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Lethal Lyricists League Heavyweight Title Bout
Champion: SmokaJoka
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#1 Contender: Ancel
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Last edited by Mars.; October 5th, 2007 at 10:00 PM
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Lol, sure
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peeps say your above me, they don't think you'll get toppled b
so i always where a helmet...to prevent bullshit from falling on top of me
man your shit's deadly...literally i peeped the soundclick with no answer
your music's so square repeating smoka could cause lung cancer
The leagues bundled up, fuck it i'll just walk over the son of luck
it's good joka can laugh at his own shit...it makes one of us
he's good to teach the young, & show just what a real mod can do
i've seen smoka pack a punch...sandwich, and some other shit for school
the regular season nearing its end so quick it feels like illusion
so the last weak...pretty much sums up my opponents conclusion
why did we have to wait so long for smokas pics? see i been known...
you had the face of a ghost, which turned out to be a natural skintone
damn im killin' you dude, bossin up you must feel like your tough
but your shit comes off as smooth, stainless...shit anything but rough
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Last edited by Mars.; October 5th, 2007 at 09:59 PM
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Ancel gettin the title? no, we already know you ain't droppin top notch
Sucha square, this fuckas chalk outline'll look like a game of hop scotch
And you ain't no gangsta, so when I roll through ya hood..you dead bitch
Treat you like McDonald's when I drive-thru in less than 30 seconds
So fuck outta here, you ain't winnin this cuz ya soon to be minced meat
Only fucking title you get, is leader of most crews that die within a week
You a fragile faggot, so block and duck if ya want..but I wouldn't advise it
Cuz you gettin battered son, then it's lights out....like a Chrit diet
You causin riots and ya won't make friends spittin that shit in a concert
But hey...
After the show you'd fit into a crowd..of medical examiners and doctors
As for ya girl? well I wasn't gonna say much....but I know this
Ancel never sleeps alone....his trailer got plenty of roaches
And how the fuck are you even in this match cuz I hate to say I told ya
But when I first set this battle it was LLL HW: ...?... vs. SmokaJoka
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and I was going to cut my square line but I realized you used yours in a different context...so word
*vote goes here*
really i'll b back in like 10 mins
EDIT: ok so it wasn't 10 mins
peeps say your above me, they don't think you'll get toppled b
so i always where a helmet...to prevent bullshit from falling on top of me
iight
man your shit's deadly...literally i peeped the soundclick with no answer
your music's so square repeating smoka could cause lung cancer
meh
The leagues bundled up, fuck it i'll just walk over the son of luck
it's good joka can laugh at his own shit...it makes one of us
meh
he's good to teach the young, & show just what a real mod can do
i've seen smoka pack a punch...sandwich, and some other shit for school
overused concept
the regular season nearing its end so quick it feels like illusion
so the last weak...pretty much sums up my opponents conclusion
mrh/iight
why did we have to wait so long for smokas pics? see i been known...
you had the face of a ghost, which turned out to be a natural skintone
ha
damn im killin' you dude, bossin up you must feel like your tough
but your shit comes off as smooth, stainless...shit anything but rough
meh
vs
Ancel gettin the title? no, we already know you ain't droppin top notch
Sucha square, this fuckas chalk outline'll look like a game of hop scotch
square punches are played, nice new flip tho
And you ain't no gangsta, so when I roll through ya hood..you dead bitch
Treat you like McDonald's when I drive-thru in less than 30 seconds
meh
So fuck outta here, you ain't winnin this cuz ya soon to be minced meat
Only fucking title you get, is leader of most crews that die within a week
overused concept, plus i think this idea was said already against him
You a fragile faggot, so block and duck if ya want..but I wouldn't advise it
Cuz you gettin battered son, then it's lights out....like a Chrit diet
meh/iight
You causin riots and ya won't make friends spittin that shit in a concert
But hey...
