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    My Life In Da Hood

    yeah, dis Don Jay, dis song is jus Don Jay. nuthin else man. lol. lets go.

    Chorus

    i was supposed to be da one u luv/
    but instead u actin so histrung/
    i was supposed to be da one u luv/
    i guess dis da reason i chose to smoke drugs/

    yea, in da bathroom, fan on/
    continue to stand strong/
    but lemme see, lemme get my light/
    put this to my lips n' breathe in... iight/
    now i'm hi/
    pupils shakin or its jus my brain n/
    i got da munchies, tummy, achin, i got that, flavor/
    like da 2 Live Crew, me so horny/
    i hope one of my ladie friends calls me/
    in dis state u adore me/
    but before i wud draw, in da bacc off da class, u wud ignore me/
    now i'm in da bacc of her ass, got her moanin!!!/
    its Don Jay, blowin up/
    like a elevator goin up/
    i tell dem hatas to show they nuts/
    but no homo, they actin like bitches, but we aint gonna catfight/
    i'd lette let a mac light/
    now u layin flat like u in a yoga class, iight/

    Chorus

    Damn, i'm fucced up, Lord help me.....

    yeah, this is me wit anotha blast/
    me n ya bitch, but 4 me anotha ass/
    they say we degrade women/
    bitches n hoes how we name women/
    but me... i aint got time 4 lame women/
    cuz theres allot tryna get wit me/
    i wud hop on em like a bunny instead of u wreccin me/
    but imma playboy bunny, money n get breads my only recipe/
    cuz like Snoop said when u broke u break/
    now dis chronic makin me choke n ache/
    niggas call me Loc n ace/
    dis is da life i choose ta live/
    same way Hughe Hefner carefully choose a bitch/
    u gonna lose, i win/
    a blood pool, u in/
    okay, so i cruise wit friends/
    dis aint gonna stop no time soon/
    not wit dat Cowboy shit, but imma ride till high noon/

    Chorus

    fly shit, my shit, who elses/
    u tell me/
    u think u can take me to a higher level/
    but nah, i dont need guidance, imma settle/
    nigga.. i'm so ready/
    got u rite on my target/
    anotha fake ass rap artist/
    marcs hit wit gloccs and, swept unda carpets/

    Chorus

    who else bitch?

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    Re: My Life In Da Hood

    This was okayy...you're writing skills are definitely getting better...I'll acknowledge that if no one else will.....
    Looks like u actually tried adding some structure to this rhyme
    is it me?....or do newbies love talking bout getting high....
    i mean rb period just loves dropping get high songs and shit...
    I need to hook up and just smoke down a pound of grass with one of y'all niggas..lol...

    but n-e-ways....

    i'll give this a 6.5/10.....
    this rhyme showed alot of improvement from your other drops
    i think you have alot of potential...kepp writing

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