Astranged Ways

[Man of Steel Man]

You and me…we’re not dancing to the beat of the same drummer.
You’re still in to Bassa Nova, I’m in to crossin over into pop culture,
If knocked over, my clips clip wings good enough to stop vultures.
Iller off the top then most posters impersonatin lyricists,
Substitute in the family business, organizing dummies like mafia ventriloquists.
Stop it if you feel a bit…unable to comprehend the fables ur life’s made of.
Since the cradle the graves dug, shoulda never felt the need to play thug.
Six feet, ear to the ground never raised up till the trumpet is blown.
As of now…R.I.P, but as the days and time go by…status unknown.
Friends and family gone………….the badest in town hasn’t a home.
Back to the surface…………………the grind all but ceases to cease.
The color of black deepest in streets, mostly preaches the heat.
Never thinking to brethren better, only grieving the mothers waste,
Life is a ghetto not life in the ghetto cemented in nothing plaster and paste.
Consider it in best interest to be blessed and step in the confessional booth.
Look at the truth, separation is needed as humans evolved being better than you.

[sILLable]

i dig this piece..its was a little short..but it didnt lack anything..i like the wordplay and vocab...very well articulated..i like the delievery..on point...the multis you incorporated in this piece were spectacular..imagery was evident and very ill...good emotion..i really didnt see anything in this piece that i didnt like at all or that i thought flawed this peice...ill drop..

You and me…we’re not dancing to the beat of the same drummer.
You’re still in to Bassa Nova, I’m in to crossin over into pop culture,
If knocked over, my clips clip wings good enough to stop vultures.

Back to the surface…………………the grind all but ceases to cease.
The color of black deepest in streets, mostly preaches the heat.
Never thinking to brethren better, only grieving the mothers waste,
Life is a ghetto not life in the ghetto cemented in nothing plaster and paste.

Iller off the top then most posters impersonatin lyricists,
Substitute in the family business, organizing dummies like mafia ventriloquists.
Stop it if you feel a bit…unable to comprehend the fables ur life’s made of.
Since the cradle the graves dug, shoulda never felt the need to play thug

these were my favorite bars...just my opinion...i enjoyed this piece and ill be lookin for more of your pieces..keep droppin tha hottness~1~

[Ntalek]

Overall this was a nice drop..though short and you really didn't touch on the astranged ways..in a sense..you did..it's all on the reader I guess..but you had some strong emotion and realistic based lines that helped bring the piece along....with the emotion helping the imagery as well..I really started to feel the piece when I got to the middle..and I wish it would've been a bit longer..but it was still cool..keep writing..

Fav lines..

Back to the surface…………………the grind all but ceases to cease.
The color of black deepest in streets, mostly preaches the heat.
Never thinking to brethren better, only grieving the mothers waste,
Life is a ghetto not life in the ghetto cemented in nothing plaster and paste.

[Man of Steel Man]

thanks for the honest feed...i entitled it astranged ways...because im touching on black street society and the evolution i was talking about at the end was basically meaning that we need to get out of the streets and make something of ourselves...im kinda upset with that damn Criminals Gone Wild DVD that just came out lol...so i decided to vent a bit...just a little explain for your brain...but thanks again....cheers.

[Man of Steel Man]

Linkies:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ty-354282.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...on-354449.html

[Man of Steel Man]

uppin for more honest feed

[Man of Steel Man]

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[Man of Steel Man]

last up before i ad more links.... .

[Vincent Maestro]

yeah man you've got a tight Flow.......had a very good Title...
i feel that your strength is in those complex multi's and internal Rhymes.....
example:
You and me…we’re not dancing to the beat of the same drummer.
You’re still in to Bassa Nova, I’m in to crossin over into pop culture,
If knocked over, my clips clip wings good enough to stop vultures.
Iller off the top then most posters impersonatin lyricists,
Substitute in the family business, organizing dummies like mafia ventriloquists.......that was ill lyricism!!!

[3x]

flowed well could see this as an audio verse. good use of multis nice imagery u can feel the emotion in this as u read it. it is a bit short but it dosnt take away from the drop though. i like how u used realistic views intead of spiritual and inner feelings overall it was a good drop

[_R@ndom_]

Good piece.