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Lethal Lyricists League Heavyweight Title Bout
Champion: Lay Doubt.
vs.
#1 Contender: SmokaJoka
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16 min
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you decide
Last edited by Lay Doubt.; September 30th, 2007 at 06:06 PM
Been a real one.
SmokaJoka666 (1:32:49 AM): last time you said something fresh..you just got pimp slapped by your mom
you weaker than lay, whoever thought you'd win musta been tweaking today
d0perthanyou (1:32:54 AM): ???
SmokaJoka666 (1:33:11 AM): that one is like...a decent line surrounded by good ones
d0perthanyou (1:33:28 AM): which one?
d0perthanyou (1:33:36 AM): that's a punch and then a set up to a different one lol.
SmokaJoka666 (1:33:47 AM): LFMAO
SmokaJoka666 (1:34:02 AM): what the fuck...I thought your setup was a decent punch
SmokaJoka666 (1:34:10 AM): I don't even want to battle you next week if I win now
haha. ^
you must be retarded, i bet you wish you could take it back
n your set ups are decent too..it's the punchline part that makes it wack
funny how you said i don't get enough props cuz it's fuckin true dude
and i NEVER will..long as i keep battling kids who suck as much as you do
faking ya death may be a played personal, but you're the loneliest fag
how the fuck can you pretend to lose a life..that you don't even have?!
you've torn a few, but it ain't hard to see that you were born to lose
i mean shit - in the season 6 champ match all it took for you was Born to lose!
n i know this whore's abused his mod powers so i'm more than pissed
everyone bends the rules a little..but you're like a fucking contortionist
ya coming up short in this n you'll get whored when i spit flames
until your spot in rb's history books lookin like more of a shit stain
i rip lames, this wannabe lyricist's scarred n i ain't fearing he's hard
your attempt to murder me'll be so weak you'll catch a conspiracy charge
each week you're more watered down, what i'm speaking is true
you're going from bad to worse..kinda like me battling feeble then you
i'm the lethalest dude, you're acting like a queer n hoping it's vital
better off in the abl..cuz over here a bitch'll never get rode for the title
hoe i'm ya idol, you'll drop personals thinking they're clever n true
n i'm sure you'll mention spit n me..
..in a long list of heads who will always be better than you
haha. ouch.
Been a real one.
no extensions this week.
Been a real one.
.Originally Posted by Evolve
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Ya got wack personals, and a played style....Lay I'll leave ya dead fool
Especially when half the league ain't gotta guess who that's said too
It's time ya lost your title, and I'm bound to have ya yellin curses
We all know it's been since Nique was in this league, we felta Lay D's verses
I'll bury you in a deep hole...fuck that, I'll hang ya so ya can't breathe hoe
So right after I leave Lay up......I might decide to execute a free throw
And don't say you a consistent battler, HA! get the fuck outta here
Ya started spittin in 04', kept the same style..but fell off the same year...
You didn't beat Feebs either, that was 30 vs 14 lines...you worthless
No extensions? I don't need one, but obviously you do in ya verses
Yeah I gave you advice on AIM, and you took it...so whose iller??
I didn't tell you then..
But I got those lines confused cuz everything in ya shit looks like filler
Off my cock fag, tryin to get personal and don't know what you talkin about
So I guess it ain't just balls that cause you to fumble at the mouth
Bitchin on AIM about why you don't gain respect cuz of faggot haters
But after the end of this battle I'm sure you'll gain R-E-S-P....irator
You act like a little girl and I bet you are, so don't try and hide it bitch
Lay's exactly like my PC...cuz my comp, uteris exposed an filled w/ viruses
Your bluff's called, braggin like you hot shit, but that's enough talk
Legends think as highly of you as ya votes in this battle
Not much at all
Deflating your ego....line by line...
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you must be retarded, i bet you wish you could take it back
n your set ups are decent too..it's the punchline part that makes it wack
SEEN THIS VERY RECENTLY EXACTLY THE SAME
funny how you said i don't get enough props cuz it's fuckin true dude
and i NEVER will..long as i keep battling kids who suck as much as you do
BARELY
faking ya death may be a played personal, but you're the loneliest fag
how the fuck can you pretend to lose a life..that you don't even have?!
