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Lethal Lyricists League Heavyweight Title Bout
Champion: Lay Doubt.
vs.
#1 Contender: Feeble Minded
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12-2.
Been a real one.
lol ok.
*didn't wait for the greats to retire to be the best*
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
LMAO. denial???
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ok listen "kyle"..
it's after your curfew so go home cuz the master will serve you
you don't remember the name?! bitch you JOINED it after we merked you
bastards get hurt too, you can't admit that you squares sucked worse
you ain't seeing things clear like you need thicker glasses and a haircut first
plus ya beezy's dumb, she thought the man of her dreams had come
till she finally found mr. right..
..was just some dude who stomped your ass in season one
she don't give it up anyway, this nerd's used his right hand for a while
shit - the ONLY unzipping this virgin knows involves expanding a file
you more than slow, go ahead and blow shit outta proportion bro
you'll try making every conceivable excuse, n i'll just be the abortion hoe
and for you unoriginal lines are customary so i'm hitting this gay first
shit's so reflex..the doctor hit ya knee n you started spitting a played verse
in the chat boasting ya rapping is on but you won't be acting for long
last time you said something fresh..you just got pimp slapped by your mom
you weaker than lay, whoever thought you'd win musta been tweaking today
you been taking 2nds for so long buffets changed it to 'all you can eat in a day'
so don't come all gangsta like you touch a nine, this busta ride?
only time you got shot..it was a documentary called 'the wackest fucks alive'
FUCK you being in legends, you'll remain at the back of my spits
you always pride yourself..s'too bad it was never off me and spitacular's dick
you ain't matching my wit, you shoulda known i'm all about the shit
the title contention musta left you in a daze..cuz man you're really out of it
swaying's something i'd expect to see n it's funny how you'd mention me
cuz if MY verse is played..then YOURS will just be warming the bench for me
FUCKOUTTAHERE.
Last edited by Lay Doubt.; September 23rd, 2007 at 04:38 AM
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When Tupac died, his last thought was spit in this savage bar:
'God I hope an awkward white boy from Cali reps me in his avatar'
Catch the sarcasm? You're a fucking loser & you look gay & sad spitting
I could just as soon see your fake ass rapping as playing badminton
Fag, you lose. Your opinions ain't shit even if you feel they're trusted
after this the only way you'll squeak by me is if your wheelchairs rusted
next week I expect your vote.. its not my fault you're feeble
when you reword lines, Asians have a new reason flip insults their people
I've only seen your girls back, but her titties are prolly supple and round
And she thinks you're a model, for why it's good to lose a couple of pounds
You've always been on the verge of the best.. but thats a sly diversion..
cuz YOU could be feeble one day. The wack, ugly, fat Irish version
The aftermath: you talked shit.. till I rearranged your face & bent your jaw
So your face will be legal tender... at least till bruises are against the law
Talking shit about MY looks? Your shitty verse is splattered with rhymes
& your bitch must be good at compliments cuz her ass is flatter'n mine
I can't match you, you win. Nice verse anyway.
Pz
it's after your curfew so go home cuz the master will serve you
you don't remember the name?! bitch you JOINED it after we merked you
hot fiyah, fact.
plus ya beezy's dumb, she thought the man of her dreams had come
till she finally found mr. right..
..was just some dude who stomped your ass in season one
nice personal
she don't give it up anyway, this nerd's used his right hand for a while
shit - the ONLY unzipping this virgin knows involves expanding a file
lmao
you more than slow, go ahead and blow shit outta proportion bro
you'll try making every conceivable excuse, n i'll just be the abortion hoe
nice concept
and for you unoriginal lines are customary so i'm hitting this gay first
shit's so reflex..the doctor hit ya knee n you started spitting a played verse
[b]dope rofl[/n]
in the chat boasting ya rapping is on but you won't be acting for long
last time you said something fresh..you just got pimp slapped by your mom
lol
you weaker than lay, whoever thought you'd win musta been tweaking today
you been taking 2nds for so long buffets changed it to 'all you can eat in a day'
ROFL
so don't come all gangsta like you touch a nine, this busta ride?
