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what up com
let's go 16
Last edited by John Hensley; December 18th, 2007 at 04:28 AM
don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footsteps on the moon
yeah 16 sounds good
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I went 14
Your third shot at this league and I'm starting to believe you can't hack it
You see god loves a tryer.... but he also hates the wack faggots
So can this hack crack it? his family's fucked up and crude
Don't think you wanna up the ante, coz we know she's a dude
We ain't got time for you hens... why'd you choose Kung to defend?
Bitch you didn't even agree with him,,, you just wanted a friend
You're wack don't pretend, bitch you're like ya mom when she made ya..
....you're young, free and healthy...and on the nuts of a stranger
Now I'm maiming this inbred, you fucking nerd I ain't bluffin'
Coz John relates to his girl... in other words it's his cousin
This bitch is runnin' his times out, in this rhyme bout his shine's gone
And on the back of that performance... is where I'm ripping his spine from
Ya primes gone, styles are different..the voters suck, they're defeatist..
...are the excuses you've been storing for when you faced someone decent
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I'm comin at you COM....
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You know me. we beefed, n' it was some amusin' shit son.Originally Posted by COM
But if THAT'S ur reasoning. what the fuck's ur excuse for losin' THIS one.
Told Kung to go back to his riders, then got more than just clowned.
But minus Vaskez, it's clear to us all you just wished YOURS were around.
You're decent, but you're fanclub shows u fake appeal.
Sucha middle-of-the-road style i suggest askin the passenger to take the wheel.
You might have a girl, but i really don't believe you ball.
Besides, fuck fighting... ya bitch's pussy gives a new meaning to free for all
I left ya bitch breathless. no, i didn't need CPR to manage the rest.
But i DID have her on her back, mouth-to-mouth with both hands on her chest.
You think you're still top 5, haha, i think this bastard is crazy.
Parachute designers use ur skill's decline to test the limit for maximum safety.
U wanna be compared to $pit. i'm gettin to this cat's fear.
But explain how HE takes a layoff.
... and stilllll outshines everything you've written in the past year....
pzzzzzzz
don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footsteps on the moon
Your third shot at this league and I'm starting to believe you can't hack it
You see god loves a tryer.... but he also hates the wack faggots
eh, not really hard.
So can this hack crack it? his family's fucked up and crude
Don't think you wanna up the ante, coz we know she's a dude
haha. decent.
We ain't got time for you hens... why'd you choose Kung to defend?
Bitch you didn't even agree with him,,, you just wanted a friend
I remember that day lol. this is ok too.
You're wack don't pretend, bitch you're like ya mom when she made ya..
....you're young, free and healthy...and on the nuts of a stranger
nope.
Now I'm maiming this inbred, you fucking nerd I ain't bluffin'
Coz John relates to his girl... in other words it's his cousin
think I've seen, but I guess it's decent.
This bitch is runnin' his times out, in this rhyme bout his shine's gone
And on the back of that performance... is where I'm ripping his spine from
decent.
Ya primes gone, styles are different..the voters suck, they're defeatist..
...are the excuses you've been storing for when you faced someone decent
cool.
Overall, the verse was decent. You had a couple cool hits, but pretty much, it wasn't as solid as your usual stuff is, just decent.
vs.
You know me. we beefed, n' it was some amusin' shit son.
But if THAT'S ur reasoning. what the fuck's ur excuse for losin' THIS one.
decent personal.
Told Kung to go back to his riders, then got more than just clowned.
But minus Vaskez, it's clear to us all you just wished YOURS were around.
nope.
You're decent, but you're fanclub shows u fake appeal.
Sucha middle-of-the-road style i suggest askin the passenger to take the wheel.
eh, not really.
You might have a girl, but i really don't believe you ball.
Besides, fuck fighting... ya bitch's pussy gives a new meaning to free for all
haha I'm sure it's been used, but it's decent.
I left ya bitch breathless. no, i didn't need CPR to manage the rest.
But i DID have her on her back, mouth-to-mouth with both hands on her chest.
nope.
You think you're still top 5, haha, i think this bastard is crazy.
Parachute designers use ur skill's decline to test the limit for maximum safety.
haha. cool.
U wanna be compared to $pit. i'm gettin to this cat's fear.
But explain how HE takes a layoff.
... and stilllll outshines everything you've written in the past year....
decent.
Well, this wasn't your best either, seemed you didn't try hard enough after seeing his verse. Anyways, decent verse from you too.
