Tony B vs Mariah Noelle

[Philly®]

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Check-ins due Wednesday 11:59 EST
Verses due Friday 11:59pm EST
Voting Ends Sunday 11:59pm EST
must vote on 5 battles and LEAVE LINKS
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[Mariah]

Hey there Tony. 12 good?

[Philly is this still preseason?]

[Tony B]

i guess so....and i'm droppin tomorrow

[Tony B]

drop early?? i got finals all this week n just wanna get this over with

[Mariah]

sorry, don't have time til maybe Thursday the earliest, so just drop. I'll match you.

[Tony B]

stop speakin, whore, i ain't feelin it, tony b ain't a nice one
i'm givin u a cold shoulder that santa claus could reside on
i'm sure i'll see u round the way the way i make ends meet
cuz theres the starting line--> *you*-----n then-----*me*
Mariah's easy as fuck, she got that hoe mindset like why wait?
bitch so shallow, it's no wonder she stay below my waste
ya crib ain't like most, the frames ain't full'a familiar livin
moms said u too ugly, n put up pics of her best friends' children
i'm raw as fuck, stay burnin cats like a street demon
in terms of cars, ur style is well suited for the Grand Prix season
no game havin slut, every desperate man hoppin on that saddle
bitch get a life, No no...i mean one OFF of Rapbattles

[Tony B]

ok, no show? u were just online, drop foolio. key somethin, w/e..

[Mariah]

I hardly know you, but I know you deserve to be slayed or be killed
Considering that TBD is simply used to determine the grade of your skill
Play with me fool? You have got no chance to blow all my stuff away
When your claim to fame is in your location n all of O-Town was fuckin gay
Enough of this Tony, it's so easily known that you've got nothing done
Your styles so Ass - only reason you Changed is cuz now you're a fuckin Bum
Maryland? Fuck that, nobody important from there has ever come out
Considering the only time you'll need an MD - will probably be after this bout
Your text skill has gone away, you are fallin off and fakin here dude
So if I'm just breaking you in Tony < I might as well be breaking them too
You joined in October so I see you're a Halloween spitter and it's sick
To think that you could still be black....and yet your verse is known as a trick

[Seyance]

Mariah's easy as fuck, she got that hoe mindset like why wait?
bitch so shallow, it's no wonder she stay below my waste
ya crib ain't like most, the frames ain't full'a familiar livin
moms said u too ugly, n put up pics of her best friends' children

vs

Maryland? Fuck that, nobody important from there has ever come out
Considering the only time you'll need an MD - will probably be after this bout

Mariah, you really need to shorten your bars up.. your flow is real stretched out and choppy, especially cause you don't multi well at the end of the setup either, you definitely needa work on your setups to give your bars more effect. Just simple shit like if you'd of taken 'probably' out of the line above it'd of been so much nicer, your saying maybe you'll need an MD after this.. you should be like 'YOU'LL NEED AN MD AFTER THIS BOUT'. Tony it seems like your tryna squeeze too much in the setups, just keep it simple and let it flow out and make your point.. cause your setups make ya flow abit choppy, but the lines i quoted up there both gave me a chuckle, especially the frames shit.. had me like oooh snap.

Vote - Tony

[Daz]

i'm sure i'll see u round the way the way i make ends meet
cuz theres the starting line--> *you*-----n then-----*me*
ya crib ain't like most, the frames ain't full'a familiar livin
moms said u too ugly, n put up pics of her best friends' children

vs

hardly know you, but I know you deserve to be slayed or be killed
Considering that TBD is simply used to determine the grade of your skill
Play with me fool? You have got no chance to blow all my stuff away
When your claim to fame is in your location n all of O-Town was fuckin gay
Your text skill has gone away, you are fallin off and fakin here dude
So if I'm just breaking you in Tony < I might as well be breaking them too

i got mariah...she doesnt really have to shorten her lines. it defines HER style. she just came harder IMO.

V/Mariah

[Tony B]

1-1 bump
bout time u dropped lol

[Vaskez]

Mariah's easy as fuck, she got that hoe mindset like why wait?
bitch so shallow, it's no wonder she stay below my waste
^^lol clever

other that that they were played or didnt really hit like the friend's children one, homie

vs.


