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    N.B. Conference Champion
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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

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    he's been a biter since birth.. but Smoka's not gay on purpose
    it's not his fault.. when he was teething, his mother gave him verses
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    got your head in the clouds.. you ain't tough. this is mincemeat murder
    I'm here to bring you down to earth... n' push you six feet further
    you'll search the whole net. but try as you might.. it's good night son
    see the problem is, you can't find anyone better than me to BITE FROM
    quit actin crazy. tryin to convince us ya loony. always throwin fits
    bitch if you're a nut.. you're the one that hangs closest to my dick
    you don't amaze me. if anything your lack of talent makes us lazy
    yeah you're RB's biggest showmen... cuz you show men your anus daily
    s'lotta I gotta say. I coulda threw in a dis to knock your mother
    I was gonna get ugly... but from what I hear you got it covered
    I'm lettin it air.. look at ya past.. there's no defendin it there
    homie you pretended to die... just like we all pretended to care
    I know I said I was honest.. truth is I lie with the sly quickness
    I admit it, I'ma cheater.. but what I do with ya girl is my business
    you actually think you're dope? Josh you're not as fly as you should be
    but I can't blame you.. I'd be feelin myself too if I was a pussy
    I demand a clown's respect. never falter, I stand my ground n' wreck
    the only way I'll choke in this battle, is with my hands around ya neck
    ya so grotesque.. one sight of your face n' I have to smash a jerk
    faggot I should be battling Born.. not the fucking afterbirth
    bitch I'ma snap n' I'll kill you. ya verses suck.. stop it I flow hot
    if I happen to feel you.. it's cuz the texture droppin is so soft
    hoe I'm toppin it all off.. when I start blastin with this heat
    I can't stand you.. you keep collapsin cuz I smashed ya fuckin knees
    this is real I spit the truth. there's no denyin.. I'm damagin dudes
    take my word.. which I'm sure you were already plannin to do
    stomp you day n' night, til it's pitchblack, get cracked in the crown
    n' if the sun rises... then bitch I'll beat you back to the ground
    shit you'd think it'd be close.. the way you been boasting n' such
    it all comes down to the wire. cuz I'm like, wire you even posting you suck
    I get busy with heat. I don't play. you're gonna visit defeat
    but this ain't the end of your days.. trust me you'll be dizzy for weeks


    goodnight son

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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

    Quote Originally Posted by $pit last week
    lmao. you shoulda tried harder.
    heh..

    $pit can't hang with me, brace yaself cuz you bout to catch a hurtin dude
    I suggest ya plant ya feet, so after that grows I'll beat that version too
    What you got to say now? one punch'll leave ya pants covered in piss
    And after $pit's laid out, I'll take this title just like I did with his
    Then $pit was trying to tell me that I need to grow up and get a life..
    I guess you're right cuz postin on the net always supported ya kid and wife
    I had to check ya battle last week justa remember ya name cuz I forgot
    For some reason you know mine, so I'll remind you that Joe is halfa Josh
    You plugged ya soundclick a couple days ago, but as long as you been textin..
    Why would ya want anyone to know ya got softer adios than a timid mexican
    Ya try to act hella tough but I seen ya pics, and $pit's livin in a chubby hell
    So I'll make sure you don't go belly up...cuz then you'd only crush yaself...
    And his significant other is worse, if only you guys knew the hell she brings
    Bitch ain't wearing a G-string....shit's more like a A B C D E F G-string
    I know you & Lay is old an dead but it should get the LLL Courts influence
    So right after I put this hole in ya head, I guess I'll take a look into it
    So try to talk tough but when ya see me, I'll be approachin a scared fuck
    Cuz I'll walk up to you with a balled fist just to remind you of ya haircut
    Thinkin you can accuse me of bitin like half of ya verses ain't been seen
    So I guess in your eyes when you look in the mirror...you'd see me
    Yet LLL was straight and forgave, but let's stop with this lee-way
    This faggot drops more played than me droppin a line sayin he's played
    $pit's taking the title hands down, or that's what ya thinkin, ain't it?
    'Til ya woke up from ya wet dreams....wrapped in an electric blanket
    Plus you'll never be happy, cuz every chick ya see treats you like a disease
    Last time you saw Patty, she was drippin wet w/ grease and double cheesed
    That's not a compliment homie so drop what ya want but I got ya shook
    Fuck you up so bad that ya kid'll confuse ya face for a pop-up book
    This the third time I've been to the champ match and still ain't got exposure
    Hey, they say 3rd times a charm and after readin ya shit...it's a 4-leaf clover
    Cuz I leave ya blasted geek and I've found evidence that ya poor
    Talkin shit about Lay's job last week but I see he ain't say shit about yours
    Ya face is scary is hell so don't think my tactics were a blundered cause
    Cuz the only reason I faked my death was in hopes that you'd wander off




    Now give me my fucking title faggot....

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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

    got your head in the clouds.. you ain't tough. this is mincemeat murder
    I'm here to bring you down to earth... n' push you six feet further
    s'lotta I gotta say. I coulda threw in a dis to knock your mother
    I was gonna get ugly... but from what I hear you got it covered
    I'm lettin it air.. look at ya past.. there's no defendin it there
    homie you pretended to die... just like we all pretended to care
    I know I said I was honest.. truth is I lie with the sly quickness
    I admit it, I'ma cheater.. but what I do with ya girl is my business
    you actually think you're dope? Josh you're not as fly as you should be
    but I can't blame you.. I'd be feelin myself too if I was a pussy
    I get busy with heat. I don't play. you're gonna visit defeat
    but this ain't the end of your days.. trust me you'll be dizzy for weeks

    vs

    I know you & Lay is old an dead but it should get the LLL Courts influence
    So right after I put this hole in ya head, I guess I'll take a look into it
    So try to talk tough but when ya see me, I'll be approachin a scared fuck
    Cuz I'll walk up to you with a balled fist just to remind you of ya haircut
    That's not a compliment homie so drop what ya want but I got ya shook
    Fuck you up so bad that ya kid'll confuse ya face for a pop-up book

    yeah... this wasnt near as close as a champ match should be

    Spit completely outclassed you there Smoka

    v/$pit


    thx for the feedback... but u and i both know this dosen't count u just talked shit with him like all week and still are as of 2:04am saturday, lol

    dq'd


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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

    Alright I dont feel like going bar for bar.