only time you got shot..it was a documentary called 'the wackest fucks alive'
damn you're just dropping consistantly hard man, props
FUCK you being in legends, you'll remain at the back of my spits
you always pride yourself..s'too bad it was never off me and spitacular's dick
nice wordplay
vs
When Tupac died, his last thought was spit in this savage bar:
'God I hope an awkward white boy from Cali reps me in his avatar'
lol got a laugh outta me
Catch the sarcasm? You're a fucking loser & you look gay & sad spitting
I could just as soon see your fake ass rapping as playing badminton
rofl
Fag, you lose. Your opinions ain't shit even if you feel they're trusted
after this the only way you'll squeak by me is if your wheelchairs rusted
dope.
next week I expect your vote.. its not my fault you're feeble
when you reword lines, Asians have a new reason flip insults their people
damn
The aftermath: you talked shit.. till I rearranged your face & bent your jaw
So your face will be legal tender... at least till bruises are against the law
cool
well obviously Lay wins here.. nice effort Lay, Feebs, good you showed..
v/ Lay
bastards get hurt too, you can't admit that you squares sucked worse
you ain't seeing things clear like you need thicker glasses and a haircut first
you more than slow, go ahead and blow shit outta proportion bro
you'll try making every conceivable excuse, n i'll just be the abortion hoe
and for you unoriginal lines are customary so i'm hitting this gay first
shit's so reflex..the doctor hit ya knee n you started spitting a played verse
so don't come all gangsta like you touch a nine, this busta ride?
only time you got shot..it was a documentary called 'the wackest fucks alive'
you ain't matching my wit, you shoulda known i'm all about the shit
the title contention musta left you in a daze..cuz man you're really out of it
swaying's something i'd expect to see n it's funny how you'd mention me
cuz if MY verse is played..then YOURS will just be warming the bench for me
vs.
When Tupac died, his last thought was spit in this savage bar:
'God I hope an awkward white boy from Cali reps me in his avatar'
Fag, you lose. Your opinions ain't shit even if you feel they're trusted
after this the only way you'll squeak by me is if your wheelchairs rusted
I've only seen your girls back, but her titties are prolly supple and round
And she thinks you're a model, for why it's good to lose a couple of pounds
The aftermath: you talked shit.. till I rearranged your face & bent your jaw
So your face will be legal tender... at least till bruises are against the law
those were the best lines from both verses.....if Feeble would've went more this would've been a much more enjoyable battle, but Lay had a solid verse for the most part, and Feeble did a little better than I expected, but a couple lines were swings and misses....Lay also stayed consistent for the most part throughout his verse....good read from you both...could've been better if Feeble would've added more....but Lay takes it for consistency, more quotables, and trying
Vote - Lay Doubt
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lay
ok listen "kyle"..
it's after your curfew so go home cuz the master will serve you
you don't remember the name?! bitch you JOINED it after we merked you
plus ya beezy's dumb, she thought the man of her dreams had come
till she finally found mr. right..
..was just some dude who stomped your ass in season one
you more than slow, go ahead and blow shit outta proportion bro
you'll try making every conceivable excuse, n i'll just be the abortion hoe
you weaker than lay, whoever thought you'd win musta been tweaking today
you been taking 2nds for so long buffets changed it to 'all you can eat in a day'
feeble
Catch the sarcasm? You're a fucking loser & you look gay & sad spitting
I could just as soon see your fake ass rapping as playing badminton
next week I expect your vote.. its not my fault you're feeble
when you reword lines, Asians have a new reason flip insults their people
The aftermath: you talked shit.. till I rearranged your face & bent your jaw
So your face will be legal tender... at least till bruises are against the law
obviously lay doubt but if feeble matched, the result would be a lot different
it's after your curfew so go home cuz the master will serve you
you don't remember the name?! bitch you JOINED it after we merked you
AIIGHT
bastards get hurt too, you can't admit that you squares sucked worse
you ain't seeing things clear like you need thicker glasses and a haircut first
EH
plus ya beezy's dumb, she thought the man of her dreams had come
till she finally found mr. right..