After the show you'd fit into a crowd..of medical examiners and doctors
ha, clever
As for ya girl? well I wasn't gonna say much....but I know this
Ancel never sleeps alone....his trailer got plenty of roaches
lol, but meh
And how the fuck are you even in this match cuz I hate to say I told ya
But when I first set this battle it was LLL HW: ...?... vs. SmokaJoka
meh, but haha.. u kno why
V/smoka... both had some played lines... but ancel had 2 i liked verses smoka's 3 1/2... besides his opener kinda took it for me.. not bad battle
Last edited by Philly®; October 5th, 2007 at 11:47 PM
peeps say your above me, they don't think you'll get toppled b
so i always where a helmet...to prevent bullshit from falling on top of me
^^pretty played, slightly original flip
man your shit's deadly...literally i peeped the soundclick with no answer
your music's so square repeating smoka could cause lung cancer
^^aight, needed better execution
The leagues bundled up, fuck it i'll just walk over the son of luck
it's good joka can laugh at his own shit...it makes one of us
^^not bad
he's good to teach the young, & show just what a real mod can do
i've seen smoka pack a punch...sandwich, and some other shit for school
^^kinda played, aight flip
the regular season nearing its end so quick it feels like illusion
so the last weak...pretty much sums up my opponents conclusion
^^gave it away by spelling it "weak" plus that wordplay is played , needs a mad original flip
why did we have to wait so long for smokas pics? see i been known...
you had the face of a ghost, which turned out to be a natural skintone
^^blah, boring
damn im killin' you dude, bossin up you must feel like your tough
but your shit comes off as smooth, stainless...shit anything but rough
^^aight
vs.
Ancel gettin the title? no, we already know you ain't droppin top notch
Sucha square, this fuckas chalk outline'll look like a game of hop scotch
^^I dont care if people have used "square" wordplay, this was clever n original
And you ain't no gangsta, so when I roll through ya hood..you dead bitch
Treat you like McDonald's when I drive-thru in less than 30 seconds
^^aight
So fuck outta here, you ain't winnin this cuz ya soon to be minced meat
Only fucking title you get, is leader of most crews that die within a week
^^played
You a fragile faggot, so block and duck if ya want..but I wouldn't advise it
Cuz you gettin battered son, then it's lights out....like a Chrit diet
^^meh
You causin riots and ya won't make friends spittin that shit in a concert
But hey...
After the show you'd fit into a crowd..of medical examiners and doctors
^^I like
As for ya girl? well I wasn't gonna say much....but I know this
Ancel never sleeps alone....his trailer got plenty of roaches
^^kinda reaching
And how the fuck are you even in this match cuz I hate to say I told ya
But when I first set this battle it was LLL HW: ...?... vs. SmokaJoka
^^so?
v/smoka for those 2 that stood out, they were cool
drop a vote on mine peeps
peeps say your above me, they don't think you'll get toppled b
so i always where a helmet...to prevent bullshit from falling on top of me
it still falls on u dog.
man your shit's deadly...literally i peeped the soundclick with no answer
your music's so square repeating smoka could cause lung cancer
lol haha
The leagues bundled up, fuck it i'll just walk over the son of luck
it's good joka can laugh at his own shit...it makes one of us
weak execushuunnnnnnn
he's good to teach the young, & show just what a real mod can do
i've seen smoka pack a punch...sandwich, and some other shit for school
lol simple and nice
the regular season nearing its end so quick it feels like illusion
so the last weak...pretty much sums up my opponents conclusion
OMG HOW ORIGINAL! (joking) this sucked doo doo get creative Pablo
why did we have to wait so long for smokas pics? see i been known...
you had the face of a ghost, which turned out to be a natural skintone
lol nice
damn im killin' you dude, bossin up you must feel like your tough
but your shit comes off as smooth, stainless...shit anything but rough
clash of adjectives here, i see what you tried but it makes it hard to decide which quality is good or bad
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Ancel gettin the title? no, we already know you ain't droppin top notch
Sucha square, this fuckas chalk outline'll look like a game of hop scotch
ok enough with the square punches
And you ain't no gangsta, so when I roll through ya hood..you dead bitch
Treat you like McDonald's when I drive-thru in less than 30 seconds
lol nice
So fuck outta here, you ain't winnin this cuz ya soon to be minced meat
Only fucking title you get, is leader of most crews that die within a week
ROFLMFAOHHHHHHIUGFASFRSDUHGkgbftrefuuhduhdsudchudh d *death*
You a fragile faggot, so block and duck if ya want..but I wouldn't advise it
Cuz you gettin battered son, then it's lights out....like a Chrit diet
haha
You causin riots and ya won't make friends spittin that shit in a concert
But hey...
