Speak'n my mind on something to relate to

[Ca$$-LOC]

When will this road that i follow smooth out

Will i ever wear a smile without the shadow of a doubt

When will i see an improvement in the movements that i make

and actually make a movement that fails to complicate.....



When will this road that i follow smooth out

Will i wear a smile without the shadow of a doubt

When will i see an improvement in the movements that i make

and actually make a movement that fails to complicate.....


...The Life That I Live Further More, And i know you heard of war/

but the war i fight tends to hurt me more than any gun or sword could hurt before/

I'm stuck Between Dumb & Poor, so i'm Checking doors, But they all seem locked/

Opportunity??? He Might Have Came, But He Never Fuck'n Knocked/

So I'm Feeling Play'd Out ,and go about, shit in the wrong way/

Show No Emotion Like The Ocean and Play Calm all Day/

Till I Have that One Pebble That Ripple's my Surface the last time/

Then Throw up a Tsunami, That Kamikazes' mankind/

If You Can Relate, Ask yourself This Question And Answer It Certain/

Did u Ever Have A Chance b4 they closed the curtains?/

B4 The Fat Lady Sang, Put Your Heart to Shame,

Kick'd dirt on your name & Left you out there Lurking/

In The Streets With The Evil things Hurting ,and your too young for working /

So You See Things Of Wealth and you think you're not worth it?/

If you do then you're in the same shoes as I/

Just Looking for a smooth road as we try to get by....and ask......





.........When will this road that i follow smooth out

Will i ever wear a smile without the shadow of a doubt

When will i see an improvement in the movements that i make

and actually make a movement that fails to complicate.....



When will this road that i follow smooth out

Will i ever wear a smile without the shadow of a doubt

When will i see an improvement in the movements that i make

and actually make a movement that fails to complicate.....

.....The Concentrated mind, of a first time, Felon/

Who Made a Movement Towards evil the first time and felt sin/

Landed in a cell for two years, Called Hell's Friend/

Cuz I Jumped Over Hell's sin & Almost Fell in/

So I guess You Could Say that this was A Miracle for me/

a second chance 2 live life free or to just be deceased/

It's a hard Decision 4 me, and One I'm Glad God Made/

Cuz if it was up to me?? I Definitely would've not weighed/

The Weight of the spades in the game called life, i delayed to play,

and would've been looking @ worse than Parole & financial aid/

but like i said i tend 2 evade.....

...feelings and portray to be unswayed/

While all along im just praying it's ok.....

.....Praying that before we were born our sins were prepaid/

Cuz For Real I Love Life, I just Got a couple Problems Though.../

But regardless of all That........ i still just want to know.....



.....When will this road that i follow smooth out

Will i ever wear a smile without the shadow of a doubt

When will i see an improvement in the movements that i make

and actually make a movement that fails to complicate........................................ .........

.......................................................

..............................

................................................ev erything?

[Ca$$-LOC]

Cant i get some feed back peoples??? Good Look'n out....1

[holly]

You have to have 2 links to places where you left feed! So you can hit up my piece.

Anyway this was a simplistic piece enjoyable nonetheless... Im not going to go majorly in-depth because I figure you won't feed anyone else's and this will get closed. BUT I will suggest to read some other people's verse like some that are in HOF just ot get an idea of what people like on RB. BUT good write I liked it IT WAS DEF emotional that was the strong point in this piece.. THE EMOTION stuck out alot to me.

Peace.

[LedgenZ]

Get your 2 links in soon man or I'm going to have to close this. Read the rules for more informations.

[Ca$$-LOC]

How do i Do That???