..was just some dude who stomped your ass in season one
LOL
she don't give it up anyway, this nerd's used his right hand for a while
shit - the ONLY unzipping this virgin knows involves expanding a file
LOL
you more than slow, go ahead and blow shit outta proportion bro
you'll try making every conceivable excuse, n i'll just be the abortion hoe
AIIGHT FLIP
and for you unoriginal lines are customary so i'm hitting this gay first
shit's so reflex..the doctor hit ya knee n you started spitting a played verse
NICE
in the chat boasting ya rapping is on but you won't be acting for long
last time you said something fresh..you just got pimp slapped by your mom
EH
you weaker than lay, whoever thought you'd win musta been tweaking today
you been taking 2nds for so long buffets changed it to 'all you can eat in a day'
COOL
so don't come all gangsta like you touch a nine, this busta ride?
only time you got shot..it was a documentary called 'the wackest fucks alive'
MEH
FUCK you being in legends, you'll remain at the back of my spits
you always pride yourself..s'too bad it was never off me and spitacular's dick
MEH
you ain't matching my wit, you shoulda known i'm all about the shit
the title contention musta left you in a daze..cuz man you're really out of it
SOMTHIN WAS LACKING, LIKED THE IDEA
Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble in the chat thread after my verse
lay's drop is played.
swaying's something i'd expect to see n it's funny how you'd mention me
cuz if MY verse is played..then YOURS will just be warming the bench for me
DECENT
vs
When Tupac died, his last thought was spit in this savage bar:
'God I hope an awkward white boy from Cali reps me in his avatar'
AIIGHT
Catch the sarcasm? You're a fucking loser & you look gay & sad spitting
I could just as soon see your fake ass rapping as playing badminton
OK
Fag, you lose. Your opinions ain't shit even if you feel they're trusted
after this the only way you'll squeak by me is if your wheelchairs rusted
NICE
next week I expect your vote.. its not my fault you're feeble
when you reword lines, Asians have a new reason flip insults their people
RECYCLED
I've only seen your girls back, but her titties are prolly supple and round
And she thinks you're a model, for why it's good to lose a couple of pounds
AIIGHT
You've always been on the verge of the best.. but thats a sly diversion..
cuz YOU could be feeble one day. The wack, ugly, fat Irish version
UMM
The aftermath: you talked shit.. till I rearranged your face & bent your jaw
So your face will be legal tender... at least till bruises are against the law
GOOD
Talking shit about MY looks? Your shitty verse is splattered with rhymes
& your bitch must be good at compliments cuz her ass is flatter'n mine
OK
YEAH LAY GOT THIS, SHAME FEEBZ DIDNT MATCH WOULDA BEEN CLOSE. BUT
V/LAY DOUBT
A.I
Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
ok listen "kyle"..
it's after your curfew so go home cuz the master will serve you
you don't remember the name?! bitch you JOINED it after we merked you
iight personal @ best.. i can't say i kno it's true so yea
bastards get hurt too, you can't admit that you squares sucked worse
you ain't seeing things clear like you need thicker glasses and a haircut first
ha
plus ya beezy's dumb, she thought the man of her dreams had come
till she finally found mr. right..
..was just some dude who stomped your ass in season one
iight
she don't give it up anyway, this nerd's used his right hand for a while
shit - the ONLY unzipping this virgin knows involves expanding a file
ha
you more than slow, go ahead and blow shit outta proportion bro
you'll try making every conceivable excuse, n i'll just be the abortion hoe
coo
and for you unoriginal lines are customary so i'm hitting this gay first
shit's so reflex..the doctor hit ya knee n you started spitting a played verse
said was played, i thought it was rofl
in the chat boasting ya rapping is on but you won't be acting for long
last time you said something fresh..you just got pimp slapped by your mom
overused wordplay
you weaker than lay, whoever thought you'd win musta been tweaking today
you been taking 2nds for so long buffets changed it to 'all you can eat in a day'
haha
so don't come all gangsta like you touch a nine, this busta ride?
only time you got shot..it was a documentary called 'the wackest fucks alive'
nah
FUCK you being in legends, you'll remain at the back of my spits
you always pride yourself..s'too bad it was never off me and spitacular's dick
meh
you ain't matching my wit, you shoulda known i'm all about the shit
the title contention musta left you in a daze..cuz man you're really out of it
meh
swaying's something i'd expect to see n it's funny how you'd mention me
cuz if MY verse is played..then YOURS will just be warming the bench for me
meh
u slacked at the end
vs
When Tupac died, his last thought was spit in this savage bar:
'God I hope an awkward white boy from Cali reps me in his avatar'
meh
Catch the sarcasm? You're a fucking loser & you look gay & sad spitting
I could just as soon see your fake ass rapping as playing badminton
iight
Fag, you lose. Your opinions ain't shit even if you feel they're trusted
after this the only way you'll squeak by me is if your wheelchairs rusted
haha
next week I expect your vote.. its not my fault you're feeble
when you reword lines, Asians have a new reason flip insults their people
"flip" punches are getting old n u kno it
I've only seen your girls back, but her titties are prolly supple and round
And she thinks you're a model, for why it's good to lose a couple of pounds
haha
You've always been on the verge of the best.. but thats a sly diversion..