I'm gonna give this one to COM, sorry John, he seemd a bit more consistent. And btw I get all of your guys' punches.
v/COM
Wu-Tang Forever
Nothing Was The Same
Your third shot at this league and I'm starting to believe you can't hack it
You see god loves a tryer.... but he also hates the wack faggots
No...
So can this hack crack it? his family's fucked up and crude
Don't think you wanna up the ante, coz we know she's a dude
Funny, but not at him...
We ain't got time for you hens... why'd you choose Kung to defend?
Bitch you didn't even agree with him,,, you just wanted a friend
Nice-ish...
You're wack don't pretend, bitch you're like ya mom when she made ya..
....you're young, free and healthy...and on the nuts of a stranger
Again, nice...
Now I'm maiming this inbred, you fucking nerd I ain't bluffin'
Coz John relates to his girl... in other words it's his cousin
No, seen the concept too much...
This bitch is runnin' his times out, in this rhyme bout his shine's gone
And on the back of that performance... is where I'm ripping his spine from
Eh...ok-ish...
Ya primes gone, styles are different..the voters suck, they're defeatist..
...are the excuses you've been storing for when you faced someone decent
Nice closer...
VS
You know me. we beefed, n' it was some amusin' shit son.
But if THAT'S ur reasoning. what the fuck's ur excuse for losin' THIS one.
Good opener...
Told Kung to go back to his riders, then got more than just clowned.
But minus Vaskez, it's clear to us all you just wished YOURS were around.
Eh-ish...
You're decent, but you're fanclub shows u fake appeal.
Sucha middle-of-the-road style i suggest askin the passenger to take the wheel.
"You suggest"? Not so hot wording...concept only eh in itself...
You might have a girl, but i really don't believe you ball.
Besides, fuck fighting... ya bitch's pussy gives a new meaning to free for all
Funny...nice...
I left ya bitch breathless. no, i didn't need CPR to manage the rest.
But i DID have her on her back, mouth-to-mouth with both hands on her chest.
Clever...
You think you're still top 5, haha, i think this bastard is crazy.
Parachute designers use ur skill's decline to test the limit for maximum safety.
Blah...
U wanna be compared to $pit. i'm gettin to this cat's fear.
But explain how HE takes a layoff.
... and stilllll outshines everything you've written in the past year....
Eh...statementy...
I'm thinking Com wins...by a crazy close margin.
Your third shot at this league and I'm starting to believe you can't hack it
You see god loves a tryer.... but he also hates the wack faggots
Wack
So can this hack crack it? his family's fucked up and crude
Don't think you wanna up the ante, coz we know she's a dude
Ehh...kinda corny man..you should've known when you wrote this
We ain't got time for you hens... why'd you choose Kung to defend?
Bitch you didn't even agree with him,,, you just wanted a friend
Alright I suppose...
You're wack don't pretend, bitch you're like ya mom when she made ya..
....you're young, free and healthy...and on the nuts of a stranger
Ha...coo
Now I'm maiming this inbred, you fucking nerd I ain't bluffin'
Coz John relates to his girl... in other words it's his cousin
Blah..wack
This bitch is runnin' his times out, in this rhyme bout his shine's gone
And on the back of that performance... is where I'm ripping his spine from
No
Ya primes gone, styles are different..the voters suck, they're defeatist..
...are the excuses you've been storing for when you faced someone decent
If this was Chrit I'd agree with this line
vs.
You know me. we beefed, n' it was some amusin' shit son.
But if THAT'S ur reasoning. what the fuck's ur excuse for losin' THIS one.
Ehh...alright opening
Told Kung to go back to his riders, then got more than just clowned.
But minus Vaskez, it's clear to us all you just wished YOURS were around.
same as above minus 'opening'
You're decent, but you're fanclub shows u fake appeal.
Sucha middle-of-the-road style i suggest askin the passenger to take the wheel.
Blah..no
You might have a girl, but i really don't believe you ball.
Besides, fuck fighting... ya bitch's pussy gives a new meaning to free for all
Pretty good
I left ya bitch breathless. no, i didn't need CPR to manage the rest.
But i DID have her on her back, mouth-to-mouth with both hands on her chest.
Coo, but two disses to his chick in a row is meh
You think you're still top 5, haha, i think this bastard is crazy.
Parachute designers use ur skill's decline to test the limit for maximum safety.