    $pit - Came dope as hell every & fresh and pellucid, you also dropped some pretty hard bars there like the second one, err you didn't really have any lines that seemed force but a couple slightly,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

    Smoka - Dope verse but it's clear/obvious/hopefully safe to say you didn't drop a better verse in my opinion, some lines seemed forced only because its the title match I'm expectin good unforced bars i guess no hate I have no reason to hate either of you or dick ride either of you but this is definatly going to $pit weather this vote counts or not

    heh

    /V $pit


    EDIT: I'LL BE PM'N U TO EDIT YOUR VOTE TO LETTING US SEE Y U THOUGHT WHO WON... IF NOT THEN DQ'D.... THIS IS THE CHAMP MATCH I'M SURE U DON'T WANT ANY1 TO COME AND DO THIS TO U.. SO YEA


    -PHILLY
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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

    he's been a biter since birth.. but Smoka's not gay on purpose
    it's not his fault.. when he was teething, his mother gave him verses
    lol nice
    got your head in the clouds.. you ain't tough. this is mincemeat murder
    I'm here to bring you down to earth... n' push you six feet further
    nice flip
    you'll search the whole net. but try as you might.. it's good night son
    see the problem is, you can't find anyone better than me to BITE FROM
    okay
    quit actin crazy. tryin to convince us ya loony. always throwin fits
    bitch if you're a nut.. you're the one that hangs closest to my dick
    played
    you don't amaze me. if anything your lack of talent makes us lazy
    yeah you're RB's biggest showmen... cuz you show men your anus daily
    meh
    s'lotta I gotta say. I coulda threw in a dis to knock your mother
    I was gonna get ugly... but from what I hear you got it covered
    lol, funny
    I'm lettin it air.. look at ya past.. there's no defendin it there
    homie you pretended to die... just like we all pretended to care
    lol good personal, hit hard
    I know I said I was honest.. truth is I lie with the sly quickness
    I admit it, I'ma cheater.. but what I do with ya girl is my business
    lol good
    you actually think you're dope? Josh you're not as fly as you should be
    but I can't blame you.. I'd be feelin myself too if I was a pussy
    no, played
    I demand a clown's respect. never falter, I stand my ground n' wreck
    the only way I'll choke in this battle, is with my hands around ya neck
    okay, semi-played
    ya so grotesque.. one sight of your face n' I have to smash a jerk
    faggot I should be battling Born.. not the fucking afterbirth
    decent
    bitch I'ma snap n' I'll kill you. ya verses suck.. stop it I flow hot
    if I happen to feel you.. it's cuz the texture droppin is so soft
    seen the wordplay done better, average
    hoe I'm toppin it all off.. when I start blastin with this heat
    I can't stand you.. you keep collapsin cuz I smashed ya fuckin knees
    played
    this is real I spit the truth. there's no denyin.. I'm damagin dudes
    take my word.. which I'm sure you were already plannin to do
    cool flip
    stomp you day n' night, til it's pitchblack, get cracked in the crown
    n' if the sun rises... then bitch I'll beat you back to the ground
    nah
    shit you'd think it'd be close.. the way you been boasting n' such
    it all comes down to the wire. cuz I'm like, wire you even posting you suck
    played wordplay .. it's been done better
    I get busy with heat. I don't play. you're gonna visit defeat
    but this ain't the end of your days.. trust me you'll be dizzy for weeks
    decent daze flip..

    vs.

    $pit can't hang with me, brace yaself cuz you bout to catch a hurtin dude
    I suggest ya plant ya feet, so after that grows I'll beat that version too
    nice flip
    What you got to say now? one punch'll leave ya pants covered in piss
    And after $pit's laid out, I'll take this title just like I did with his
    decent
    Then $pit was trying to tell me that I need to grow up and get a life..
    I guess you're right cuz postin on the net always supported ya kid and wife
    kinda played concept.. but still hit decently
    I had to check ya battle last week justa remember ya name cuz I forgot
    For some reason you know mine, so I'll remind you that Joe is halfa Josh
    lol creativly funny.. but a tad on the forced side
    You plugged ya soundclick a couple days ago, but as long as you been textin..
    Why would ya want anyone to know ya got softer adios than a timid mexican
    played
    Ya try to act hella tough but I seen ya pics, and $pit's livin in a chubby hell
    So I'll make sure you don't go belly up...cuz then you'd only crush yaself...
    lol.. decent
    And his significant other is worse, if only you guys knew the hell she brings
    Bitch ain't wearing a G-string....shit's more like a A B C D E F G-string
    not feelin
    I know you & Lay is old an dead but it should get the LLL Courts influence
    So right after I put this hole in ya head, I guess I'll take a look into it
    cool
    So try to talk tough but when ya see me, I'll be approachin a scared fuck
    Cuz I'll walk up to you with a balled fist just to remind you of ya haircut
    ehh
    Thinkin you can accuse me of bitin like half of ya verses ain't been seen
    So I guess in your eyes when you look in the mirror...you'd see me
    ehh okay, didnt like the wording
    Yet LLL was straight and forgave, but let's stop with this lee-way
    This faggot drops more played than me droppin a line sayin he's played
    no..
    $pit's taking the title hands down, or that's what ya thinkin, ain't it?
    'Til ya woke up from ya wet dreams....wrapped in an electric blanket
    nice
    Plus you'll never be happy, cuz every chick ya see treats you like a disease
    Last time you saw Patty, she was drippin wet w/ grease and double cheesed
    ehh alright, concepts pretty old
    That's not a compliment homie so drop what ya want but I got ya shook
    Fuck you up so bad that ya kid'll confuse ya face for a pop-up book
    cool
    This the third time I've been to the champ match and still ain't got exposure
    Hey, they say 3rd times a charm and after readin ya shit...it's a 4-leaf clover
    meh
    Cuz I leave ya blasted geek and I've found evidence that ya poor
    Talkin shit about Lay's job last week but I see he ain't say shit about yours
    lol.. decent
    Ya face is scary is hell so don't think my tactics were a blundered cause
    Cuz the only reason I faked my death was in hopes that you'd wander off
    nah..

    he's been a biter since birth.. but Smoka's not gay on purpose
    it's not his fault.. when he was teething, his mother gave him verses
    got your head in the clouds.. you ain't tough. this is mincemeat murder
    I'm here to bring you down to earth... n' push you six feet further
    s'lotta I gotta say. I coulda threw in a dis to knock your mother
    I was gonna get ugly... but from what I hear you got it covered
    I'm lettin it air.. look at ya past.. there's no defendin it there
    homie you pretended to die... just like we all pretended to care
    this is real I spit the truth. there's no denyin.. I'm damagin dudes
    take my word.. which I'm sure you were already plannin to do

    vs.