NAH
you've torn a few, but it ain't hard to see that you were born to lose
i mean shit - in the season 6 champ match all it took for you was Born to lose!
YEAH, BUT NAH BORN AINT EXACTLY SHITTY
n i know this whore's abused his mod powers so i'm more than pissed
everyone bends the rules a little..but you're like a fucking contortionist
LOL
coming up short in this n you'll get whored when i spit flames
until your spot in rb's history books lookin like more of a shit stain
DECENT
i rip lames, this wannabe lyricist's scarred n i ain't fearing he's hard
your attempt to murder me'll be so weak you'll catch a conspiracy charge
MEH
each week you're more watered down, what i'm speaking is true
you're going from bad to worse..kinda like me battling feeble then you
NAH
i'm the lethalest dude, you're acting like a queer n hoping it's vital
better off in the abl..cuz over here a bitch'll never get rode for the title
MEH
hoe i'm ya idol, you'll drop personals thinking they're clever n true
n i'm sure you'll mention spit n me..
..in a long list of heads who will always be better than you
PLAYED, BASIC
vs
Ya got wack personals, and a played style....Lay I'll leave ya dead fool
Especially when half the league ain't gotta guess who that's said too
I DO, DONT GET IT
It's time ya lost your title, and I'm bound to have ya yellin curses
We all know it's been since Nique was in this league, we felta Lay D's verses
FRESH, DECENT
I'll bury you in a deep hole...fuck that, I'll hang ya so ya can't breathe hoe
So right after I leave Lay up......I might decide to execute a free throw
YEAH, BUT NOT REALLY A PUNCH JUST WORDPLAY
And don't say you a consistent battler, HA! get the fuck outta here
Ya started spittin in 04', kept the same style..but fell off the same year...
MEH, BLAND PERSONAL
You didn't beat Feebs either, that was 30 vs 14 lines...you worthless
No extensions? I don't need one, but obviously you do in ya verses
BASIC
Yeah I gave you advice on AIM, and you took it...so whose iller??
I didn't tell you then..
But I got those lines confused cuz everything in ya shit looks like filler
BASIC
Off my cock fag, tryin to get personal and don't know what you talkin about
So I guess it ain't just balls that cause you to fumble at the mouth
OK
Bitchin on AIM about why you don't gain respect cuz of faggot haters
But after the end of this battle I'm sure you'll gain R-E-S-P....irator
OK BARELY
You act like a little girl and I bet you are, so don't try and hide it bitch
Lay's exactly like my PC...cuz my comp, uteris exposed an filled w/ viruses
WTF
Your bluff's called, braggin like you hot shit, but that's enough talk
Legends think as highly of you as ya votes in this battle
FILLER
Lay didnt drop anything like recently, most stuff was bland personals. so smoka steps up and drop even more bland personals, i felt lay was tryna be more creative but smoka had a couple lines that were nearly hittin. toss up for me, but i`ll go with smoka for having a couple decent ideas. no hate to ya`ll but this was weak dudes
v/smoka
A.I
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you must be retarded, i bet you wish you could take it back
n your set ups are decent too..it's the punchline part that makes it wack
meh
funny how you said i don't get enough props cuz it's fuckin true dude
and i NEVER will..long as i keep battling kids who suck as much as you do
meh
faking ya death may be a played personal, but you're the loneliest fag
how the fuck can you pretend to lose a life..that you don't even have?!
nah this is like some1 using a $pit joke on you, we kno it's done to death
you've torn a few, but it ain't hard to see that you were born to lose
i mean shit - in the season 6 champ match all it took for you was Born to lose!
iight
n i know this whore's abused his mod powers so i'm more than pissed
everyone bends the rules a little..but you're like a fucking contortionist
coo
coming up short in this n you'll get whored when i spit flames
until your spot in rb's history books lookin like more of a shit stain
again coo
i rip lames, this wannabe lyricist's scarred n i ain't fearing he's hard
your attempt to murder me'll be so weak you'll catch a conspiracy charge
iight but seems like a flip from feeble's punch against u last week
each week you're more watered down, what i'm speaking is true
you're going from bad to worse..kinda like me battling feeble then you
iight
i'm the lethalest dude, you're acting like a queer n hoping it's vital
better off in the abl..cuz over here a bitch'll never get rode for the title
meh current happening
hoe i'm ya idol, you'll drop personals thinking they're clever n true
n i'm sure you'll mention spit n me..