Good
U wanna be compared to $pit. i'm gettin to this cat's fear.
But explain how HE takes a layoff.
... and stilllll outshines everything you've written in the past year....
Ok
Com had the best line but he also had more lines that sucked....Hens was more consistent....I'll re-read and edit a vote in soon
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Your third shot at this league and I'm starting to believe you can't hack it
You see god loves a tryer.... but he also hates the wack faggots
NAH
So can this hack crack it? his family's fucked up and crude
Don't think you wanna up the ante, coz we know she's a dude
PLAYED, CORNY
We ain't got time for you hens... why'd you choose Kung to defend?
Bitch you didn't even agree with him,,, you just wanted a friend
DECENT
You're wack don't pretend, bitch you're like ya mom when she made ya..
....you're young, free and healthy...and on the nuts of a stranger
LOL
Now I'm maiming this inbred, you fucking nerd I ain't bluffin'
Coz John relates to his girl... in other words it's his cousin
NOT BAD
This bitch is runnin' his times out, in this rhyme bout his shine's gone
And on the back of that performance... is where I'm ripping his spine from
NAH
Ya primes gone, styles are different..the voters suck, they're defeatist..
...are the excuses you've been storing for when you faced someone decent
OK
vs
You know me. we beefed, n' it was some amusin' shit son.
But if THAT'S ur reasoning. what the fuck's ur excuse for losin' THIS one.
NAH
Told Kung to go back to his riders, then got more than just clowned.
But minus Vaskez, it's clear to us all you just wished YOURS were around.
OK
You're decent, but you're fanclub shows u fake appeal.
Sucha middle-of-the-road style i suggest askin the passenger to take the wheel.
NAH
You might have a girl, but i really don't believe you ball.
Besides, fuck fighting... ya bitch's pussy gives a new meaning to free for all
NO
I left ya bitch breathless. no, i didn't need CPR to manage the rest.
But i DID have her on her back, mouth-to-mouth with both hands on her chest.
HEH, COOL
You think you're still top 5, haha, i think this bastard is crazy.
Parachute designers use ur skill's decline to test the limit for maximum safety.
NICE
U wanna be compared to $pit. i'm gettin to this cat's fear.
But explain how HE takes a layoff.
... and stilllll outshines everything you've written in the past year....
PRETTY STRAIGHT, BUT DIRECT
I THINK HENS HAD A FEW HARDER HITS THAN COM, BELOW PAR VERSES FROM BOTH THOUGH, COM I THINK NEED TO TAKE YOUR OWN ADVISE MATE
A.I
Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
Your third shot at this league and I'm starting to believe you can't hack it
You see god loves a tryer.... but he also hates the wack faggots
..no.
So can this hack crack it? his family's fucked up and crude
Don't think you wanna up the ante, coz we know she's a dude
decent
We ain't got time for you hens... why'd you choose Kung to defend?
Bitch you didn't even agree with him,,, you just wanted a friend
ok
You're wack don't pretend, bitch you're like ya mom when she made ya..
....you're young, free and healthy...and on the nuts of a stranger
Dope.
Now I'm maiming this inbred, you fucking nerd I ain't bluffin'
Coz John relates to his girl... in other words it's his cousin
Used..but ok
This bitch is runnin' his times out, in this rhyme bout his shine's gone
And on the back of that performance... is where I'm ripping his spine from
bad wording.
Ya primes gone, styles are different..the voters suck, they're defeatist..
...are the excuses you've been storing for when you faced someone decent
Decent
vs
You know me. we beefed, n' it was some amusin' shit son.
But if THAT'S ur reasoning. what the fuck's ur excuse for losin' THIS one.
nah
Told Kung to go back to his riders, then got more than just clowned.
But minus Vaskez, it's clear to us all you just wished YOURS were around.
iight
You're decent, but you're fanclub shows u fake appeal.
Sucha middle-of-the-road style i suggest askin the passenger to take the wheel.
nah
You might have a girl, but i really don't believe you ball.
Besides, fuck fighting... ya bitch's pussy gives a new meaning to free for all
decent
I left ya bitch breathless. no, i didn't need CPR to manage the rest.
But i DID have her on her back, mouth-to-mouth with both hands on her chest.
ok
You think you're still top 5, haha, i think this bastard is crazy.
Parachute designers use ur skill's decline to test the limit for maximum safety.
dope
U wanna be compared to $pit. i'm gettin to this cat's fear.