    $pit can't hang with me, brace yaself cuz you bout to catch a hurtin dude
    I suggest ya plant ya feet, so after that grows I'll beat that version too
    I know you & Lay is old an dead but it should get the LLL Courts influence
    So right after I put this hole in ya head, I guess I'll take a look into it
    $pit's taking the title hands down, or that's what ya thinkin, ain't it?
    'Til ya woke up from ya wet dreams....wrapped in an electric blanket
    That's not a compliment homie so drop what ya want but I got ya shook
    Fuck you up so bad that ya kid'll confuse ya face for a pop-up book

    V/Spit.. fairly close, i thought after reading spit's verse Smoka was gunna take it.. Spit had too many played wordplays and some meh'ish stuff.. but smoka didn;t really capitalize imo.. smoka had some creative bars i liked but other then that his verse was merely average or played.. anyways cool verses from both, expected better but there were def. some nice hits.. congrats to both for making it this far, cool battle..
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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

    got your head in the clouds.. you ain't tough. this is mincemeat murder
    I'm here to bring you down to earth... n' push you six feet further
    you'll search the whole net. but try as you might.. it's good night son
    see the problem is, you can't find anyone better than me to BITE FROM
    quit actin crazy. tryin to convince us ya loony. always throwin fits
    bitch if you're a nut.. you're the one that hangs closest to my dick
    s'lotta I gotta say. I coulda threw in a dis to knock your mother
    I was gonna get ugly... but from what I hear you got it covered
    I know I said I was honest.. truth is I lie with the sly quickness
    I admit it, I'ma cheater.. but what I do with ya girl is my business
    ^^heh
    you actually think you're dope? Josh you're not as fly as you should be
    but I can't blame you.. I'd be feelin myself too if I was a pussy
    I demand a clown's respect. never falter, I stand my ground n' wreck
    the only way I'll choke in this battle, is with my hands around ya neck
    bitch I'ma snap n' I'll kill you. ya verses suck.. stop it I flow hot
    if I happen to feel you.. it's cuz the texture droppin is so soft
    ^^cool flip
    I get busy with heat. I don't play. you're gonna visit defeat
    but this ain't the end of your days.. trust me you'll be dizzy for weeks
    ^^heh

    vs.


    What you got to say now? one punch'll leave ya pants covered in piss
    And after $pit's laid out, I'll take this title just like I did with his
    ^^played wordplay, but cool flip
    I had to check ya battle last week justa remember ya name cuz I forgot
    For some reason you know mine, so I'll remind you that Joe is halfa Josh
    Ya try to act hella tough but I seen ya pics, and $pit's livin in a chubby hell
    So I'll make sure you don't go belly up...cuz then you'd only crush yaself...
    ^^hehe
    And his significant other is worse, if only you guys knew the hell she brings
    Bitch ain't wearing a G-string....shit's more like a A B C D E F G-string
    So try to talk tough but when ya see me, I'll be approachin a scared fuck
    Cuz I'll walk up to you with a balled fist just to remind you of ya haircut
    ^^lol
    Yet LLL was straight and forgave, but let's stop with this lee-way
    This faggot drops more played than me droppin a line sayin he's played
    That's not a compliment homie so drop what ya want but I got ya shook
    Fuck you up so bad that ya kid'll confuse ya face for a pop-up book
    This the third time I've been to the champ match and still ain't got exposure
    Hey, they say 3rd times a charm and after readin ya shit...it's a 4-leaf clover
    Cuz I leave ya blasted geek and I've found evidence that ya poor
    Talkin shit about Lay's job last week but I see he ain't say shit about yours

    First of all I aint saying all that was dope from you guys. It wasnt all dope, I quoted everything I didnt dislike. So it's hard to call, cos I got it even. Let's see....Spit had the better flow, as usual, but he also flipped a lot of concepts, and as usual worded them better. Also Spit used almost only one style of punch throughout his whole verse like...if you're something....it's cos something else....one positive statement....flipped into negative. Smoka was more creative and had more types of punches. For that reason I'ma give it to him, even though Spit's cool and Smoka's a prick a lot of the time, heh

    v/Smoka

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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

    he's been a biter since birth.. but Smoka's not gay on purpose
    it's not his fault.. when he was teething, his mother gave him verses
    Clever concept...not a hard shot though...
    got your head in the clouds.. you ain't tough. this is mincemeat murder
    I'm here to bring you down to earth... n' push you six feet further
    Blah...six feet...bury...pretty played...decent flip, but not for a champ match...
    you'll search the whole net. but try as you might.. it's good night son
    see the problem is, you can't find anyone better than me to BITE FROM
    Aight, but you said pretty much the same thing in your opener...
    quit actin crazy. tryin to convince us ya loony. always throwin fits
    bitch if you're a nut.. you're the one that hangs closest to my dick
    No, no, no...
    you don't amaze me. if anything your lack of talent makes us lazy
    yeah you're RB's biggest showmen... cuz you show men your anus daily
    This should have been kept talent related and not swerved towards a gay joke...
    s'lotta I gotta say. I coulda threw in a dis to knock your mother
    I was gonna get ugly... but from what I hear you got it covered
    Played...WTF Spit???
    I'm lettin it air.. look at ya past.. there's no defendin it there
    homie you pretended to die... just like we all pretended to care
    Barely...again, you're comin played...
    I know I said I was honest.. truth is I lie with the sly quickness
    I admit it, I'ma cheater.. but what I do with ya girl is my business
    Better...
    you actually think you're dope? Josh you're not as fly as you should be
    but I can't blame you.. I'd be feelin myself too if I was a pussy
    Basic, but still good...
    I demand a clown's respect. never falter, I stand my ground n' wreck
    the only way I'll choke in this battle, is with my hands around ya neck
    Seems a bit basic again...and this one not as good as the last one...
    ya so grotesque.. one sight of your face n' I have to smash a jerk
    faggot I should be battling Born.. not the fucking afterbirth
    Born/Afterbirth wordplay is pretty played, but since it wasn't about me and I was still mentioned, me likey!
    bitch I'ma snap n' I'll kill you. ya verses suck.. stop it I flow hot
    if I happen to feel you.. it's cuz the texture droppin is so soft
    Eh...
    hoe I'm toppin it all off.. when I start blastin with this heat
    I can't stand you.. you keep collapsin cuz I smashed ya fuckin knees
    No again...
    this is real I spit the truth. there's no denyin.. I'm damagin dudes
    take my word.. which I'm sure you were already plannin to do
    What? 3rd punch about him biting off you? This was the most clever though...
    stomp you day n' night, til it's pitchblack, get cracked in the crown
    n' if the sun rises... then bitch I'll beat you back to the ground
    Funny...concept, sun/son is pretty played, but nice flip...
    shit you'd think it'd be close.. the way you been boasting n' such
    it all comes down to the wire. cuz I'm like, wire you even posting you suck
    WIRE IS PLAYED, Spit!!! WTF, man...did you just not care???
    I get busy with heat. I don't play. you're gonna visit defeat
    but this ain't the end of your days.. trust me you'll be dizzy for weeks
    Days/Daze...come on, man...BLAH!

