Dreaming (Deaf Star)

[×QueeN×eMCee×]

Dreaming
by Queen and Knightro

(verse one)

Dreams Full of the Dark Figures, Write these Dark Lyrics.
Dreams Pull a Bloody Trigger, Light and Spark Spirits.
Close my Eyes, See a different Place, Another Day.
Mind Open Wide, Anything can Happen, When I Lay..
Lay With the Dead, Imgenation Plays with the Led.
For days and Days these Storys Stay in my Head.
Is it real? Can it Come True?.. Why do I dream?
Fall asleep.. Land on this Cloud, Eyes move to see.
Dream Of The better, Nightmares From My Past.
bleed on this letter, Go Slow, Scared to move Fast.
There is another Universe.. But they Cant see me Creepin.
I see the Bodys lay Still, but do They see me when they sleepin?
Is it a message, Or jus Silly Random Thoughts.
Dreams Answer Questions, When the Ink stops my hand does Rott.
Look in the Eyes Of A fairy.. Where are U taking Me?
I am Speaking with the Devil, Am i here Mistakenly?
Motionless, I become Closer With the Demon Of Sleep.
My dream Catcher Holds the Dreams he's Feeding to Me.
My midnite Snack.. What I see at rest Controls My Thoughts.
A Hiding Trap Bout to Snap, Pull and Unfold these Knots.

(chours)(8x)

Dreaming..Am I dreaming?

(verse two)

Cry myself to Sleep, Then I Cry myself Awake.
Wonder what I Await.Dreams try to help My Fate.
Hell awaits, Brain Elevates To the 5th Stage.
Dig deep into my real emotions, Unbrake and Hit Rage.
Hold my Hand. Me and the Reaper Intertwine our Fingers.
Tic Toc goes my Thinker, But this Time does Linger.
Wake to Real Life, But My Dreams I still Can Vision.
Somethin Dont feel Rite, Was it a Preminision.
De Ja Vu, Ive seen It Before, Mind in a Daze.
I aint Sleep, I Dream for a Long Time in this Day.
Everything So Unclear, Im Fallin Through Space.
Ring The Alarm, Realitys Callin My Name.

(chours)(8x)
Dreaming..Am I dreaming?

(verse three)

Nightmares next to none, when I hit the sack, I travel to hell and back.
Light flares for a sun and gravel made of eggshells and tacks.
In the loop of a broken cassette repeating a unspoken deaths.
Crying dope like smoking meth dying slow in every choking breath
I say my prayers, plead and beg to the Sand-Man for a nice sleep.
Were slaves in his damn-hand, selling our soul for the price of sheep.
Our lives are bleak, as we despise the meek in jealousy and spite
Fighting the frights and scares losing as nightmares zealously strike
Living hell in the night, but I awake to hate and screaming
My fate is scheming deviously confusing my meaning. Am I dreaming?
The day screams and the night scares impair clarifying normality
Verifying daydreams and nightmares from our terrifying reality…

give some feed.

PeaCe

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[>>Yella<<]

DOPE AS FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dreams Full of the Dark Figures, Write these Dark Lyrics.
Dreams Pull a Bloody Trigger, Light and Spark Spirits.
^^start is crisp and got me hooked str8 away^^

Close my Eyes, See a different Place, Another Day.
Mind Open Wide, Anything can Happen, When I Lay..
Lay With the Dead, Imgenation Plays with the Led.
For days and Days these Storys Stay in my Head.
Is it real? Can it Come True?.. Why do I dream?
Fall asleep.. Land on this Cloud, Eyes move to see.
^^poetic shit real deep flowz nice^^^

Dream Of The better, Nightmares From My Past.
bleed on this letter, Go Slow, Scared to move Fast.
There is another Universe.. But they Cant see me Creepin.
I see the Bodys lay Still, but do They see me when they sleepin?
Is it a message, Or jus Silly Random Thoughts.
Dreams Answer Questions, When the Ink stops my hand does Rott.
^^nice still i wasnt shure bout that last line but its the way yer read it so its aight^^^

Look in the Eyes Of A fairy.. Where are U taking Me?
I am Speaking with the Devil, Am i here Mistakenly?
Motionless, I become Closer With the Demon Of Sleep.
My dream Catcher Holds the Dreams he's Feeding to Me.<<<<<nice
My midnite Snack.. What I see at rest Controls My Thoughts.
A Hiding Trap Bout to Snap, Pull and Unfold these Knots.
^^^^yet again still remainin strong and deep^^^^

id break the rest down but i got shit to be doin

all in all to me this peace is a 9/10

you got sum skillz mayne ...................keep it up 1

[Ca$$-LOC]

yo this shit was absolutly one of the best on point meaningful drops i have seen in a long long time... the whole shit was dope so no need to go through every line but this one got my attention the most....

"In the loop of a broken cassette repeating of unspoken deaths.
Crying dope like smoking meth dying slow in every choking breath"

That was ridiculous!!!! great drop.. keep this up. this is why i still come to this fucking site....

[-Coherent-]

If this is audio, its dope, for a regular OM is decent, nothing special, i could see some more prolly better synonems, or metaphors in this if its audio, also try to work with the flow some part were streched all in all it was a meaningful story

8.1/10

[Knightro]

haha word DEAF STAR!!!!!
all day.
uppin!