But explain how HE takes a layoff.
... and stilllll outshines everything you've written in the past year....
egh
Not a really dope battle. Should've been. Both had one dope line a peice IMO. *edit* actually I've changed my mind about that Middle of the road punch. That changes the demographics. Vote com..battle still should've been better
V/Com
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
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aint seen too much else worth voting on on this fine saturday afternoon...
Your third shot at this league and I'm starting to believe you can't hack it
You see god loves a tryer.... but he also hates the wack faggots
^^nah this lacked wit in my view
So can this hack crack it? his family's fucked up and crude
Don't think you wanna up the ante, coz we know she's a dude
^^aight
We ain't got time for you hens... why'd you choose Kung to defend?
Bitch you didn't even agree with him,,, you just wanted a friend
^^coulda done so much more with this, dude, in the end it just kinda petered out...
You're wack don't pretend, bitch you're like ya mom when she made ya..
....you're young, free and healthy...and on the nuts of a stranger
^^better, lol
Now I'm maiming this inbred, you fucking nerd I ain't bluffin'
Coz John relates to his girl... in other words it's his cousin
^^too predictable to me since you even said inbred in the setup, needed more of a misdirection
This bitch is runnin' his times out, in this rhyme bout his shine's gone
And on the back of that performance... is where I'm ripping his spine from
^^yaeh ok back/spine, but back of that performance makes no sense with this wordplay
Ya primes gone, styles are different..the voters suck, they're defeatist..
...are the excuses you've been storing for when you faced someone decent
^^seen this kinda thing done by spit alot, so didnt feel it so much
dunno I usually like your verses Com, this one was kinda meh imo
vs.
You know me. we beefed, n' it was some amusin' shit son.
But if THAT'S ur reasoning. what the fuck's ur excuse for losin' THIS one.
^^not much wit, but very relevant, and so yeah, hits
Told Kung to go back to his riders, then got more than just clowned.
But minus Vaskez, it's clear to us all you just wished YOURS were around.
^^yeah aight
You're decent, but you're fanclub shows u fake appeal.
Sucha middle-of-the-road style i suggest askin the passenger to take the wheel.
^^nah kinda lazy attempt
You might have a girl, but i really don't believe you ball.
Besides, fuck fighting... ya bitch's pussy gives a new meaning to free for all
^^aight, kinda funny
I left ya bitch breathless. no, i didn't need CPR to manage the rest.
But i DID have her on her back, mouth-to-mouth with both hands on her chest.
^^aight but too many girl punches is boring cos it aint directed on him
You think you're still top 5, haha, i think this bastard is crazy.
Parachute designers use ur skill's decline to test the limit for maximum safety.
^^again aight, lackin that fire from last week
U wanna be compared to $pit. i'm gettin to this cat's fear.
But explain how HE takes a layoff.
... and stilllll outshines everything you've written in the past year....
^^meh
I guess john wasn't feelin Com's verse too much like me, so he dropped below par, still I think he takes it on consistency
v/john
We ain't got time for you hens... why'd you choose Kung to defend?
Bitch you didn't even agree with him,,, you just wanted a friend
You're wack don't pretend, bitch you're like ya mom when she made ya..
....you're young, free and healthy...and on the nuts of a stranger
Ya primes gone, styles are different..the voters suck, they're defeatist..
...are the excuses you've been storing for when you faced someone decent
these were some pretty nice lines here. other than this tho i felt the rest of the verse didnt hold up quality wise. u called his aunt a man which is kinda meh, same as callin a dudes mom a man then u said he's a redneck in a sense with the cousin line. it was just bland humor on those two attempts. wasnt feelin the opener and that spine line just came off flat, like you didnt get the idea off that great. the lines quoted however like i said were pretty tight.
vs
Told Kung to go back to his riders, then got more than just clowned.
But minus Vaskez, it's clear to us all you just wished YOURS were around.
You're decent, but you're fanclub shows u fake appeal.
Sucha middle-of-the-road style i suggest askin the passenger to take the wheel.
l
I left ya bitch breathless. no, i didn't need CPR to manage the rest.