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    $pit can't hang with me, brace yaself cuz you bout to catch a hurtin dude
    I suggest ya plant ya feet, so after that grows I'll beat that version too
    Decent...
    What you got to say now? one punch'll leave ya pants covered in piss
    And after $pit's laid out, I'll take this title just like I did with his
    Didn't get it earlier, still fuckin don't...
    Then $pit was trying to tell me that I need to grow up and get a life..
    I guess you're right cuz postin on the net always supported ya kid and wife
    Blah...played concept...seen it against me, Com, Spit...anyone with a wife and kid has seen it...
    I had to check ya battle last week justa remember ya name cuz I forgot
    For some reason you know mine, so I'll remind you that Joe is halfa Josh
    Eh...sorta...
    You plugged ya soundclick a couple days ago, but as long as you been textin..
    Why would ya want anyone to know ya got softer adios than a timid mexican
    Funny visual...
    Ya try to act hella tough but I seen ya pics, and $pit's livin in a chubby hell
    So I'll make sure you don't go belly up...cuz then you'd only crush yaself...
    Haha! Funny shit...never seen it before...
    And his significant other is worse, if only you guys knew the hell she brings
    Bitch ain't wearing a G-string....shit's more like a A B C D E F G-string
    Ya reaching, man...
    I know you & Lay is old an dead but it should get the LLL Courts influence
    So right after I put this hole in ya head, I guess I'll take a look into it
    Set up was homo, but liked the punch alot...
    So try to talk tough but when ya see me, I'll be approachin a scared fuck
    Cuz I'll walk up to you with a balled fist just to remind you of ya haircut
    Hahahahaha!
    Thinkin you can accuse me of bitin like half of ya verses ain't been seen
    So I guess in your eyes when you look in the mirror...you'd see me
    No...
    Yet LLL was straight and forgave, but let's stop with this lee-way
    This faggot drops more played than me droppin a line sayin he's played
    Haha...pretty good considering how played he dropped...
    $pit's taking the title hands down, or that's what ya thinkin, ain't it?
    'Til ya woke up from ya wet dreams....wrapped in an electric blanket
    Wording sucked...concept was ok...
    Plus you'll never be happy, cuz every chick ya see treats you like a disease
    Last time you saw Patty, she was drippin wet w/ grease and double cheesed
    Haha, made me laugh a bit...
    That's not a compliment homie so drop what ya want but I got ya shook
    Fuck you up so bad that ya kid'll confuse ya face for a pop-up book
    Should be nice, but didn't quite hit dead on...
    This the third time I've been to the champ match and still ain't got exposure
    Hey, they say 3rd times a charm and after readin ya shit...it's a 4-leaf clover
    Wording off again, but nice punch anyway...
    Cuz I leave ya blasted geek and I've found evidence that ya poor
    Talkin shit about Lay's job last week but I see he ain't say shit about yours
    Eh...eh...eh...
    Ya face is scary is hell so don't think my tactics were a blundered cause
    Cuz the only reason I faked my death was in hopes that you'd wander off
    Uh...no...

    The shit in red...best punches...
    The others...not so much. Some were aight...

    I dunno...I feel Spit came real played...not hard like he usually is...
    Just wasn't a LLL Season winning verse...
    Smoke's was more direct...wittier...alot of fucked up wording...
    But I'll take fucked up wording over shit I've seen over and over again.

    That's it.

    Vote: Smoka Joka...

    Congrats, man.

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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

    you don't amaze me. if anything your lack of talent makes us lazy
    yeah you're RB's biggest showmen... cuz you show men your anus daily
    I demand a clown's respect. never falter, I stand my ground n' wreck
    the only way I'll choke in this battle, is with my hands around ya neck
    bitch I'ma snap n' I'll kill you. ya verses suck.. stop it I flow hot
    if I happen to feel you.. it's cuz the texture droppin is so soft


    vs


    Then $pit was trying to tell me that I need to grow up and get a life..
    I guess you're right cuz postin on the net always supported ya kid and wife




    Overall: not as strong as I expected you both to come, but IMO there is a clear winner, $pit was just more consistent, don't get me wrong Smoka suprised me and held his own but I think still think he has a way to go before he's dominating this league, Smoka you have nice concepts you just have to find a way to execute them funnier, you have the meaness, I can see you being one of the top heads next season (not that this placing doesnt make you that THIS season) just that people will know from the beginning... but yeah $pit takes this by dropping more lines that made me smile....

    vote $pit

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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

    i guess i can break down 34 fuckin lines.

    spit

    he's been a biter since birth.. but Smoka's not gay on purpose
    it's not his fault.. when he was teething, his mother gave him verses
    meh ok...
    .
    .
    .
    .
    .
    got your head in the clouds.. you ain't tough. this is mincemeat murder
    I'm here to bring you down to earth... n' push you six feet further
    aiight
    you'll search the whole net. but try as you might.. it's good night son
    see the problem is, you can't find anyone better than me to BITE FROM
    nice
    quit actin crazy. tryin to convince us ya loony. always throwin fits
    bitch if you're a nut.. you're the one that hangs closest to my dick
    lmfao nice
    you don't amaze me. if anything your lack of talent makes us lazy
    yeah you're RB's biggest showmen... cuz you show men your anus daily
    no
    s'lotta I gotta say. I coulda threw in a dis to knock your mother
    I was gonna get ugly... but from what I hear you got it covered
    ok
    I'm lettin it air.. look at ya past.. there's no defendin it there
    homie you pretended to die... just like we all pretended to care
    lmfao damnn
    I know I said I was honest.. truth is I lie with the sly quickness
    I admit it, I'ma cheater.. but what I do with ya girl is my business
    lmfao good
    you actually think you're dope? Josh you're not as fly as you should be
    but I can't blame you.. I'd be feelin myself too if I was a pussy
    ahaha DOPE
    I demand a clown's respect. never falter, I stand my ground n' wreck
    the only way I'll choke in this battle, is with my hands around ya neck
    nice
    ya so grotesque.. one sight of your face n' I have to smash a jerk
    faggot I should be battling Born.. not the fucking afterbirth
    lol, nice
    bitch I'ma snap n' I'll kill you. ya verses suck.. stop it I flow hot
    if I happen to feel you.. it's cuz the texture droppin is so soft
    meh
    hoe I'm toppin it all off.. when I start blastin with this heat
    I can't stand you.. you keep collapsin cuz I smashed ya fuckin knees
    meh..ok
    this is real I spit the truth. there's no denyin.. I'm damagin dudes
    take my word.. which I'm sure you were already plannin to do
    LMFAO. nice
    stomp you day n' night, til it's pitchblack, get cracked in the crown
    n' if the sun rises... then bitch I'll beat you back to the ground
    ok
    shit you'd think it'd be close.. the way you been boasting n' such
    it all comes down to the wire. cuz I'm like, wire you even posting you suck
    lol,
    I get busy with heat. I don't play. you're gonna visit defeat
    but this ain't the end of your days.. trust me you'll be dizzy for weeks
    nice

    overall. Spit really dropped some fire punches here. a few ones werent necessary but he was consistant throughout his whole drop. this was a dope drop 8.82/10

