HotDogVendorMan (1-1) vs. Kenny the G (1-1)

[SmokaJoka]

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Verses due Friday 11:59pm PST
Voting Ends Sunday 11:59pm EST
must vote on 5 battles and LEAVE LINKS
Swaying or feeding = Vote deduction

[Kenny the G]

check.

coward yur living for nothin, yur as stupid as you are ugly
i'd say Takistan..but you'd probably think its a foreign country
im on easy street, peep the different directions we've gone
YOU'RE the beaten path, after havin ya entrails stepped on
ven stretches lines w/ those 'I explain everything' drops
he'll tell it in detail, cuz thats where his broke style's in the shop
at best yur poor, so what really makes u think yur the shit
if you've been dubbed king, quality's worse than 70s kung fu flicks
u should wish me luck while ya under my level, are u understanding?
if i fall off, by the time u look up you've already cushioned my landing
yur dedicated, gifted, and smart, plus ya family's proud of you
sorry for filling u w/ hope, i just needed more shit to kick outta u
yur a talking head, nothing more, i bet its expensive to be it
ghostwriters cost an arm n a leg, no wonder yur a parapalegic
alienating an amateur as i alliterate rhymes
if u had a litter rate, its low cuz you recycle ya lines
we could trade blows, but why?, you come stocked w/ a target
so much blood in the street, the value decreased, u flooded the market

[Deon]

wtf? check. this nigga was too amped for a battle

[Kenny the G]

actually i was just bored an felt like keying somethin, what?...u gonna wait til the last minute?

[Sobe]

lmao this dude prewrote some shit

[Kenny the G]

which is exactly what hotdogs doing. so whats yur point?

w/e guy.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-1-356724.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-1-356723.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-l-356718.html

[Deon]

nah actually im no showing this week. i had a ton of shit to do & couldnt write.

ima stay in for next week tho

EDIT

i'll try n get a verse up, but like i said maad busy so more than likely aint showin.

[Deon]

downhill kenny

see ugly runs in ya family, so aint no way this kids livin swell
when his moms so BUSTED..she wakes up in a gta prison cell
she's never really had much, them ragedy clothes she worem good
she's so use to falling on hard times..when I wake up wit mornin wood
my clicks a buncha animals, i'll call the hit n' pain u'll feel plenty
& it'll be like a southpark marathon how ur fam keeps screamin 'omg they killed kenny'
dig me? as the season progresses, its clear ur dead b4 ya even begin
so next weeks tag will go PERFECT with the body bag im leavin him in
you drop it the worst, so why even say K & HD's the same
when I'd NEVER let a verse sit that long w/o the obvious mistakes bein changed
we're levels a part, so hold ur horses, cuz kid i'm takin the saddle
shit every week I try to get better..too bad I'm not the one makin the battles
I even hung the strobe n the room when ya chick was screwin me soldier
man that was a flashin lights beat that kanye west woulda sued me over
i cant even appologize..he's sittin back like dudes smashin my bitch
shit the insurance companies would DIE for the intrest rate she has in my dick
my fists are bell ringers, they swing & prove i'm ahead wit skills
& even the stars around ur head'll align n' shine brighter than u ever will

bleh. keyed. ima stay for next week like i said.

[Chrit.]

see ugly runs in ya family, so aint no way this kids livin swell
when his moms so BUSTED..she wakes up in a gta prison cell
dig me? as the season progresses, its clear ur dead b4 ya even begin
so next weeks tag will go PERFECT with the body bag im leavin him in

vs

yur dedicated, gifted, and smart, plus ya family's proud of you
sorry for filling u w/ hope, i just needed more shit to kick outta u

kenny came horrid

v/HVM

[Born To Kill]

coward yur living for nothin, yur as stupid as you are ugly
i'd say Takistan..but you'd probably think its a foreign country
Haha...nice...
im on easy street, peep the different directions we've gone
YOU'RE the beaten path, after havin ya entrails stepped on
I get it...but no...wordings off...
ven stretches lines w/ those 'I explain everything' drops
he'll tell it in detail, cuz thats where his broke style's in the shop
Again...yeah, but no...
at best yur poor, so what really makes u think yur the shit
if you've been dubbed king, quality's worse than 70s kung fu flicks
Eh...
u should wish me luck while ya under my level, are u understanding?
if i fall off, by the time u look up you've already cushioned my landing
Seen this concept tons of times...and tons better...
What happened? You opened up on fire.
yur dedicated, gifted, and smart, plus ya family's proud of you
sorry for filling u w/ hope, i just needed more shit to kick outta u
Haha...better...
yur a talking head, nothing more, i bet its expensive to be it
ghostwriters cost an arm n a leg, no wonder yur a parapalegic
Eh...not so much...
alienating an amateur as i alliterate rhymes
if u had a litter rate, its low cuz you recycle ya lines
No...
we could trade blows, but why?, you come stocked w/ a target
so much blood in the street, the value decreased, u flooded the market
No, no, no...

