Fuck you pay me
Fuck you pay me
Last edited by Dreamer22; June 18th, 2009 at 02:40 AM
Good piece I liked the closing verse the best due the the rhyme scheme you chose anyway the flow was good overall I just didnt like how you worded this 1 line
but eventually they'll start asking, 'how'd you get so ill though?'
but that didnt take away from the entire piece it was a good drop...Peace
on the real though, I really need to emit some laws
cos they say history repeats itself
........maybe I'm just another victim to this flaw
it's a mystery how they keep this stealth
^^ Loved that man.
Very good drop, I just joined so I hope to see alot more from you man.
This was well worded, good flow and everything. I don't think it needed multi's really because it's a good basic piece.
Stick to it man, I like ya style.
+ Bravo +
wuz a nice peice man the structure waz ok u came with sum decent multies
over all its a decent drop man keep it cumming be good to see more ,,,
peace
----Im a Part Of Rap, i look at it as an Art Infact,---
---verses paint pictures that cause Heart Attacks,--
--i can train a rookie ta be iller than you in 3 day's---
-------even if he has ta Start From Stratch---------
Fuck you pay me.
Last edited by Dreamer22; June 23rd, 2009 at 02:46 AM
i really liked dis hea mayne, u come different err'time i read ur pieces...dis one was really deep n on a new level of anything i've read, really feelin dis hea mayne, keep it pimp'n
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