    Smoka

    $pit can't hang with me, brace yaself cuz you bout to catch a hurtin dude
    I suggest ya plant ya feet, so after that grows I'll beat that version too
    ok
    What you got to say now? one punch'll leave ya pants covered in piss
    And after $pit's laid out, I'll take this title just like I did with his
    ok
    Then $pit was trying to tell me that I need to grow up and get a life..
    I guess you're right cuz postin on the net always supported ya kid and wife
    lmfao, nice
    I had to check ya battle last week justa remember ya name cuz I forgot
    For some reason you know mine, so I'll remind you that Joe is halfa Josh
    ...
    You plugged ya soundclick a couple days ago, but as long as you been textin..
    Why would ya want anyone to know ya got softer adios than a timid mexican
    ok
    Ya try to act hella tough but I seen ya pics, and $pit's livin in a chubby hell
    So I'll make sure you don't go belly up...cuz then you'd only crush yaself...
    ok
    And his significant other is worse, if only you guys knew the hell she brings
    Bitch ain't wearing a G-string....shit's more like a A B C D E F G-string
    wtf lmfao
    I know you & Lay is old an dead but it should get the LLL Courts influence
    So right after I put this hole in ya head, I guess I'll take a look into it
    nice!
    So try to talk tough but when ya see me, I'll be approachin a scared fuck
    Cuz I'll walk up to you with a balled fist just to remind you of ya haircut
    nice
    Thinkin you can accuse me of bitin like half of ya verses ain't been seen
    So I guess in your eyes when you look in the mirror...you'd see me
    meh.
    Yet LLL was straight and forgave, but let's stop with this lee-way
    This faggot drops more played than me droppin a line sayin he's played
    meh
    $pit's taking the title hands down, or that's what ya thinkin, ain't it?
    'Til ya woke up from ya wet dreams....wrapped in an electric blanket
    meh
    Plus you'll never be happy, cuz every chick ya see treats you like a disease
    Last time you saw Patty, she was drippin wet w/ grease and double cheesed
    ok
    That's not a compliment homie so drop what ya want but I got ya shook
    Fuck you up so bad that ya kid'll confuse ya face for a pop-up book
    ok
    This the third time I've been to the champ match and still ain't got exposure
    Hey, they say 3rd times a charm and after readin ya shit...it's a 4-leaf clover
    meh
    Cuz I leave ya blasted geek and I've found evidence that ya poor
    Talkin shit about Lay's job last week but I see he ain't say shit about yours
    meh
    Ya face is scary is hell so don't think my tactics were a blundered cause
    Cuz the only reason I faked my death was in hopes that you'd wander off
    nice

    overall. cool verse. you had some nice punches in there. a few good ones, but alot of meh ones. 7.2/10

    v/Spit

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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

    he's been a biter since birth.. but Smoka's not gay on purpose
    it's not his fault.. when he was teething, his mother gave him verses
    Meh.
    .
    .
    .
    .
    got your head in the clouds.. you ain't tough. this is mincemeat murder
    I'm here to bring you down to earth... n' push you six feet further
    Decent
    you'll search the whole net. but try as you might.. it's good night son
    see the problem is, you can't find anyone better than me to BITE FROM
    Played
    quit actin crazy. tryin to convince us ya loony. always throwin fits
    bitch if you're a nut.. you're the one that hangs closest to my dick
    lol ok
    you don't amaze me. if anything your lack of talent makes us lazy
    yeah you're RB's biggest showmen... cuz you show men your anus daily
    ok
    s'lotta I gotta say. I coulda threw in a dis to knock your mother
    I was gonna get ugly... but from what I hear you got it covered
    lol cool
    I'm lettin it air.. look at ya past.. there's no defendin it there
    homie you pretended to die... just like we all pretended to care
    Played on him
    I know I said I was honest.. truth is I lie with the sly quickness
    I admit it, I'ma cheater.. but what I do with ya girl is my business
    ok
    you actually think you're dope? Josh you're not as fly as you should be
    but I can't blame you.. I'd be feelin myself too if I was a pussy
    Lmao nice

    I demand a clown's respect. never falter, I stand my ground n' wreck
    the only way I'll choke in this battle, is with my hands around ya neck
    lol cool
    ya so grotesque.. one sight of your face n' I have to smash a jerk
    faggot I should be battling Born.. not the fucking afterbirth
    Meh.
    bitch I'ma snap n' I'll kill you. ya verses suck.. stop it I flow hot
    if I happen to feel you.. it's cuz the texture droppin is so soft
    No.
    hoe I'm toppin it all off.. when I start blastin with this heat
    I can't stand you.. you keep collapsin cuz I smashed ya fuckin knees
    Played.
    this is real I spit the truth. there's no denyin.. I'm damagin dudes
    take my word.. which I'm sure you were already plannin to do
    Cool
    stomp you day n' night, til it's pitchblack, get cracked in the crown
    n' if the sun rises... then bitch I'll beat you back to the ground
    Decent
    shit you'd think it'd be close.. the way you been boasting n' such
    it all comes down to the wire. cuz I'm like, wire you even posting you suck
    meh wordplay
    I get busy with heat. I don't play. you're gonna visit defeat
    but this ain't the end of your days.. trust me you'll be dizzy for weeks
    Ok

    Overall a decent verse outta you spit..nothing super harsh but there were some cool lines in there.