Play with me fool? You have got no chance to blow all my stuff away
When your claim to fame is in your location n all of O-Town was fuckin gay
^^heh
Enough of this Tony, it's so easily known that you've got nothing done
Your styles so Ass - only reason you Changed is cuz now you're a fuckin Bum
^^lol aint seen it this way

v/Mariah

[Rob-D]

ya crib ain't like most, the frames ain't full'a familiar livin
moms said u too ugly, n put up pics of her best friends' children
lol, funny

..vs....

Maryland? Fuck that, nobody important from there has ever come out
Considering the only time you'll need an MD - will probably be after this bout
sick personal, i like it


O DODN'T LIKE DA WHOLE IDEA OT TONY VERSE, IT WAS MAN PLAYED OUT. AND HIS PERSONALS WERE WEEK. MARIAH HAD OKPUNCHES..IT WAS JUST DIS ONE DAT STOOD OUT TO ME. DA ADVICE UP THERE IS GOOD FROM SEYANCE....I JUZ DIDN'T LIKE HIS VOTE,

v/MARIAH

[Vegeta™]

stop speakin, whore, i ain't feelin it, tony b ain't a nice one
i'm givin u a cold shoulder that santa claus could reside on
i'm sure i'll see u round the way the way i make ends meet
cuz theres the starting line--> *you*-----n then-----*me*
Mariah's easy as fuck, she got that hoe mindset like why wait?
bitch so shallow, it's no wonder she stay below my waste
ya crib ain't like most, the frames ain't full'a familiar livin
moms said u too ugly, n put up pics of her best friends' children
i'm raw as fuck, stay burnin cats like a street demon
in terms of cars, ur style is well suited for the Grand Prix season
no game havin slut, every desperate man hoppin on that saddle
bitch get a life, No no...i mean one OFF of Rapbattles

vs

Garbage


v/tony

[John Hensley]

stop speakin, whore, i ain't feelin it, tony b ain't a nice one
i'm givin u a cold shoulder that santa claus could reside on
this was ok
i'm sure i'll see u round the way the way i make ends meet
cuz theres the starting line--> *you*-----n then-----*me*
like that you tried to be creative here bro, just was a bit jumbled.
Mariah's easy as fuck, she got that hoe mindset like why wait?
bitch so shallow, it's no wonder she stay below my waste
word, not bad.
ya crib ain't like most, the frames ain't full'a familiar livin
moms said u too ugly, n put up pics of her best friends' children
wasnt really feelin this one.
i'm raw as fuck, stay burnin cats like a street demon
in terms of cars, ur style is well suited for the Grand Prix season
nah
no game havin slut, every desperate man hoppin on that saddle
bitch get a life, No no...i mean one OFF of Rapbattles
ehh.

overall, you started pretty well. your shallow and cold shoulder lines were pretty cool. then you kinda went downhill with the last 6.

vs

I hardly know you, but I know you deserve to be slayed or be killed
Considering that TBD is simply used to determine the grade of your skill
great wording from setup thru punch. the diss was alright.
Play with me fool? You have got no chance to blow all my stuff away
When your claim to fame is in your location n all of O-Town was fuckin gay
ya not bad.
Enough of this Tony, it's so easily known that you've got nothing done
Your styles so Ass - only reason you Changed is cuz now you're a fuckin Bum
i wasn't feeling this one
Maryland? Fuck that, nobody important from there has ever come out
Considering the only time you'll need an MD - will probably be after this bout
structures perfect, i've seen Maryland MD lines though.
Your text skill has gone away, you are fallin off and fakin here dude
So if I'm just breaking you in Tony < I might as well be breaking them too
pretty cool
You joined in October so I see you're a Halloween spitter and it's sick
To think that you could still be black....and yet your verse is known as a trick
dunno what a Halloween spitter is. kind of forced there. this is an alright closer


overall, i've seen you drop better. your structure, meaning your wording and set ups are great. you got that down for sure. your concepts were ok. just didn't have a hard feel to them. The only line i really didnt like ewas the Ass one.


but still, with all that said about both verses. Mariah was more polished, took use of the set ups to make the punches seem more relevant, and conceptually seemed a bit better as well.


vote- Mariah