After the show you'd fit into a crowd..of medical examiners and doctors
nyeh
As for ya girl? well I wasn't gonna say much....but I know this
Ancel never sleeps alone....his trailer got plenty of roaches
lmfao
And how the fuck are you even in this match cuz I hate to say I told ya
But when I first set this battle it was LLL HW: ...?... vs. SmokaJoka
haha
really really close battle and that's honestly what i thought, i got smoka by one line, if ancel had executed a couple punches better it'd be a different story cus he had some potentially ill shit, but execution of some punches let him down
v/ smoka, good battle
leave feed and you'll get feed back...I'm sure Ancel will do the same....I'll be hitting battles later tonight when I get to work
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peeps say your above me, they don't think you'll get toppled b
so i always where a helmet...to prevent bullshit from falling on top of me
..haha. this was dope..
man your shit's deadly...literally i peeped the soundclick with no answer
your music's so square repeating smoka could cause lung cancer
..haha! i never seen this before. dope, yo..
The leagues bundled up, fuck it i'll just walk over the son of luck
it's good joka can laugh at his own shit...it makes one of us
..haha, never seen this either. pretty cool..
he's good to teach the young, & show just what a real mod can do
i've seen smoka pack a punch...sandwich, and some other shit for school
..naw, man. punches like this are old, sorry broham..
the regular season nearing its end so quick it feels like illusion
so the last weak...pretty much sums up my opponents conclusion
..naw, i was expectin somethin bout this, but this wasn't too great..
why did we have to wait so long for smokas pics? see i been known...
you had the face of a ghost, which turned out to be a natural skintone
..naw! this is old to. better luck next time..
damn im killin' you dude, bossin up you must feel like your tough
but your shit comes off as smooth, stainless...shit anything but rough
..ehh, i dunno, wasn't really feelin this. maybe better wordin..
vs.
Ancel gettin the title? no, we already know you ain't droppin top notch
Sucha square, this fuckas chalk outline'll look like a game of hop scotch
..see this wouldn't have been bad if he didn't just use a square punch. takes away from the punch. but not bad..
And you ain't no gangsta, so when I roll through ya hood..you dead bitch
Treat you like McDonald's when I drive-thru in less than 30 seconds
..naw! this was a lil lame and could'a been worded better to me..
So fuck outta here, you ain't winnin this cuz ya soon to be minced meat
Only fucking title you get, is leader of most crews that die within a week
..ha! i know EXACTLY where ur comin from. pretty cool..
You a fragile faggot, so block and duck if ya want..but I wouldn't advise it
Cuz you gettin battered son, then it's lights out....like a Chrit diet
..haha! yea, this shit was funny. tho i feel like somethin was missin/incomplete..
You causin riots and ya won't make friends spittin that shit in a concert
But hey...
After the show you'd fit into a crowd..of medical examiners and doctors
..uhh, i guess. this could'a been done better to me..
As for ya girl? well I wasn't gonna say much....but I know this
Ancel never sleeps alone....his trailer got plenty of roaches
..well, u really didnt say much about his broad and referin to his chick bein bugz wasn't a good set up. so u lost points there..
And how the fuck are you even in this match cuz I hate to say I told ya
But when I first set this battle it was LLL HW: ...?... vs. SmokaJoka
..man, u could'a do SOO much better with this punch. i mean, its ok, but u could'a had a doper line come from this.. IMO..
i dunno. this battle was meh at best. i really liked Ancel's "square" line. i've never seen it before. i've seen punches close to smoka's "square" line and the fact that ancel had one to took away from its impact. anc's opener was pretty raw as well as his "make u one of us" line. the rest of it was either meh or just not hittin after that. smoka had some ok lines. his wordin and some of his executions be buggin me though. not too much rhyme in his lyrics and some of them come off as bland. like, i really enjoy'd his "crew dies in a week" line. that shit was cool but could'a been made more wittier. im startin to notice that smoka has more statement type punches in his verses but sometimes come off well. alot of potential in smoka's verse just wasn't pullin the punches off as well as i know he can. anywho, im a be back later tonight to put my official vote.
