by righteous rapture and delight
    ‘This is heaven, nor am I out of it’
    For even the topless Tower of Babylon was out of Heavens reach
    But where thou art is Heaven
    And where I shall be
    Por siempre

    By: Chris Mitchell

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    Re: From My Heart to Yours

    very solid and emotional piece. and amazing usage of vocabulary.
    the read was great, but i got stuck on a couple of words, lol. but
    thank god for AOL's dictionary, lol.

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    This feeling that overwhelms my mind, heart, body and soul
    With most omniscient power and devotion, yet
    Like the Universe it knows not bounds
    For it expands and grows endless
    In your presence and absence both
    -------------------------------------------------------------
    ^very dope and worded nicely.

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    For only he could personify all the virtues and beauty’s
    In your silhouette; angels are but prototypes in your comparison
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    ^this is just a very beautiful part of the piece.
    the wording and shit made it real solid.


    thanks for the read, man, cuz it really was worth it.
    keep up the good work and im sure ill be sticking around to
    read more from you. so, until than, peace out.

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