cuz YOU could be feeble one day. The wack, ugly, fat Irish version
meh
The aftermath: you talked shit.. till I rearranged your face & bent your jaw
So your face will be legal tender... at least till bruises are against the law
lmfao dope
Talking shit about MY looks? Your shitty verse is splattered with rhymes
& your bitch must be good at compliments cuz her ass is flatter'n mine
iight @ best
shoulda matched woulda been a close one... smh
V/lay
Lay
ok listen "kyle"..
it's after your curfew so go home cuz the master will serve you
you don't remember the name?! bitch you JOINED it after we merked you
Okay.
bastards get hurt too, you can't admit that you squares sucked worse
you ain't seeing things clear like you need thicker glasses and a haircut first
Okay.
plus ya beezy's dumb, she thought the man of her dreams had come
till she finally found mr. right..
..was just some dude who stomped your ass in season one
Decent Personal.
she don't give it up anyway, this nerd's used his right hand for a while
shit - the ONLY unzipping this virgin knows involves expanding a file
Played.
you more than slow, go ahead and blow shit outta proportion bro
you'll try making every conceivable excuse, n i'll just be the abortion hoe
Nice wit, bleh punch
and for you unoriginal lines are customary so i'm hitting this gay first
shit's so reflex..the doctor hit ya knee n you started spitting a played verse
lol, nice.
in the chat boasting ya rapping is on but you won't be acting for long
last time you said something fresh..you just got pimp slapped by your mom
Eh.
you weaker than lay, whoever thought you'd win musta been tweaking today
you been taking 2nds for so long buffets changed it to 'all you can eat in a day'
Okay.
so don't come all gangsta like you touch a nine, this busta ride?
only time you got shot..it was a documentary called 'the wackest fucks alive'
Okay.
FUCK you being in legends, you'll remain at the back of my spits
you always pride yourself..s'too bad it was never off me and spitacular's dick
I don't care much for fake personals, but nice wordplay
you ain't matching my wit, you shoulda known i'm all about the shit
the title contention musta left you in a daze..cuz man you're really out of it
Okay.
swaying's something i'd expect to see n it's funny how you'd mention me
cuz if MY verse is played..then YOURS will just be warming the bench for me
Played, you probably shoulda just left it alone
FM
When Tupac died, his last thought was spit in this savage bar:
'God I hope an awkward white boy from Cali reps me in his avatar'
Decent
Catch the sarcasm? You're a fucking loser & you look gay & sad spitting
I could just as soon see your fake ass rapping as playing badminton
Eh, okay.
Fag, you lose. Your opinions ain't shit even if you feel they're trusted
after this the only way you'll squeak by me is if your wheelchairs rusted
Nice
next week I expect your vote.. its not my fault you're feeble
when you reword lines, Asians have a new reason flip insults their people
Nice
I've only seen your girls back, but her titties are prolly supple and round
And she thinks you're a model, for why it's good to lose a couple of pounds
Okay
You've always been on the verge of the best.. but thats a sly diversion..
cuz YOU could be feeble one day. The wack, ugly, fat Irish version
Okay.
The aftermath: you talked shit.. till I rearranged your face & bent your jaw
So your face will be legal tender... at least till bruises are against the law
Not feelin it
Talking shit about MY looks? Your shitty verse is splattered with rhymes
& your bitch must be good at compliments cuz her ass is flatter'n mine
Okay...kinda weak closer though
Overall, both had some pretty decent punches. I think if Feebs had the time to write up some more lines, it's possible we'd be seeing a different winner. It would've definitely been close. However, for having more punches..and keeping them consistently decent...Lay wins.
Vote ~ Lay Doubt
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Lay Doubt. 12-2
Feeble Minded 7-3
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