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    Technicolor Type-A

    Tongue in cheek, beast in heat
    beat around du-bush or
    chest on fire, lies, anguish, & deceit...
    spray it as is, truth
    relentless-forth, untoward...
    Abroad...


    I write fearlessly driven by
    a no-holes-barred attitude &
    'Heathen-D' Mentality...
    a spurred on neurological misfit, ME!
    an un-heel ding wordsmith
    'Lyrically Inclined Chronic Assimilate'
    runnin' du-3rd-eye down time's line...
    brought with a hepatic awakening,
    so I rhythmically rise to
    the rhythm of the soil...
    filled wit'
    'Neanderthal-idic
    Characteristics'
    fuelled by the ignorant will to live...
    an' yet; 'Unheralded Noma-Dick!'
    'Gutter-ly Inspired'... SELF
    CHOSEN!
    to lead an Artistic
    Revolution.

    Entertaining' thoughts of a
    'Bloodless Evolution of Word!'
    Free living, smiling, cursing
    'Bein'-2-du-X-treme!
    Passion infused anarchy
    unveiled to life...
    by the trappings found lurkin' in,
    ‘Lustrous Ideology'
    'Desolated Dogma'...
    gleefully spread through religious
    favor & zeal, subliminal cunningness
    consuming all in a hub of
    numbing nothingness
    confused by
    illusionary thought...
    mesmerizing ignorant ideas of more
    leaving millions brainwashed to suffering-
    non believe, hopelessness &
    breeding
    in an environment where
    the masses suffer the suffocating existence of
    'not enough-ness'
    which in essence is
    a devilish design of spiritual manipulation...


    1st Thought...
    Majestically found an ample, yet
    substantially poor in the
    pure exquisite luminosity &
    'dashing-qualities' of 1st Thought
    'cum-2-exist'...
    in the mind of an enlightened poet
    eager to unravel 'establishment'
    thats has conditioned many away
    from the beauty of replacing it
    with a poor
    substituted existence of servitude-ism
    to du-well-bein' of a slaving system...
    ...

    ME BE A MINDLESS BIGOT! ... I THINK NOT!!!
    so I stay clear of subliminal doctrine
    by always staying close to nature &
    spiritually delving within for Truth...
    keeping my mind clear to remember
    who I am...
    technicolor supreme behind a sepia screen

    Despite all the invention/blasphemy-in' discoveries of bein'...
    quintessence intuition produced as ink
    Ad-Lib'd in print as 'Conscious Engagement'
    presented as "food for thought"
    that fills all hunger for knowledge...
    spread via bigotry-
    Creating' an inspired creation...
    a superlative exercise of
    'Brain & Behavior'
    the infinite potential of consonants & vowels
    might never be fully realized
    but I thrown down this scripture
    a Collage in Word!
    (A poor substitute for
    feeling, emotion &
    thought)
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    Re: Technicolor Type-A

    this was just an excellent fuckin read man... i loved how you came about with things and i loved your posture in this being subtle then abusive then aggressive with your words...being directed to the hate you have then the confusion and then the love... your own vocabulary in this was just over loaded and superb and well brought to the damn table man... top notch still dude good drop

    I write fearlessly driven by
    a no-holes-barred attitude &
    'Heathen-D' Mentality...
    a spurred on neurological misfit, ME!
    an un-heel ding wordsmith
    'Lyrically Inclined Chronic Assimilate'
    runnin' du-3rd-eye down time's line...
    brought with a hepatic awakening,
    so I rhythmically rise to
    the rhythm of the soil...
    filled wit'
    'Neanderthal-idic
    Characteristics'
    fuelled by the ignorant will to live...
    an' yet; 'Unheralded Noma-Dick!'
    'Gutter-ly Inspired'... SELF
    CHOSEN!
    to lead an Artistic
    Revolution.
    loved how you based your emotions through words that was shortened with slang and then slammed with effective bigotry on words that is kinda hard to relate to at times unless you know the meaning yourself...lmfao.. but i understood sorry if i am off with feed im super tired dude... but this was sa great job and a hell of a read that i can say was a really well hard earned respect for you even more...though i miss your fantasy poems that killed with reality today... but you still have that nac of killing your verse with off the top wording and story ;ines through anger in sucha way man.. props to you again dude.
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    Re: Technicolor Type-A