    vs

    $pit can't hang with me, brace yaself cuz you bout to catch a hurtin dude
    I suggest ya plant ya feet, so after that grows I'll beat that version too
    lol nice
    What you got to say now? one punch'll leave ya pants covered in piss
    And after $pit's laid out, I'll take this title just like I did with his
    Cool
    Then $pit was trying to tell me that I need to grow up and get a life..
    I guess you're right cuz postin on the net always supported ya kid and wife
    Lmao
    I had to check ya battle last week justa remember ya name cuz I forgot
    For some reason you know mine, so I'll remind you that Joe is halfa Josh
    Naw.
    You plugged ya soundclick a couple days ago, but as long as you been textin..
    Why would ya want anyone to know ya got softer adios than a timid mexican
    meh.
    Ya try to act hella tough but I seen ya pics, and $pit's livin in a chubby hell
    So I'll make sure you don't go belly up...cuz then you'd only crush yaself...
    Ok
    And his significant other is worse, if only you guys knew the hell she brings
    Bitch ain't wearing a G-string....shit's more like a A B C D E F G-string
    lol wtf?
    I know you & Lay is old an dead but it should get the LLL Courts influence
    So right after I put this hole in ya head, I guess I'll take a look into it
    Lmao cool
    So try to talk tough but when ya see me, I'll be approachin a scared fuck
    Cuz I'll walk up to you with a balled fist just to remind you of ya haircut
    lol
    Thinkin you can accuse me of bitin like half of ya verses ain't been seen
    So I guess in your eyes when you look in the mirror...you'd see me
    decent
    Yet LLL was straight and forgave, but let's stop with this lee-way
    This faggot drops more played than me droppin a line sayin he's played
    No
    $pit's taking the title hands down, or that's what ya thinkin, ain't it?
    'Til ya woke up from ya wet dreams....wrapped in an electric blanket
    Ok
    Plus you'll never be happy, cuz every chick ya see treats you like a disease
    Last time you saw Patty, she was drippin wet w/ grease and double cheesed
    ok
    That's not a compliment homie so drop what ya want but I got ya shook
    Fuck you up so bad that ya kid'll confuse ya face for a pop-up book
    lol ok
    This the third time I've been to the champ match and still ain't got exposure
    Hey, they say 3rd times a charm and after readin ya shit...it's a 4-leaf clover
    lol
    Cuz I leave ya blasted geek and I've found evidence that ya poor
    Talkin shit about Lay's job last week but I see he ain't say shit about yours
    ok
    Ya face is scary is hell so don't think my tactics were a blundered cause
    Cuz the only reason I faked my death was in hopes that you'd wander off
    hmm..ok

    Cool verse outta you smoka..You had some dope lines..but also you had some wtf lines..But IMO your did enough to get the win with 1 or 2 more "Lmao" lines then spit.


    V/Smoka..Good battle.

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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

    WELL I CANT VOTE BUT I`LL LEAVE SOME FEED ANYHOW COZ IM BORED...


    he's been a biter since birth.. but Smoka's not gay on purpose
    it's not his fault.. when he was teething, his mother gave him verses
    DECENT
    got your head in the clouds.. you ain't tough. this is mincemeat murder
    I'm here to bring you down to earth... n' push you six feet further
    MEH
    you'll search the whole net. but try as you might.. it's good night son
    see the problem is, you can't find anyone better than me to BITE FROM
    MEH
    quit actin crazy. tryin to convince us ya loony. always throwin fits
    bitch if you're a nut.. you're the one that hangs closest to my dick
    MEH
    you don't amaze me. if anything your lack of talent makes us lazy
    yeah you're RB's biggest showmen... cuz you show men your anus daily
    OK
    s'lotta I gotta say. I coulda threw in a dis to knock your mother
    I was gonna get ugly... but from what I hear you got it covered
    LOL
    I'm lettin it air.. look at ya past.. there's no defendin it there
    homie you pretended to die... just like we all pretended to care
    LOL
    I know I said I was honest.. truth is I lie with the sly quickness
    I admit it, I'ma cheater.. but what I do with ya girl is my business
    OK
    you actually think you're dope? Josh you're not as fly as you should be
    but I can't blame you.. I'd be feelin myself too if I was a pussy
    COOL
    I demand a clown's respect. never falter, I stand my ground n' wreck
    the only way I'll choke in this battle, is with my hands around ya neck
    MEH
    ya so grotesque.. one sight of your face n' I have to smash a jerk
    faggot I should be battling Born.. not the fucking afterbirth
    LOL
    bitch I'ma snap n' I'll kill you. ya verses suck.. stop it I flow hot
    if I happen to feel you.. it's cuz the texture droppin is so soft
    COOL WORDPLAY
    hoe I'm toppin it all off.. when I start blastin with this heat
    I can't stand you.. you keep collapsin cuz I smashed ya fuckin knees
    PLAYED
    this is real I spit the truth. there's no denyin.. I'm damagin dudes
    take my word.. which I'm sure you were already plannin to do
    OK I GUESS
    stomp you day n' night, til it's pitchblack, get cracked in the crown
    n' if the sun rises... then bitch I'll beat you back to the ground
    DECENT FLIP ON AN OLD CONCEPT
    shit you'd think it'd be close.. the way you been boasting n' such
    it all comes down to the wire. cuz I'm like, wire you even posting you suck
    HA
    I get busy with heat. I don't play. you're gonna visit defeat
    but this ain't the end of your days.. trust me you'll be dizzy for weeks
    OK

    vs

    $pit can't hang with me, brace yaself cuz you bout to catch a hurtin dude
    I suggest ya plant ya feet, so after that grows I'll beat that version too
    DECENT
    What you got to say now? one punch'll leave ya pants covered in piss
    And after $pit's laid out, I'll take this title just like I did with his
    DECENT
    Then $pit was trying to tell me that I need to grow up and get a life..
    I guess you're right cuz postin on the net always supported ya kid and wife
    STRAIGHT DISS, OK
    I had to check ya battle last week justa remember ya name cuz I forgot
    For some reason you know mine, so I'll remind you that Joe is halfa Josh
    GOOD WORPLAY
    You plugged ya soundclick a couple days ago, but as long as you been textin..
    Why would ya want anyone to know ya got softer adios than a timid mexican
    LOL
    Ya try to act hella tough but I seen ya pics, and $pit's livin in a chubby hell
    So I'll make sure you don't go belly up...cuz then you'd only crush yaself...
    OK
    And his significant other is worse, if only you guys knew the hell she brings
    Bitch ain't wearing a G-string....shit's more like a A B C D E F G-string
    MEH
    I know you & Lay is old an dead but it should get the LLL Courts influence
    So right after I put this hole in ya head, I guess I'll take a look into it
    CREATIVE BUT NOT HARSH
    So try to talk tough but when ya see me, I'll be approachin a scared fuck
    Cuz I'll walk up to you with a balled fist just to remind you of ya haircut
    NOT SEEN HIS HAIR BUT STILL COOL
    Thinkin you can accuse me of bitin like half of ya verses ain't been seen
    So I guess in your eyes when you look in the mirror...you'd see me
    MEH
    Yet LLL was straight and forgave, but let's stop with this lee-way
    This faggot drops more played than me droppin a line sayin he's played
    NO
    $pit's taking the title hands down, or that's what ya thinkin, ain't it?
    'Til ya woke up from ya wet dreams....wrapped in an electric blanket
    OK
    Plus you'll never be happy, cuz every chick ya see treats you like a disease
    Last time you saw Patty, she was drippin wet w/ grease and double cheesed
    CORNY, MEH
    That's not a compliment homie so drop what ya want but I got ya shook
    Fuck you up so bad that ya kid'll confuse ya face for a pop-up book
    MEH
    This the third time I've been to the champ match and still ain't got exposure
    Hey, they say 3rd times a charm and after readin ya shit...it's a 4-leaf clover
    MEH
    Cuz I leave ya blasted geek and I've found evidence that ya poor
    Talkin shit about Lay's job last week but I see he ain't say shit about yours
    MEH
    Ya face is scary is hell so don't think my tactics were a blundered cause
    Cuz the only reason I faked my death was in hopes that you'd wander off
    MEH


    SPIT HAD SOME MEH STUFF, SMOKA FELL OFF TOWARDS THE END. WAS REALLY CLOSE.

