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    Write to this:October



    Wonder if opus is going to take this one again.
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    Re: Write to this:October


    True Oblivion

    Written By,Opus.

    Crimson red tears
    A gash in the sky
    It cries.
    Black haze
    Sweeps across
    Killing the colored world.
    Slowly descending
    IntoThe doomed vortex.
    Painless, numb
    Gone is the hurt
    Which plagued me.
    Inky black wings
    Stretch high
    Bloodied sword in hand.
    No more suffering
    No more pain
    Just death.
    Traveling down towards
    The flaming gate
    Bound by chains.
    Better than life
    For wasn't that life?
    It was a living hell.
    Swinging open
    Welcoming me
    I caused this.
    Last edited by P. Mortuus; October 5th, 2007 at 12:13 PM
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    Re: Write to this:October

    Breakdown
    By Jonathon

    Orbs float around my;
    manican like figure.
    Scattered images
    manage my brain -
    fending the abstract,
    off into space.
    In this twisted metal hell,
    I stay, in this -
    forcefield like cell...
    Muscles eager to speak,
    but refuse to move.
    Modern lashes blink
    from the concrete -
    personification's friend,
    the walls do have eyes.
    Ignorance pales in;
    the comparison,
    to the new beginning,
    of the ending -
    of the larger than life;
    b r e a k d o w n
    Artificial.Intelligence

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    Re: Write to this:October

    Cometh the ending
    by Reggie aka rosu

    We care not about the Earth man once said
    For the world is crumbling around him
    And nothing now is heard but the shriek of mans dread
    A crack appears in the backbone of mother nature
    Thousands of years we have done nothing but hurt her
    Corrupt her and take her for granted, ignoring her nurture
    She can take no more, she weeps as she falls
    Rain drops and thunder roars
    Wind flys and Lightning claws
    Smashing, burning, snapping, crunching, ending.
    Last edited by Eliab Harvey; October 25th, 2007 at 05:23 PM

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    Re: Write to this:October


    Heroes
    When the end is near heroes rise from darkest depths
    Those not chose but fighters, fighting until the death
    They wield the shield of light
    Protecting those frozen from the thought
    As fear grips those not open to possibly being caught
    Caught in the angry eye that lie inside the parted storm
    Catching glimpses of destruction noticeably being torn
    Annihilating the sinful like separating a rose from it's thorn
    Remembering it was here the home that they were born
    Do they stop the rebellion
    Leaving devastation to leave its wake
    Or do they use their heart of heart's
    Casting aside the honest mistake
    The heroes will always stand tall
    Even alone if they must
    It is not the inevitable but the possible that they trust
    If it were left down to the frozen
    Life as we know it would evaporate
    Through the turbulence would just be dust
    In history it wouldnt have a date

    Casito.


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    Re: Write to this:October

    When Gravity Never Mattered



    the spindle on the spinning wheel turns backward
    a mass of eyes watch from behind...
    walls rest their backs on our backs for once
    they lean on us for help...
    "please rebuild, gravity is stealing our bricks!"
    stripped into nothingness. a deterioration nation
    prouduced by tragedy and hand made by drama.
    the consistencies equivilent to inconsistencies
    falling up becomes possible -
    gravity's actions become the opposite,
    a cataclysmic metropolis.
    the walls try to save their own leaning posts...
    by sticking cables out to hold the chairs.
    "please, oh please... hold us in the air!"
    we're objects... they're beings
    we're walls... they're gripping hands -
    slipping slowly into the sadness of a bland,
    almost forced, suicidal decision.
    we the people, let go of what we were saving
    leaving a wall as battered as our country
    and making it so gravity... never mattered.

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    Re: Write to this:October

    As walls descend, memories fall like war time wounded men
    The world is nothing but a body, we're all parts within
    Eyes the sky, grounds the waist, shit beneath it. drop the fly
    You've got the lakes, rains the tears, his names disguised
    As god, him they fear, you die when he forgets you live
    Read that again cause i know you misunderstood my phrase
    Bad memories in a graveyard inside a coffin phases lays
    So when walls decsend, its him dropping a place from thoughts
    So when you die, its all because you were just a thought...
    that he forgot.
    Last edited by Pairadice; October 26th, 2007 at 11:52 PM

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    Re: Write to this:October

    Father's Word
    By White-Winter

    My daddy said, separating was a sin,
    Then it happened to him,
    The bridge of love had split,
    My heart was lost like a spirit,
    Touch was cold as thin ice,
    Breaking by a drop of rice,
    Direction for whom to follow changed,
    Leading me to be deranged,
    Clouds rushing, building up fear
    Waiting for that sunny day to appear...

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    Re: Write to this:October

    A massive abstract Illusion
    defying gravity with spider-man
    Silver surfer came to pummel our Planet
    He interrupted what i was writing, Damn
    I grabbed a brick or two then those bitches flew
    Shit, this is what i get for skipping school
    Grabbing at chairs and telephone wires
    Looked up and i was being sucked into a ball of Fire
    going up and up...higher.......SKYWARD
    THE SKY WAS A MONET SKY
    fuck a gauguin foreground lord if your spirit dissolved
    Please step forth now We closer to the fire my friend
    Sweat continously POURS OUTT!!!!
    SO MANY POSSIBLITIES
    Maybe we're being pulled up into God's bosom
    maybe he never forgot about these sinners and hoodlums...good Luck
    If i cloud i would run cause the light was so warm and blinding
    And if no one else looks for Him i promise I'll find him
    myriads of angels descended and played lyres
    with deep esoteric lyrics their voices pulled me out the Fire
    What looked like a black hole was now an inviting firmament
    The only worry i have is that this home isn't Permanent.......

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