    this was just an excellent fuckin read man... i loved how you came about with things and i loved your posture in this being subtle then abusive then aggressive with your words...being directed to the hate you have then the confusion and then the love... your own vocabulary in this was just over loaded and superb and well brought to the damn table man... top notch still dude good drop

    I write fearlessly driven by
    a no-holes-barred attitude &
    'Heathen-D' Mentality...
    a spurred on neurological misfit, ME!
    an un-heel ding wordsmith
    'Lyrically Inclined Chronic Assimilate'
    runnin' du-3rd-eye down time's line...
    brought with a hepatic awakening,
    so I rhythmically rise to
    the rhythm of the soil...
    filled wit'
    'Neanderthal-idic
    Characteristics'
    fuelled by the ignorant will to live...
    an' yet; 'Unheralded Noma-Dick!'
    'Gutter-ly Inspired'... SELF
    CHOSEN!
    to lead an Artistic
    Revolution.
    loved how you based your emotions through words that was shortened with slang and then slammed with effective bigotry on words that is kinda hard to relate to at times unless you know the meaning yourself...lmfao.. but i understood sorry if i am off with feed im super tired dude... but this was sa great job and a hell of a read that i can say was a really well hard earned respect for you even more...though i miss your fantasy poems that killed with reality today... but you still have that nac of killing your verse with off the top wording and story ;ines through anger in sucha way man.. props to you again dude.
    ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE

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    Re: Technicolor Type-A

    this was just an excellent fuckin read man... i loved how you came about with things and i loved your posture in this being subtle then abusive then aggressive with your words...being directed to the hate you have then the confusion and then the love... your own vocabulary in this was just over loaded and superb and well brought to the damn table man... top notch still dude good drop

    I write fearlessly driven by
    a no-holes-barred attitude &
    'Heathen-D' Mentality...
    a spurred on neurological misfit, ME!
    an un-heel ding wordsmith
    'Lyrically Inclined Chronic Assimilate'
    runnin' du-3rd-eye down time's line...
    brought with a hepatic awakening,
    so I rhythmically rise to
    the rhythm of the soil...
    filled wit'
    'Neanderthal-idic
    Characteristics'
    fuelled by the ignorant will to live...
    an' yet; 'Unheralded Noma-Dick!'
    'Gutter-ly Inspired'... SELF
    CHOSEN!
    to lead an Artistic
    Revolution.
    loved how you based your emotions through words that was shortened with slang and then slammed with effective bigotry on words that is kinda hard to relate to at times unless you know the meaning yourself...lmfao.. but i understood sorry if i am off with feed im super tired dude... but this was sa great job and a hell of a read that i can say was a really well hard earned respect for you even more...though i miss your fantasy poems that killed with reality today... but you still have that nac of killing your verse with off the top wording and story ;ines through anger in sucha way man.. props to you again dude.
    ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE

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    Re: Technicolor Type-A

    Ah didn't see these posts, thanks alot mate i appreciate the positive feed!

    Upping for one or two more opinions! Leave links, i'll hit them when i get a chance, but i will hit them.

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    Re: Technicolor Type-A

    I haven't had the pleasure of reading much of your work...but I really liked this...it was beautiful and understandable...some people try to get so deep in the poetry boards i read their stuff then I'm like huh?.........

    these lines had perfect Rhythm...wish that i wrote them:
    ME BE A MINDLESS BIGOT! ... I THINK NOT!!!
    so I stay clear of subliminal doctrine
    by always staying close to nature &
    spiritually delving within for Truth...
    keeping my mind clear to remember
    who I am...
    technicolor supreme behind a sepia screen....tightness

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