EDIT: ok, no hate to either, but i've reviewed the battles. i see smoka havin a consistant type'a verse for the fact it was pretty much punch after punch, may have not been hard, but pretty consistant. ancel came off strong and ended kind'a weak. but was consistant as well. so with that said, im gonna have to give it to ancel. just harder punches and flowed a bit better.
v/ ancel.. HAWLA @ me vs. advisory!
Last edited by Untold.; October 7th, 2007 at 07:14 PM
peeps say your above me, they don't think you'll get toppled b
so i always where a helmet...to prevent bullshit from falling on top of me
lmfao, nice
man your shit's deadly...literally i peeped the soundclick with no answer
your music's so square repeating smoka could cause lung cancer
dope again
The leagues bundled up, fuck it i'll just walk over the son of luck
it's good joka can laugh at his own shit...it makes one of us
cool'ish
he's good to teach the young, & show just what a real mod can do
i've seen smoka pack a punch...sandwich, and some other shit for school
Played homie
the regular season nearing its end so quick it feels like illusion
so the last weak...pretty much sums up my opponents conclusion
alright'ish
why did we have to wait so long for smokas pics? see i been known...
you had the face of a ghost, which turned out to be a natural skintone
haha, ok'ish
damn im killin' you dude, bossin up you must feel like your tough
but your shit comes off as smooth, stainless...shit anything but rough
kinda yur same concept as last weak with the "nice/not rough" reference
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Ancel gettin the title? no, we already know you ain't droppin top notch
Sucha square, this fuckas chalk outline'll look like a game of hop scotch
ROTLF.. NICE
And you ain't no gangsta, so when I roll through ya hood..you dead bitch
Treat you like McDonald's when I drive-thru in less than 30 seconds
haha, after i seen the explanation it was nice
So fuck outta here, you ain't winnin this cuz ya soon to be minced meat
Only fucking title you get, is leader of most crews that die within a week
haha, nice personal
You a fragile faggot, so block and duck if ya want..but I wouldn't advise it
Cuz you gettin battered son, then it's lights out....like a Chrit diet
rotflmao *dead*
You causin riots and ya won't make friends spittin that shit in a concert
But hey...
After the show you'd fit into a crowd..of medical examiners and doctors
nah, not rlly feelin
As for ya girl? well I wasn't gonna say much....but I know this
Ancel never sleeps alone....his trailer got plenty of roaches
haha, cool'ish
And how the fuck are you even in this match cuz I hate to say I told ya
But when I first set this battle it was LLL HW: ...?... vs. SmokaJoka
haha, ok'ish
Summary- Ancel dropped pretty good, but a few played punches here and there. Smoka dropped niceness, pretty consistant all the wayy thru, except for the middle.
Vote- Smoka
i do know what a turn of phrase and i got what u were goin for, my dude.Originally Posted by SmokaJoka
ur sayin he doesn't have a girl, but he doesn't sleep alone. he sleeps with roaches.
i dunno. i just wasn't feelin it. maybe next time, dukes.
The leagues bundled up, fuck it i'll just walk over the son of luck
it's good joka can laugh at his own shit...it makes one of us
cool
he's good to teach the young, & show just what a real mod can do
i've seen smoka pack a punch...sandwich, and some other shit for school
ha ha
the regular season nearing its end so quick it feels like illusion
so the last weak...pretty much sums up my opponents conclusion
dope
why did we have to wait so long for smokas pics? see i been known...
you had the face of a ghost, which turned out to be a natural skintone
vs
Ancel gettin the title? no, we already know you ain't droppin top notch
Sucha square, this fuckas chalk outline'll look like a game of hop scotch
dope
You a fragile faggot, so block and duck if ya want..but I wouldn't advise it
Cuz you gettin battered son, then it's lights out....like a Chrit diet
Damn that hopskotch line almost took the battle.. but the consistancy just wasnt there Smoke.. Ancel you came decent, consistant, fairly witty.. that was the formula that won it here
v/ Ancel
PS. Smoka I voted on seven battles this week.. thanks
4-1
Cleaned...and now that I re-read your vote untold I see how your torn between the verses in your breakdown...
either way..keep voting
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