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    ^^^UK stand up ^^^ >>Yella<<'s Avatar
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    >UK's Greatest< peep!

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...zy-349711.html

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...nt-349763.html


    Im the Crazyest, all my life ive been Athiest,
    but in the after life i'll probbley have ta Pay Fa This,
    preforming sins thats got me on Saintens List,

    ima Mental Paitent Bitch,
    in Restraints with Clips,
    verses Paint A Pic,
    they amazed at my Amazingness,
    im UK's Greatest Brit,
    what i Dis-play Is Sick,
    im taking over you better start Praying Quik,
    or join the darkside an let'a razor graze your rists,
    and turn into a devil worshipping Saintenist,
    so what im Sayin Is,
    join up or Lay Down,
    but if you Lay Down, you Better Stay Down,
    this Aint No PlayGrond,
    i'll turn into a Rain Cloud and Reign Down,
    and wont stop till im all Drained Out,
    bet you thought you was fire till i reign'd down and took ya Flame Out,
    go on push me call the Name Out

    Man Im only 21 but like one of the Old'timers,
    i Own Cyphers,
    punches dont miss, like bullets off Pro-Snipers,
    im'a un-Controled Virus,
    suddenly set in and blind your irus
    spinless guys just die from stupidity
    im sick lyricaly
    you will not get my simpathy
    im typicaly the Greatest,

    droppin Greatness from aycliffe,
    got you loving the way i Create Shit, yellaz Creative,
    spits that Great Shit,
    that shit you are Amazed With,
    should looked upon as Frave-rit,
    with a style so Saycred,
    i take the mic and blaze it
    man its basic
    you feel the impact when my Bars Smash,
    "send you flying"
    like the un-buckled passagener ina Car Crash,
    you sick? you ill? well i Past that,
    im "flyin on kytes" like a junkie that Blasts Crack,

    quick written shit feed tho pleez
    ----Im a Part Of Rap, i look at it as an Art Infact,---
    ---verses paint pictures that cause Heart Attacks,--
    --i can train a rookie ta be iller than you in 3 day's---
    -------even if he has ta Start From Stratch---------

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    Re: >UK's Greatest< peep!

    Satan* Satanist*.

    This is a topic which is very much over-done, however you certainly managed to deliver some superb multi's.

    Keep an eye on the grammer, punctuation & spelling, and I think your lyrics will be alot easier to read.

    Keep spittin' for the You-Kay though, there aint enough of us bruh!!

    Peace & God Bless.
    ~*~Pure~*~



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    ^^^UK stand up ^^^ >>Yella<<'s Avatar
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    Re: >UK's Greatest< peep!

    thanx mate .yeah my spellin is off lol never turned up at school know what i mean lol.................

    uuuppp
    ----Im a Part Of Rap, i look at it as an Art Infact,---
    ---verses paint pictures that cause Heart Attacks,--
    --i can train a rookie ta be iller than you in 3 day's---
    -------even if he has ta Start From Stratch---------

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    Re: >UK's Greatest< peep!

    Use Spellcheck

    Microsoft Word has a muthafucka of a spellchecker hehe
    ~*~Pure~*~



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