a.. match?

[Heychoo]

i fell again.. too deep.
this time it sunk me in - a false comfort
was something that was loaned to me..
maybe next time i should try to stay away from it.
i clung to that string of hope, held it tighter
than i ever wanted to hold you. it was my solace. not
you. it seems like it was attached to you, though.

i woke up numb the morning after. maybe it was the beam
still affecting me. maybe it was you. maybe it was just
the fact that this wasn't the first time i'd fallen into
that deep, dark abyss known as your promise of love. yeah,
i believed you for the third time. and yeah, i got screwed
over for the 3rd time. i don't feel a thing, though. i'm
gonna make this little situation my bitch. drink it - maybe
even use it for motivation...

.. a fire is always started by a match anyway. that match is
just one tiny thing - in this case, the little piece of shit
thing called US. that match grew, to the big possibility of
US..

.. boy, look at this fire now. it shines brighter than your
eyes ever did. it burns deeper than the thoughts of you in
my mind ever did. it's truer than we ever were.

[Soule]

It was alright, when was the last time you wrote bruh?

Anyways. The wordplay was in my opinion, the only weak factor of the piece. Didn't seem like the placement was too great in more then a few lines. And the word choice was poor in a few sentences too. But like I said, that was the only flaw in my opinion. The imagery was really nice. Flow was alright. Emotion was cool. It seemed original. And it was semi-creative. I've seen you drop ALOT better. But then again I've seen you drop ALOT worse too. So I liked the read. Just didn't have me at a "wow". Keep writing though man. Glad to see you back.

[Heychoo]

i've been writing a lot. most of the shit is too personal for me to post on the site.. this is as about as personal as it'll get that i'll post up. everything's a rant form now.. i can't group my thoughts.

[Soule]

thats cool dude, just as long as you keep writing I'm happy.

[Jon]

rofl @ that hoe.

DUDE, LISTEN TO ME.

next time i tell you somethin try to understand. she's a bitch who loves screwing you over. just forget her and bang some other bitch and rub your dick in her face about it.

[Heychoo]

true dat.

[Soule]

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