..in a long list of heads who will always be better than you
nah
vs
Ya got wack personals, and a played style....Lay I'll leave ya dead fool
Especially when half the league ain't gotta guess who that's said too
i get it, but last time i battled lay the whole league got on me about saying anything that refered lay n spit about being played =[
It's time ya lost your title, and I'm bound to have ya yellin curses
We all know it's been since Nique was in this league, we felta Lay D's verses
played wordplay.. iight flip @ best
I'll bury you in a deep hole...fuck that, I'll hang ya so ya can't breathe hoe
So right after I leave Lay up......I might decide to execute a free throw
seems like another played wordplay... iight to me tho
And don't say you a consistent battler, HA! get the fuck outta here
Ya started spittin in 04', kept the same style..but fell off the same year...
meh
You didn't beat Feebs either, that was 30 vs 14 lines...you worthless
No extensions? I don't need one, but obviously you do in ya verses
meh
Yeah I gave you advice on AIM, and you took it...so whose iller??
I didn't tell you then..
But I got those lines confused cuz everything in ya shit looks like filler
meh
Off my cock fag, tryin to get personal and don't know what you talkin about
So I guess it ain't just balls that cause you to fumble at the mouth
ha iight
Bitchin on AIM about why you don't gain respect cuz of faggot haters
But after the end of this battle I'm sure you'll gain R-E-S-P....irator
iight.. made me laugh
You act like a little girl and I bet you are, so don't try and hide it bitch
Lay's exactly like my PC...cuz my comp, uteris exposed an filled w/ viruses
lol @ ...?... his comp's uteris, the way u put it turned a possible clever wordplay into blah wordplay
Your bluff's called, braggin like you hot shit, but that's enough talk
Legends think as highly of you as ya votes in this battle
nah
i dunno what to say here really, no hate to either of you but wtf was that, seems like u both posted only cuz u had too, n wtf @ both of u using personals n wordplay on one another that's played as fuck n i hope u kno it
anyway
V/lay for slightly less meh lines
you must be retarded, i bet you wish you could take it back
n your set ups are decent too..it's the punchline part that makes it wack
ok
funny how you said i don't get enough props cuz it's fuckin true dude
and i NEVER will..long as i keep battling kids who suck as much as you do
lol
faking ya death may be a played personal, but you're the loneliest fag
how the fuck can you pretend to lose a life..that you don't even have?!
ok
you've torn a few, but it ain't hard to see that you were born to lose
i mean shit - in the season 6 champ match all it took for you was Born to lose!
mehh
n i know this whore's abused his mod powers so i'm more than pissed
everyone bends the rules a little..but you're like a fucking contortionist
ok
ya coming up short in this n you'll get whored when i spit flames
until your spot in rb's history books lookin like more of a shit stain
nah
i rip lames, this wannabe lyricist's scarred n i ain't fearing he's hard
your attempt to murder me'll be so weak you'll catch a conspiracy charge
ok cool
each week you're more watered down, what i'm speaking is true
you're going from bad to worse..kinda like me battling feeble then you
lol funny
i'm the lethalest dude, you're acting like a queer n hoping it's vital
better off in the abl..cuz over here a bitch'll never get rode for the title
rofl
hoe i'm ya idol, you'll drop personals thinking they're clever n true
n i'm sure you'll mention spit n me..
..in a long list of heads who will always be better than you
self glory
vs
Ya got wack personals, and a played style....Lay I'll leave ya dead fool
Especially when half the league ain't gotta guess who that's said too
mehh
It's time ya lost your title, and I'm bound to have ya yellin curses
We all know it's been since Nique was in this league, we felta Lay D's verses
nah didnt feel the wp
I'll bury you in a deep hole...fuck that, I'll hang ya so ya can't breathe hoe
So right after I leave Lay up......I might decide to execute a free throw
cool
And don't say you a consistent battler, HA! get the fuck outta here
Ya started spittin in 04', kept the same style..but fell off the same year...
mehh
You didn't beat Feebs either, that was 30 vs 14 lines...you worthless
No extensions? I don't need one, but obviously you do in ya verses
mehh
Yeah I gave you advice on AIM, and you took it...so whose iller??
