A short written...all criticism will be appreciated...leave links to your work.
LITERAL DESTINIES
Speaking to the Body:
Flesh is weak and unsubstantial
You move in ways that are so mysterious
en vogue or out vogue, Let's Go
to a place of new and old Roles
Masculinity stripped bare, Lives here (inside me)
the animus/anima XXXtraordinair...
Prophecy and disregard you Inflitrate
this vulnerable Gaurd and you make me HARD
as only you Can
The soul snatches the mic...and talks to body...
...its never appeasing when I tell it to you...you're beautiful
Ideologies we sell in the youth breed self-destruction
they die so young the skeletons move
they forgot life is different from the Afterlife
fantasies of a Magic type leave me mad @ Times
Cause see, euphoria is the current Benchmark
but I can't evoke half that with My rhymes
my cousin said study the Greats
now I'm unconventional as T.S. eliot
I never say what they want me to Say.
The Mind opens up and lurches out:
This is where writer's Block gets thrown down
grab your pen body put lyrics under control now
in my concentration Camp's devising Mechanism
but these jesters act as if they never Witnessed
POLY-syllabism my body of work has adopted
cysts and Schisms plagiarists are no longer living...
(My body was once so beautiful and lively)...despite me
and all the dissassociative disorders screaming inside me
none will be forgiven if my opus was before you
I'd blaspheme in it so it'd never be God-Like
It would be hedonistic and God-Awful
Eulogy of mynd,body,soul Trinity:
Searching for my perfect rhyme I'll expand the quest
Till air pollutes and no longer Expands this bodies chest
We were all 3 born to live but literally destined for DEATH....
Rest in Peace...(circa genesis-12-29-2007)
my links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...es-356529.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...nd-356086.html