    GOOD BATTLE
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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

    he's been a biter since birth.. but Smoka's not gay on purpose
    it's not his fault.. when he was teething, his mother gave him verses
    this is ok but not much more
    got your head in the clouds.. you ain't tough. this is mincemeat murder
    I'm here to bring you down to earth... n' push you six feet further
    nice wording, 6ft is played but u made it ok
    you'll search the whole net. but try as you might.. it's good night son
    see the problem is, you can't find anyone better than me to BITE FROM
    ok but kinda self glory and did he bite from u?
    quit actin crazy. tryin to convince us ya loony. always throwin fits
    bitch if you're a nut.. you're the one that hangs closest to my dick
    ha but kinda played
    you don't amaze me. if anything your lack of talent makes us lazy
    yeah you're RB's biggest showmen... cuz you show men your anus daily
    rofl
    s'lotta I gotta say. I coulda threw in a dis to knock your mother
    I was gonna get ugly... but from what I hear you got it covered
    nice
    I'm lettin it air.. look at ya past.. there's no defendin it there
    homie you pretended to die... just like we all pretended to care
    lmaooo, played personal but funny flip
    I know I said I was honest.. truth is I lie with the sly quickness
    I admit it, I'ma cheater.. but what I do with ya girl is my business
    lol damn u on a streak
    you actually think you're dope? Josh you're not as fly as you should be
    but I can't blame you.. I'd be feelin myself too if I was a pussy
    haha wow
    I demand a clown's respect. never falter, I stand my ground n' wreck
    the only way I'll choke in this battle, is with my hands around ya neck
    ok ok
    ya so grotesque.. one sight of your face n' I have to smash a jerk
    faggot I should be battling Born.. not the fucking afterbirth
    eh
    bitch I'ma snap n' I'll kill you. ya verses suck.. stop it I flow hot
    if I happen to feel you.. it's cuz the texture droppin is so soft
    nice
    hoe I'm toppin it all off.. when I start blastin with this heat
    I can't stand you.. you keep collapsin cuz I smashed ya fuckin knees
    ok ok
    this is real I spit the truth. there's no denyin.. I'm damagin dudes
    take my word.. which I'm sure you were already plannin to do
    lol, would be a lot better if he did bite from u
    stomp you day n' night, til it's pitchblack, get cracked in the crown
    n' if the sun rises... then bitch I'll beat you back to the ground
    naa
    shit you'd think it'd be close.. the way you been boasting n' such
    it all comes down to the wire. cuz I'm like, wire you even posting you suck
    ha ok
    I get busy with heat. I don't play. you're gonna visit defeat
    but this ain't the end of your days.. trust me you'll be dizzy for weeks
    cool closer

    vs.

    $pit can't hang with me, brace yaself cuz you bout to catch a hurtin dude
    I suggest ya plant ya feet, so after that grows I'll beat that version too
    ok
    What you got to say now? one punch'll leave ya pants covered in piss
    And after $pit's laid out, I'll take this title just like I did with his
    played as fuck
    Then $pit was trying to tell me that I need to grow up and get a life..
    I guess you're right cuz postin on the net always supported ya kid and wife
    statementish
    I had to check ya battle last week justa remember ya name cuz I forgot
    For some reason you know mine, so I'll remind you that Joe is halfa Josh
    this is wack dawg.. cmon
    You plugged ya soundclick a couple days ago, but as long as you been textin..
    Why would ya want anyone to know ya got softer adios than a timid mexican
    haha nice wordplay
    Ya try to act hella tough but I seen ya pics, and $pit's livin in a chubby hell
    So I'll make sure you don't go belly up...cuz then you'd only crush yaself...
    naa
    And his significant other is worse, if only you guys knew the hell she brings
    Bitch ain't wearing a G-string....shit's more like a A B C D E F G-string
    u can't say g-string twice in one punch. fucks up the flow. ok punch
    I know you & Lay is old an dead but it should get the LLL Courts influence
    So right after I put this hole in ya head, I guess I'll take a look into it
    nice
    So try to talk tough but when ya see me, I'll be approachin a scared fuck
    Cuz I'll walk up to you with a balled fist just to remind you of ya haircut
    if he got his haircut bald then it's not a diss cuz he wanted it. if his hair is bald then it is a diss.
    Thinkin you can accuse me of bitin like half of ya verses ain't been seen
    So I guess in your eyes when you look in the mirror...you'd see me
    uhh na
    Yet LLL was straight and forgave, but let's stop with this lee-way
    This faggot drops more played than me droppin a line sayin he's played
    eh
    $pit's taking the title hands down, or that's what ya thinkin, ain't it?
    'Til ya woke up from ya wet dreams....wrapped in an electric blanket
    ok
    Plus you'll never be happy, cuz every chick ya see treats you like a disease
    Last time you saw Patty, she was drippin wet w/ grease and double cheesed
    who is patty? wack *further explained why it is wack in chat*
    That's not a compliment homie so drop what ya want but I got ya shook
    Fuck you up so bad that ya kid'll confuse ya face for a pop-up book
    ok
    This the third time I've been to the champ match and still ain't got exposure
    Hey, they say 3rd times a charm and after readin ya shit...it's a 4-leaf clover
    what? *this is just wack. the charm/clover wordplay is decent but the wording is off completely. first of all, 3rd times a charm and 4-leaf clover both mean goodluck, and therefore your punch is saying the same thing twice. it is redundant. second of all i say the wording is off because the way it is u are calling his verse a 4-leaf clover*
    Cuz I leave ya blasted geek and I've found evidence that ya poor
    Talkin shit about Lay's job last week but I see he ain't say shit about yours
    missed the personal *if you are saying this is one i didn't get you are right. i didn't read where spit was talking about lay's job. if u are trying to say that spit has no job because lay didnt talk about it then that's just stupid. maybe he doesn't know what he does, and that's why he didnt say anything about it. like i said, i didnt read the chat where spit said that so idk if thats even where ur trying to go with the punch but the way u worded it led me to believe that's what u were trying to get at.*
    Ya face is scary is hell so don't think my tactics were a blundered cause
    Cuz the only reason I faked my death was in hopes that you'd wander off
    idk why he'd wander off? *first of all the way u worded it makes this not a punch at all. it is a statement as to why u faked ur death... also u gave no reasoning in the punch or setup as to why he would wander off. if u died i would no wander off. why would anybody? makes no sense.*

    this is an easy vote imo. more than half of smoka's verse was worded horribly. he made decent punches into wack punches cuz they don't make sense as a punch. and they are waaay too wordy. simple wording with a clever diss are always the best kind of punches. complex wording only leads to trouble, and that's exactly where it took u, smoka. spit had the better punches and better wording. to be honest i can take the 3 best punches out of spit's verse and he'd still win this one. there's a hands down LLL champion here.