I didn't tell you then..
But I got those lines confused cuz everything in ya shit looks like filler
ok
Off my cock fag, tryin to get personal and don't know what you talkin about
So I guess it ain't just balls that cause you to fumble at the mouth
mehh
Bitchin on AIM about why you don't gain respect cuz of faggot haters
But after the end of this battle I'm sure you'll gain R-E-S-P....irator
nah
You act like a little girl and I bet you are, so don't try and hide it bitch
Lay's exactly like my PC...cuz my comp, uteris exposed an filled w/ viruses
ok cool'ish
Your bluff's called, braggin like you hot shit, but that's enough talk
Legends think as highly of you as ya votes in this battle
Not much at all
cool
overall- this battle was pretty one sided to me, smokas verse just had some parts that felt super forced. like the respirator line, anyways yeah this goes to lay.
v/ Lay
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you must be retarded, i bet you wish you could take it back
n your set ups are decent too..it's the punchline part that makes it wack
this is ok'ish
funny how you said i don't get enough props cuz it's fuckin true dude
and i NEVER will..long as i keep battling kids who suck as much as you do
nah, played too
faking ya death may be a played personal, but you're the loneliest fag
how the fuck can you pretend to lose a life..that you don't even have?!
played concept on him, and untold used one similar against me
you've torn a few, but it ain't hard to see that you were born to lose
i mean shit - in the season 6 champ match all it took for you was Born to lose!
maybe born used to suck, but he isnt bad anymore, so nah
n i know this whore's abused his mod powers so i'm more than pissed
everyone bends the rules a little..but you're like a fucking contortionist
i like this one, nice
ya coming up short in this n you'll get whored when i spit flames
until your spot in rb's history books lookin like more of a shit stain
haha, good
i rip lames, this wannabe lyricist's scarred n i ain't fearing he's hard
your attempt to murder me'll be so weak you'll catch a conspiracy charge
not feelin too much
each week you're more watered down, what i'm speaking is true
you're going from bad to worse..kinda like me battling feeble then you
played idea
i'm the lethalest dude, you're acting like a queer n hoping it's vital
better off in the abl..cuz over here a bitch'll never get rode for the title
haha, cool
hoe i'm ya idol, you'll drop personals thinking they're clever n true
n i'm sure you'll mention spit n me..
..in a long list of heads who will always be better than you
nah, weak
vs
Ya got wack personals, and a played style....Lay I'll leave ya dead fool
Especially when half the league ain't gotta guess who that's said too
lol, im feelin
It's time ya lost your title, and I'm bound to have ya yellin curses
We all know it's been since Nique was in this league, we felta Lay D's verses
nice personal
I'll bury you in a deep hole...fuck that, I'll hang ya so ya can't breathe hoe
So right after I leave Lay up......I might decide to execute a free throw
ehh.. not harsh at all
And don't say you a consistent battler, HA! get the fuck outta here
Ya started spittin in 04', kept the same style..but fell off the same year...
ok'ish
You didn't beat Feebs either, that was 30 vs 14 lines...you worthless
No extensions? I don't need one, but obviously you do in ya verses
not feelin
Yeah I gave you advice on AIM, and you took it...so whose iller??
I didn't tell you then..
But I got those lines confused cuz everything in ya shit looks like filler
lol, NICE
Off my cock fag, tryin to get personal and don't know what you talkin about
So I guess it ain't just balls that cause you to fumble at the mouth
meh
Bitchin on AIM about why you don't gain respect cuz of faggot haters
But after the end of this battle I'm sure you'll gain R-E-S-P....irator
lol, nice again
You act like a little girl and I bet you are, so don't try and hide it bitch
Lay's exactly like my PC...cuz my comp, uteris exposed an filled w/ viruses
lmfao, sick... nice punch
Your bluff's called, braggin like you hot shit, but that's enough talk
Legends think as highly of you as ya votes in this battle
not much at all
ok'ish
Summary- This was a close battle, but not in a good way.. for all the lines yall went, you had some nice punches, but too many weak ones. I woulda liked to see more harsh personals and punches, instead of played personals. Weak Champ match, but one of you had the Biggest Stingers in this match, but both lacked consitancy together.
