Ima Soldier

[×QueeN×eMCee×]

Starting out as a rookie, now im a vet & I start to detect my victims.
Medals of honor? Fuck it, Ima gamble my life and collect my winnin's.
Slaughter these wanna be's, aint nothing but bitch ass hoe bags.
When shots go off, Ima put on my smile while they put on their toe tags.
Ima sniper, sneeky & you can't beat me no matter how hard you try.
I go behond enemy lines. Shoot em dead, all cowards knew why.
So General, go recruit some troops. Get ready lace up ya boots.
One woman army, can't harm me. Bitches gotta face the news.
Right. Left Right. March to the beat of the sounds I create.
My flow I'll demonstrate. Locked & loaded, got another round to make.
Coawrds dying, Mothers crying. I'm left smiling, at this World War III.
They were wrong to take and create this war with me, so just hold the beat.
My life story is too cold to read, this war I engage in, is lacking peace.
The true soldiers stand, ready for whatever. Gun aimed, pack the heat.
For many its the end of the road. Letters to parents I be sending home.
Feilds of mud, bodys and shells. When bombs go off im in the zone.
My soul too evil and cold, people tell me i just miswell go to hell.
Think & Plot. Faces turn hot. Bring weapons of distruction to show & tell.
Ima true soldier. Mastermind of the war I created, hold my composure.
Gun rests over my shoulder, heart grows colder, waiting for this world to blow over.


this is an old piece that i wrote.. jus never got anyy feed on it b4.
so giv the feed,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...rs-349968.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-349921.html


PeaCe

[DrUnK-N-MuNkY]

Cool lil piece.The only thing i have to complain with is the size(no homo) of the text.I had to highlight the shit to read it

but other than that it was a prettty solid piece

[Content]

This was straight and to the point,
so theres really nothing to criticize..
this was not bad but the text size sucks

[Jimmy Ripper]

aye shawtei i was feelin dis hea mayne, u came out n did ur thang dat shit was raw n uncut mayne...keep doin wat'chu doin shawtei