C0LD Freak

[QaaHolic]

i feel like flowin but i cant the words out/ im da hottest in da streets yes the words out/

isley brothers brothers style i make deeez these bitches wanna shout/ dey like to suk cum untill im dried out/

tell mommi move da ass keep it backin up/ i like da fuk the pussy untill its stuff wit nut/

it aint thing wit me if she no how to work it/ i like it wen she dip low and keep da ass twirkin

dont play wit da dick just keep on slurppin.../

im havin fun now.... showday sayin go down.../

so i eat da pussy up till mommi reach her nut/ im a cold freak...less talk jus fuck/

touch everything jus dont touch my butt/ i got da potion girls say i got the notion/ i leave em wetter than ocean/

leave em creamier then lotion/ the girls call me super diiiikkkkk/ i got a lil showdy the bitch give super heeeeead/

but not the bitch super heeead/ dont be stupid hear/ i sleep wit da rouger near/

but dats enough dat/ dis aint a gangster rap/ im pimpin jus like my daddy.../

he pull hoes in his caddy/shirley or ms. patty/ it dont matter he switch em up everynight

after im done fukkin the girlies like j-j dey say dyanamite/ if im on dat e pill i fuck a bitch all night/

and if her neck strong she can suk da dick all night/ into my eyes roll back then she outta sight/

im gemini cold freak in the bed/ matter fuk ima cold freak everywhere/ i fuck u in the woods we be a porno to bear/ (lol)

{u hear}


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[QaaHolic]

i need sum feed cum on r.b

[Johnny 6-feet]

Pretty standard stuff about the topic. A lot of what i read was pretty same-y, recycled stuff which didn't draw me in. You got to get your structure fixed man, that putting gaps between every other line and not spacing the other time made it hard to read. Pick something original which'll make you stand out and work on getting some multi's in there.

Keep elavating.

[QaaHolic]

thanx 4 da feed j6f