Vote- Smoka for more stingers.
lay doubt -
you must be retarded, i bet you wish you could take it back
n your set ups are decent too..it's the punchline part that makes it wack
- more of a statement.. imo.
funny how you said i don't get enough props cuz it's fuckin true dude
and i NEVER will..long as i keep battling kids who suck as much as you do
- bleh c'mon now..
faking ya death may be a played personal, but you're the loneliest fag
how the fuck can you pretend to lose a life..that you don't even have?!
- eh.. u were right at the beginning of the setup =/
you've torn a few, but it ain't hard to see that you were born to lose
i mean shit - in the season 6 champ match all it took for you was Born to lose!
- meh didnt like.
n i know this whore's abused his mod powers so i'm more than pissed
everyone bends the rules a little..but you're like a fucking contortionist
- haha liked this..
ya coming up short in this n you'll get whored when i spit flames
until your spot in rb's history books lookin like more of a shit stain
- didnt hit hard, had a good idea going though.
i rip lames, this wannabe lyricist's scarred n i ain't fearing he's hard
your attempt to murder me'll be so weak you'll catch a conspiracy charge
- heh decent..
each week you're more watered down, what i'm speaking is true
you're going from bad to worse..kinda like me battling feeble then you
- ehhh..okay i guess..
i'm the lethalest dude, you're acting like a queer n hoping it's vital
better off in the abl..cuz over here a bitch'll never get rode for the title
- lol better.
hoe i'm ya idol, you'll drop personals thinking they're clever n true
n i'm sure you'll mention spit n me..
..in a long list of heads who will always be better than you
- didnt work imo..
vs
smokajoka -
Ya got wack personals, and a played style....Lay I'll leave ya dead fool
Especially when half the league ain't gotta guess who that's said too
- eh decent. funny, but didnt do much for me..
It's time ya lost your title, and I'm bound to have ya yellin curses
We all know it's been since Nique was in this league, we felta Lay D's verses
- seen lady wp on him before, s'ok i guess..
I'll bury you in a deep hole...fuck that, I'll hang ya so ya can't breathe hoe
So right after I leave Lay up......I might decide to execute a free throw
- lol cool.
And don't say you a consistent battler, HA! get the fuck outta here
Ya started spittin in 04', kept the same style..but fell off the same year...
- ehhh almost..
You didn't beat Feebs either, that was 30 vs 14 lines...you worthless
No extensions? I don't need one, but obviously you do in ya verses
- heh i get it. aight.
Yeah I gave you advice on AIM, and you took it...so whose iller??
I didn't tell you then..
But I got those lines confused cuz everything in ya shit looks like filler
- nahh
Off my cock fag, tryin to get personal and don't know what you talkin about
So I guess it ain't just balls that cause you to fumble at the mouth
- lol !
Bitchin on AIM about why you don't gain respect cuz of faggot haters
But after the end of this battle I'm sure you'll gain R-E-S-P....irator
- kinda forced..
You act like a little girl and I bet you are, so don't try and hide it bitch
Lay's exactly like my PC...cuz my comp, uteris exposed an filled w/ viruses
- were u goin for 'computer is'?. . seemed forced to me.
Your bluff's called, braggin like you hot shit, but that's enough talk
Legends think as highly of you as ya votes in this battle
Not much at all
- eh quote did nothin for me..
