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    Big Brothers Fucked-up Society

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    This is my present mind-state; witness me create phrases in a blind–rage,
    Performing magic rhyme traits, - as I participate on a sublime stage…
    Time waits for none, hated by some; crime-rates keep rising, eclipsing the sun,
    Gun’s hypnotizing the young, so I’m gone start Philosophising like Carl Jung
    Thirsty 4 action, razor reflex, words cut so deep - blood drips from the tongue,
    As corruption of the Nation spills from the gutters of the seemingly unreal
    Patients seek thrills, - popping happy pills - delivered daily by meals on wheels,
    Hold up your shields of Zion - for all those restricted by symbols & signs,
    We walk thin lines; neglected kids stand stained, proclaimed by social science,
    Straining to live as righteous, still… gaining no fame or loyal guidance
    Playing this game… hearts became unforgiving living within these environs
    Check the legacy, steady conspiracy theories - brings silence to tyrants.

    This Globe spins quick, we hath sin without a doubt,
    It’s so toxic, - this sick toxin froths from my mouth


    Look into my irises… my 3rd iris is most mystified - at the sight of our fates
    Hades awaits all fallers to the pit, knife to the lips, spitting critical outbreaks
    The state annihilates freewill; each sequel is worse than soap-opera plots
    In haste - humankind ate the whole cake, leaving nothing to offer to the gods
    It seems evil; big brother keeps tags on citizens via lenses on digital tripods.

    As my inner-mind delivers visions, - the spine shivers
    I’ve witnessed – laws change, & it all seems sure deranged
    Strange as it is, - this is the way politics makes us to live
    Give me a fair fight, & I might just reach for the sky
    Scoped by satellites, it can’t be ‘right’ having No privacy rights
    Spies & conspirators, - who’d die to be down with the latest craze
    The optimistic hold heads high, - trying to escape this maze
    Those fake media tapes & scapegoats, a gray ghost in the system
    Roller coasting victims, acting as barbarian bastards
    Disastrous in theory... & reality proves to be just as drastic.


    This Globe spins quick, we hath sin without a doubt,
    It’s so toxic, - this sick toxin froths from my mouth


    The all Seeing Eye pries - thru the super binoculars
    Triggered viruses blight the poor, & smite the populace
    & it’s more than obvious – people are oblivious to the plot
    The devil hates GOD, yet he wants everything that He’s got
    Lost in a pitiful doom, double-crossed Souls are sold to markets
    Cameras with digital zooms - lock in on innocent targets
    As red-carpets lay underneath the feet of prime ministers
    Sinister characters sedate society like tranquilisers
    Led by an insane boss, their aim is to brainwash the masses
    While the pains of wars distorts the world & separates the classes
    Toxic gas seeps thru my mask, lurking deep within my lungs
    If we speak openly - secret agents seek to tear out our tongues.

    Enticed by evil vices, a surreal oasis conceals this crisis
    The price is steep, advice is weak, & as peeps sleep, the serpent creeps
    Leaving shit trails in his path, laughing loudly at the aftermath
    A grafted gene, the killer clone all alone creating a bloodbath
    Crafty as fuck, “the man” snatches D.N.A samples & sells em for big bucks
    As truckloads of soldiers - protect borders from the threat of influx
    Justice is a joke… you’ll go broke standing in front of a cunt of a judge
    Officers train to fight stereotyped thugs, while aiding white-collar gangsters
    Shitty statistics, the ballistics is twisted with bullshit propagandas.

    This Globe spins quick, we hath sin without a doubt,
    It’s so toxic, - this sick toxin froths from my mouth.

    This Globe spins quick, we hath sin without a doubt,
    It’s so toxic, - this sick toxin froths from my mouth.
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    Re: Big Brothers Fucked-up Society

    Up.............

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    Re: Big Brothers Fucked-up Society

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ds-349614.html
    Feed It Please.

    Anyways - This piece was great. I'm a big fan of a piece with dope flow and this piece had it, every word just fit in perfectly with the next. Your emotion flowed through the whole piece - adding a real life vibe which really brought out the piece in so many ways. Very few lines we're forced and threw off the flow, but you caught back on it with the line after - this was great man. Keep up, pz.
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    Re: Big Brothers Fucked-up Society

    this was an amazin piece no doubt.
    The vocab was sick, & the flow was consistant.
    The lyrics were very deep, and i could tell u put alotta emotion into this.
    This would make a real sick audio.
    Keep doin ya thing,
    PeaCe.
    ...When you said Goodbye...
    ..A little piece of me died inside..

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    Re: Big Brothers Fucked-up Society

    yea iam gettin more emotional by the second,

    thanx 4 da look d 'n Q, ill sure try check yo piece/s in a minute

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    Re: Big Brothers Fucked-up Society

    Yes!!! he;s fucking back! this is what I love about you man that divine imagery just falling all together with your style in general man this shit is perfect man I personally thought it was a dope drop keep at that creativity you produce in your drops is always outstanding man, I don't know man I might nominate this piece, very original with great lines in the mix and its giving off true and real shit at the same time...I loved this man keep this writing up.
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    Re: Big Brothers Fucked-up Society

    pz

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