    v/ $pit
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    Re: LLL Season 7 Championship: SmokaJoka vs $pitac

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    he's been a biter since birth.. but Smoka's not gay on purpose
    it's not his fault.. when he was teething, his mother gave him verses
    alright'ish
    got your head in the clouds.. you ain't tough. this is mincemeat murder
    I'm here to bring you down to earth... n' push you six feet further
    ok, this was cool
    you'll search the whole net. but try as you might.. it's good night son
    see the problem is, you can't find anyone better than me to BITE FROM
    ok @ best
    quit actin crazy. tryin to convince us ya loony. always throwin fits
    bitch if you're a nut.. you're the one that hangs closest to my dick
    nah.
    you don't amaze me. if anything your lack of talent makes us lazy
    yeah you're RB's biggest showmen... cuz you show men your anus daily
    lol.
    s'lotta I gotta say. I coulda threw in a dis to knock your mother
    I was gonna get ugly... but from what I hear you got it covered
    lol. i liked this
    I'm lettin it air.. look at ya past.. there's no defendin it there
    homie you pretended to die... just like we all pretended to care
    lol. this made me chuckle.
    I know I said I was honest.. truth is I lie with the sly quickness
    I admit it, I'ma cheater.. but what I do with ya girl is my business
    this was nice also
    you actually think you're dope? Josh you're not as fly as you should be
    but I can't blame you.. I'd be feelin myself too if I was a pussy
    i liked this. cool
    I demand a clown's respect. never falter, I stand my ground n' wreck
    the only way I'll choke in this battle, is with my hands around ya neck
    nooo.
    ya so grotesque.. one sight of your face n' I have to smash a jerk
    faggot I should be battling Born.. not the fucking afterbirth
    meh.
    bitch I'ma snap n' I'll kill you. ya verses suck.. stop it I flow hot
    if I happen to feel you.. it's cuz the texture droppin is so soft
    alright. and yes i got the punch.
    hoe I'm toppin it all off.. when I start blastin with this heat
    I can't stand you.. you keep collapsin cuz I smashed ya fuckin knees
    eh..
    this is real I spit the truth. there's no denyin.. I'm damagin dudes
    take my word.. which I'm sure you were already plannin to do
    the bite shit is getting overused.
    stomp you day n' night, til it's pitchblack, get cracked in the crown
    n' if the sun rises... then bitch I'll beat you back to the ground
    decent
    shit you'd think it'd be close.. the way you been boasting n' such
    it all comes down to the wire. cuz I'm like, wire you even posting you suck
    ehh.
    I get busy with heat. I don't play. you're gonna visit defeat
    but this ain't the end of your days.. trust me you'll be dizzy for weeks
    alright closer


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    $pit can't hang with me, brace yaself cuz you bout to catch a hurtin dude
    I suggest ya plant ya feet, so after that grows I'll beat that version too
    alright.
    What you got to say now? one punch'll leave ya pants covered in piss
    And after $pit's laid out, I'll take this title just like I did with his
    nah. i het the lay doubt shit but meh
    Then $pit was trying to tell me that I need to grow up and get a life..
    I guess you're right cuz postin on the net always supported ya kid and wife
    ehh.
    I had to check ya battle last week justa remember ya name cuz I forgot
    For some reason you know mine, so I'll remind you that Joe is halfa Josh
    ehh, reaching
    You plugged ya soundclick a couple days ago, but as long as you been textin..
    Why would ya want anyone to know ya got softer adios than a timid mexican
    this was cool
    Ya try to act hella tough but I seen ya pics, and $pit's livin in a chubby hell
    So I'll make sure you don't go belly up...cuz then you'd only crush yaself...
    lol.
    And his significant other is worse, if only you guys knew the hell she brings
    Bitch ain't wearing a G-string....shit's more like a A B C D E F G-string
    nah, i wasn't feeling this. and yes i got it.
    I know you & Lay is old an dead but it should get the LLL Courts influence
    So right after I put this hole in ya head, I guess I'll take a look into it
    i was feeling this, cool
    So try to talk tough but when ya see me, I'll be approachin a scared fuck
    Cuz I'll walk up to you with a balled fist just to remind you of ya haircut
    lol. nice
    Thinkin you can accuse me of bitin like half of ya verses ain't been seen
    So I guess in your eyes when you look in the mirror...you'd see me
    ehh.
    Yet LLL was straight and forgave, but let's stop with this lee-way
    This faggot drops more played than me droppin a line sayin he's played
    ok.
    $pit's taking the title hands down, or that's what ya thinkin, ain't it?
    'Til ya woke up from ya wet dreams....wrapped in an electric blanket
    nah.
    Plus you'll never be happy, cuz every chick ya see treats you like a disease
    Last time you saw Patty, she was drippin wet w/ grease and double cheesed
    i get it, but i wasn't feeling this punch.
    That's not a compliment homie so drop what ya want but I got ya shook
    Fuck you up so bad that ya kid'll confuse ya face for a pop-up book
    eh, wording let this concept down.
    This the third time I've been to the champ match and still ain't got exposure
    Hey, they say 3rd times a charm and after readin ya shit...it's a 4-leaf clover
    umm, iffy.
    Cuz I leave ya blasted geek and I've found evidence that ya poor
    Talkin shit about Lay's job last week but I see he ain't say shit about yours
    nah.
    Ya face is scary is hell so don't think my tactics were a blundered cause
    Cuz the only reason I faked my death was in hopes that you'd wander off
    didn't like this.


    ok, well idk i felt $pit got his kind of easily imo. smokas verse was very inconsistent and his wording was iffy. if he would have gotten the wording down on some of these punches this could have gone the other way. but $put came with some nice punches and was more consistent with punches. he also had some shit that made me laugh. the only line that i can remember from smokas verse right now is the balled fist one, shit was dope. but he just wasn't consistent enough to get the win here. so in all honesty. i got $pit taking this one here. peace dudes.

    V/ - $pit

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