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Lay's Best:
n i know this whore's abused his mod powers so i'm more than pissed
everyone bends the rules a little..but you're like a fucking contortionist
i rip lames, this wannabe lyricist's scarred n i ain't fearing he's hard
your attempt to murder me'll be so weak you'll catch a conspiracy charge
i'm the lethalest dude, you're acting like a queer n hoping it's vital
better off in the abl..cuz over here a bitch'll never get rode for the title
VS
Smoka's Best:
I'll bury you in a deep hole...fuck that, I'll hang ya so ya can't breathe hoe
So right after I leave Lay up......I might decide to execute a free throw
You didn't beat Feebs either, that was 30 vs 14 lines...you worthless
No extensions? I don't need one, but obviously you do in ya verses
Off my cock fag, tryin to get personal and don't know what you talkin about
So I guess it ain't just balls that cause you to fumble at the mouth
..
fuckin hard decision. both had equal number of quotables and they're pretty even in comparison. creativity, harshness, and wit seemed to be pretty balanced too.. glancing back though, i think smoka had maybe one or two LESS played lines/few MORE lines that were mediocre and/or had some effect as opposed to none at all. the beginning really kinda hurt the tone of ya verse Lay, but you kinda picked it up after the first 2-3 lines, then kinda went meh, then okay again.. almost rollercoaster-ish. same for smoka too kinda, but with a bit more consistancy and punches that hit. hard decision like i said, but..
v. smoka
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feebs, born, jacent? can we get some of these cats to vote please?
[doesn't mention spit cuz it'll automatically be seen as dickriding.]
2-3 you're up.
Last edited by Lay Doubt.; September 29th, 2007 at 05:49 PM
Been a real one.
you must be retarded, i bet you wish you could take it back
n your set ups are decent too..it's the punchline part that makes it wack
..rofl! that shit was nice..
funny how you said i don't get enough props cuz it's fuckin true dude
and i NEVER will..long as i keep battling kids who suck as much as you do
..yea, i see what ur goin for. aiight..
faking ya death may be a played personal, but you're the loneliest fag
how the fuck can you pretend to lose a life..that you don't even have?!
..naw, this is weak/play'd sonz..
you've torn a few, but it ain't hard to see that you were born to lose
i mean shit - in the season 6 champ match all it took for you was Born to lose!
..ha! i liked this. i actually usually like punches like this. cool use or words..
n i know this whore's abused his mod powers so i'm more than pissed
everyone bends the rules a little..but you're like a fucking contortionist
..haha! this was pretty coolz. not bad here..
ya coming up short in this n you'll get whored when i spit flames
until your spot in rb's history books lookin like more of a shit stain
..heh! not bad, but nuttin special..
i rip lames, this wannabe lyricist's scarred n i ain't fearing he's hard
your attempt to murder me'll be so weak you'll catch a conspiracy charge
..LMAO! this was sweeet..
each week you're more watered down, what i'm speaking is true
you're going from bad to worse..kinda like me battling feeble then you
..haha! naw man, but it was funny. i liked it honestly, but naw..
i'm the lethalest dude, you're acting like a queer n hoping it's vital
better off in the abl..cuz over here a bitch'll never get rode for the title
..what, what! whoa, that was sick! i got this shit..
hoe i'm ya idol, you'll drop personals thinking they're clever n true
n i'm sure you'll mention spit n me..
..in a long list of heads who will always be better than you
..ha! i liked the way u worded this and closed it, but its not the BEST closer!..
vs.
Ya got wack personals, and a played style....Lay I'll leave ya dead fool
Especially when half the league ain't gotta guess who that's said too
..naw. it's like usin one of these kind'a punches on $pit, but opposite. a lil play'd..
It's time ya lost your title, and I'm bound to have ya yellin curses
We all know it's been since Nique was in this league, we felta Lay D's verses
..haha! not bad. shits pretty coolz..
I'll bury you in a deep hole...fuck that, I'll hang ya so ya can't breathe hoe
So right after I leave Lay up......I might decide to execute a free throw
..naw, this has been used before..
And don't say you a consistent battler, HA! get the fuck outta here
Ya started spittin in 04', kept the same style..but fell off the same year...
..naw! nuttin special here either..
You didn't beat Feebs either, that was 30 vs 14 lines...you worthless
No extensions? I don't need one, but obviously you do in ya verses
..aww hell no! this is also a used concept. in a few ways..
Yeah I gave you advice on AIM, and you took it...so whose iller??
I didn't tell you then..
But I got those lines confused cuz everything in ya shit looks like filler
..wtf? c'mon smoke. theres not even any wit here..
Off my cock fag, tryin to get personal and don't know what you talkin about
So I guess it ain't just balls that cause you to fumble at the mouth
..eh, i guess! kind'a play'd though..