But i DID have her on her back, mouth-to-mouth with both hands on her chest.
these were my favs from your verse. i didnt care for the opener as stated. the other lines i didnt quote were more personal and i havnt been watchin spits layoff or if coms really fell off since i been around. some general disses, coulda hitharder if i related to them i guess, but w/e. this is a close battle here. i think i was feeling coms closer most outta the battle and then hens middle of the road n mouth to mouth lines. this is close. ima have to re-read this one n edit in the vote. solid battle, i def seen both come way harder.
v/hens. it was aaaaaalmost a tie vote but idk if they allow tie votes here. i felt coms worst two lines were what saved hens since i wasnt hip to the personals. the parachute line was funny, which in a way shifts the margin just that extra over to hens. this is an either way battle, i could see it coming down to a final vote.
Last edited by Deon; December 22nd, 2007 at 06:13 PM
.Dohpe.
.Been There-Sonned Cats.
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COM
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Your third shot at this league and I'm starting to believe you can't hack it
You see god loves a tryer.... but he also hates the wack faggots
Idk, I thought this was kinda iffy.
So can this hack crack it? his family's fucked up and crude
Don't think you wanna up the ante, coz we know she's a dude
Pretty good one. Haven't seen that w/p used before.
We ain't got time for you hens... why'd you choose Kung to defend?
Bitch you didn't even agree with him,,, you just wanted a friend
Pretty simple.
You're wack don't pretend, bitch you're like ya mom when she made ya..
....you're young, free and healthy...and on the nuts of a stranger
Lol material. Flowed pretty nice.
Now I'm maiming this inbred, you fucking nerd I ain't bluffin'
Coz John relates to his girl... in other words it's his cousin
This made me laugh. Its obvious wording (don't know how else to put it), yet funny.
This bitch is runnin' his times out, in this rhyme bout his shine's gone
And on the back of that performance... is where I'm ripping his spine from
Wasn't feelin it much, it's kinda obvious that you'd rip a spine out the back. Basically this is statementish.
Ya primes gone, styles are different..the voters suck, they're defeatist..
...are the excuses you've been storing for when you faced someone decent
I'm not too fond of these types of punches.
I've realized that I favor humor, wordplay, and cleverness. For whatever reason, personals aren't my preference, unless they have the above attirbutes implemented in the punch. Unfortunately, you used a couple of personals on him, but there was no wordplay or much wit in them, just kinda regular sentences. But your other lines were pretty humorous, so it basically balances out.
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John Hensley
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You know me. we beefed, n' it was some amusin' shit son.
But if THAT'S ur reasoning. what the fuck's ur excuse for losin' THIS one.
Never been too fond of using quotes in battles either. This was ok though,
Told Kung to go back to his riders, then got more than just clowned.
But minus Vaskez, it's clear to us all you just wished YOURS were around.
Alright, it's a lil jab, nothin more.
You're decent, but you're fanclub shows u fake appeal.
Sucha middle-of-the-road style i suggest askin the passenger to take the wheel.
A bit of rearrangement could've improved this. Probably shoudla left the "I suggest" part out, seems soft. It is original though.
You might have a girl, but i really don't believe you ball.
Besides, fuck fighting... ya bitch's pussy gives a new meaning to free for all
Lol. This was nice. Wording was good.
I left ya bitch breathless. no, i didn't need CPR to manage the rest.
But i DID have her on her back, mouth-to-mouth with both hands on her chest.
Idk what to say about this one. Not bad, but not memorable.
You think you're still top 5, haha, i think this bastard is crazy.
Parachute designers use ur skill's decline to test the limit for maximum safety.
Damn that was pretty wordy, but the concept was creative.
U wanna be compared to $pit. i'm gettin to this cat's fear.
But explain how HE takes a layoff.
... and stilllll outshines everything you've written in the past year....
Once again, with me, personals are hit-or-miss, and this was too plain to be a hit.
You had more creativity in your verse, but still had those bars that were basically filler. This really is a close battle.
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So can this hack crack it? his family's fucked up and crude
Don't think you wanna up the ante, coz we know she's a dude
You're wack don't pretend, bitch you're like ya mom when she made ya..
....you're young, free and healthy...and on the nuts of a stranger
Now I'm maiming this inbred, you fucking nerd I ain't bluffin'
Coz John relates to his girl... in other words it's his cousin
VS
You might have a girl, but i really don't believe you ball.
Besides, fuck fighting... ya bitch's pussy gives a new meaning to free for all
You think you're still top 5, haha, i think this bastard is crazy.
Parachute designers use ur skill's decline to test the limit for maximum safety.
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Reading the verses one after the other makes this seem close, but after looking at the best of both, I feel COM got this. They both had about the same consistency.
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VOTE: COM
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