VS

see ugly runs in ya family, so aint no way this kids livin swell
when his moms so BUSTED..she wakes up in a gta prison cell
Eh...
she's never really had much, them ragedy clothes she worem good
she's so use to falling on hard times..when I wake up wit mornin wood
Ha...
my clicks a buncha animals, i'll call the hit n' pain u'll feel plenty
& it'll be like a southpark marathon how ur fam keeps screamin 'omg they killed kenny'
No...
dig me? as the season progresses, its clear ur dead b4 ya even begin
so next weeks tag will go PERFECT with the body bag im leavin him in
Eh...ok...
you drop it the worst, so why even say K & HD's the same
when I'd NEVER let a verse sit that long w/o the obvious mistakes bein changed
Hahaha...
we're levels a part, so hold ur horses, cuz kid i'm takin the saddle
shit every week I try to get better..too bad I'm not the one makin the battles
Haha...
I even hung the strobe n the room when ya chick was screwin me soldier
man that was a flashin lights beat that kanye west woulda sued me over
Whatever...
i cant even appologize..he's sittin back like dudes smashin my bitch
shit the insurance companies would DIE for the intrest rate she has in my dick
Hahaha...get off the girl topic, but still...good...
my fists are bell ringers, they swing & prove i'm ahead wit skills
& even the stars around ur head'll align n' shine brighter than u ever will
Eh...ok-ish, at best...

Pretty one-sided, I'd say...

Vote: Hot Dog

[Jacent.]

dig me? as the season progresses, its clear ur dead b4 ya even begin
so next weeks tag will go PERFECT with the body bag im leavin him in

deon, come on son, with them stretched ass lines, lookin like yo midsection jk, idk, ur verse was aight but i can see where ur comin from bein busy but it still beat kenny's verse, kenny's hope line was his best, but other than that, it was kinda shitty, oh well, v/ deon

[Blue Bayou]

yur dedicated, gifted, and smart, plus ya family's proud of you
sorry for filling u w/ hope, i just needed more shit to kick outta u

vs.

see ugly runs in ya family, so aint no way this kids livin swell
when his moms so BUSTED..she wakes up in a gta prison cell
dig me? as the season progresses, its clear ur dead b4 ya even begin
so next weeks tag will go PERFECT with the body bag im leavin him in
you drop it the worst, so why even say K & HD's the same
when I'd NEVER let a verse sit that long w/o the obvious mistakes bein changed

cool battle.. Kenny had a couple alright concepts (entrails, detail) but i've seen them done before and more effectivly imo, deon came pretty cool.. a couple complete misses i felt but def. had some good stuff in there..props to both but Deon took it

Vote - HDVM.

[Dunk.]

yur dedicated, gifted, and smart, plus ya family's proud of you
sorry for filling u w/ hope, i just needed more shit to kick outta u

vs

see ugly runs in ya family, so aint no way this kids livin swell
when his moms so BUSTED..she wakes up in a gta prison cell.
dig me? as the season progresses, its clear ur dead b4 ya even begin
so next weeks tag will go PERFECT with the body bag im leavin him in
you drop it the worst, so why even say K & HD's the same
when I'd NEVER let a verse sit that long w/o the obvious mistakes bein changed
i cant even appologize..he's sittin back like dudes smashin my bitch
shit the insurance companies would DIE for the intrest rate she has in my dick

eh kenny come wack this weak. Hotdog had some nice concepts and the line about correcting mistakes pretty much killed it. Kennys concepts were kinda bland and yeah just a boring verse from him with no harsh punches.

Vote - HOTDOGVENDORMAN

[Registered]

HDVM Shat On this battle.

see ugly runs in ya family, so aint no way this kids livin swell
when his moms so BUSTED..she wakes up in a gta prison cell

^ that shit was mutherfuckin Hilarious
.. some might not feel it, but i died.
Kenny just seemed a bit too simplistic with his disses,
no thought evoked or even provoked for that matter.
no real ROFL lines. this was a pretty one sided battle.

[Philly®]

hdvm win -5 votes for no links

making him win 1-0