Bitchin on AIM about why you don't gain respect cuz of faggot haters
But after the end of this battle I'm sure you'll gain R-E-S-P....irator
..ha! i guess, a lil bit of a reach, but i get what ur goin for. straiight..
You act like a little girl and I bet you are, so don't try and hide it bitch
Lay's exactly like my PC...cuz my comp, uteris exposed an filled w/ viruses
..nother reach, but not horrible. cool wordplay. better punch here..
Your bluff's called, braggin like you hot shit, but that's enough talk
Legends think as highly of you as ya votes in this battle Not much at all
..naw! too weak/bland here. try harder, dukes..
overall, pretty one sided battle. lay came with some heat and pretty consistant lines through out his verse. i liked a couple of the lines he had in there. like his "abl" line and ya "conspiracy charge" line. overall, a solid verse. now smoka, i don't know dawggy. ur verse just seemed to be off. not a lot of good lines and not much to quote. ur "lay d" line was my fav line from u and that was about it. try a lil harder next time but s'all good. anywho, gotta give this to lay for consistancy and harder hits.
v/ lay doubt
haha. ^
you must be retarded, i bet you wish you could take it back
n your set ups are decent too..it's the punchline part that makes it wack
Lol...
funny how you said i don't get enough props cuz it's fuckin true dude
and i NEVER will..long as i keep battling kids who suck as much as you do
Lol...
faking ya death may be a played personal, but you're the loneliest fag
how the fuck can you pretend to lose a life..that you don't even have?!
Ehh...
you've torn a few, but it ain't hard to see that you were born to lose
i mean shit - in the season 6 champ match all it took for you was Born to lose!
No...
n i know this whore's abused his mod powers so i'm more than pissed
everyone bends the rules a little..but you're like a fucking contortionist
Ehh...
ya coming up short in this n you'll get whored when i spit flames
until your spot in rb's history books lookin like more of a shit stain
No...
i rip lames, this wannabe lyricist's scarred n i ain't fearing he's hard
your attempt to murder me'll be so weak you'll catch a conspiracy charge
Ehh...
each week you're more watered down, what i'm speaking is true
you're going from bad to worse..kinda like me battling feeble then you
Bad delivery...
i'm the lethalest dude, you're acting like a queer n hoping it's vital
better off in the abl..cuz over here a bitch'll never get rode for the title
Ehh...
hoe i'm ya idol, you'll drop personals thinking they're clever n true
n i'm sure you'll mention spit n me..
..in a long list of heads who will always be better than you
No...
vs
Ya got wack personals, and a played style....Lay I'll leave ya dead fool
Especially when half the league ain't gotta guess who that's said too
Ehh...
It's time ya lost your title, and I'm bound to have ya yellin curses
We all know it's been since Nique was in this league, we felta Lay D's verses
Ehh...
I'll bury you in a deep hole...fuck that, I'll hang ya so ya can't breathe hoe
So right after I leave Lay up......I might decide to execute a free throw
Ehh...
And don't say you a consistent battler, HA! get the fuck outta here
Ya started spittin in 04', kept the same style..but fell off the same year...
Ehh...
You didn't beat Feebs either, that was 30 vs 14 lines...you worthless
No extensions? I don't need one, but obviously you do in ya verses
Lol...
Yeah I gave you advice on AIM, and you took it...so whose iller??
I didn't tell you then..
But I got those lines confused cuz everything in ya shit looks like filler
Too wordy...
Off my cock fag, tryin to get personal and don't know what you talkin about
So I guess it ain't just balls that cause you to fumble at the mouth
No...
Bitchin on AIM about why you don't gain respect cuz of faggot haters
But after the end of this battle I'm sure you'll gain R-E-S-P....irator
No...
You act like a little girl and I bet you are, so don't try and hide it bitch
Lay's exactly like my PC...cuz my comp, uteris exposed an filled w/ viruses
No...
Your bluff's called, braggin like you hot shit, but that's enough talk
Legends think as highly of you as ya votes in this battle
Not much at all
Ehh...
Lay took this one with two more stronger lines than Smoka. Not that bad of a battle, but I expected more fire from both of you.
The Takeover
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