AI is overrated

[Derive]

I took a look at your roster, and this is what I have to say....


Derive's back? Guess it's time to bitch and rebel,
Cause I have to up my sway just to stay on their own level.
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We start with the king of them all, and it's no astonishment,
That AI is Nahlidge's only fucking accomplishment.
And at least he has one, ever since Mystery took a breather,
He doesn't know of his own accomplishments...and we don't either.
Jumping down comes Domain 9, and there's no masking,
That his lack of a sex life revolves around one question: "Who's Asking?"
And Brandon lacks Heat, fat fuck needs to go to a gym,
Cause if I tried to "press my luck"...it would just bounce off him.
And this fuck inspires Domain, but bitch please I'm a veteran,
I don't know if 3-23-84 is your age or Brandon's measurements.
And when I'm done with Nique's body, it'll be taken in a girth,
Of course you're not one-dimensional...you got more layers than the Earth!
Your gender is a controversy, and I don't mean to curl
But how the fuck can 'Shamonique' be the name of a damn girl?
And then we go to Edicius, who's prone to bitch and moan,
Kid has so many names, and STILL manages to be unknown.
Next comes Auspicious, who stabs himself with a knife,
I'm just glad he realizes that his shit is "useless" and will get him "no where in life."
He inspires to be a hippy, and they have a lot in common, you know?
Cause just like a hippy, he lost his claim to fame a long time ago.
And we jump across to Feeble, because Daz is just a henchman,
With absolutely no talent and not even worth the mention.
Feebs joined AI because he thinks it's dope, says it's mad ill,
But you have to be on some dope just to say that they have skill.
Then Spit says he fits in AI, thinking that the talent's rare,
Considering AI's down the gutter...I guess you do belong there.
And then we skip the rest of the roster and jump to COM, because
That's exactly the same shit that everyone else does.
I don't see the big deal with him, when his name comes up I laugh,
Because he's almost 30 years old and can't even afford to play Warcraft.
And the roster ends with those retired, but I'm here to correct,
That they only left AI before they lost all their respect.

[Derive]

Links:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ng-348176.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ge-348246.html

[Baron Mynd]

Ehhhh... I struggle to see how you can be here three years and still not use multis right through the verse? A lot of the rhyming was pretty basic, often with the setups forced to fit the punch. You could of got at Nique more, theres a lot of ammo on these guys but you didnt really get at them like you could of.

The piece was straight, but could of been a lot better I thought.

Lets await the response...

[Derive]

Multi's don't work too well with battle verses. They work nice with audio (of course), and with topicals, but they're iffy with battles.


But, there are people that prefer them and people that don't. Multi's in battles was really something of the past, battle verses have changed a lot since I started. I try to avoid using them because they can defer the meaning of your punches.

[Baron Mynd]

I could argue that your set-ups as they are now hurt your punchlines, but I wont.

I'll also say that I could rhyme multis to each one of those punches without them losing ANY impact, and far from it being 'old' to use multis in battle verses, the sad fact is the majority of battlers now are too lazy or inexperienced as to use them correctly. Its a sorry state text is in, but its an epidemic the net-over is facing at the moment.

Just my two cents.

[_Lyrics]

lol, someones heated...
I dont know what AI did to you but this was a pretty good diss track. the flow was iight, and puns were pretty sarcastic but funny. the most fucked up shit i read and made me actually laugh out loud was calling daz a henchman and following it with not even worth a mention. ouch hahaaha i dont even know who daz is but you got at everyone pretty bad on a personal level yo. your not going to get alot of good feed, you should go back to battleing if you can come up with more of this.

[Derive]

lol, someones heated...
I dont know what AI did to you but this was a pretty good diss track.

They didn't do anything to me, I just haven't really been active on this site for a while now and decided it would be a good way to get back in my game to attack a crew filled with the elite of the site.


Thanks for the feedback.

[dizz_y_im_hot]

attn whoring attempt = failed. this was mediocre at best. sorry mang ur like, made of rust or something. plus half the names you dissed don't even post anymore lmao.

[Cataclysm.]

And the roster ends with those retired, but I'm here to correct,
That they only left AI before they lost all their respect.

Damn.....that hit hard
other than that this was a mehish verse..
i mean no hate but ive seen better and
it couldve been better IMO..but this was still pretty nice
and lol @ the way you dissed daz

[Derive]

attn whoring attempt = failed. this was mediocre at best. sorry mang ur like, made of rust or something. plus half the names you dissed don't even post anymore lmao.

And I was a part of the list of the old vets that didn't post anymore. I don't know who's around anymore, which is why I attacked most of the roster. Heck, I don't even know who you are.

Haven't laid a verse in ages, so just trying to get used to it again. Nothing personal against anyone. There are always a few hard hitting lines and a few crappy lines in every verse, and for my first verse in ages, I think it came out pretty well. Besides, it's not every day that you can attack an entire roster of such caliber

[Engivale]

I thought it was pretty funny. Mechanics and whatever the fuck aside, it just all in all was a good drop, a fun read, and well put with emotion and hits... I liked it plenty. And most of those cats I like or at least am sort of friendly with, so in the end I disagree with some of this since they are a lot of talented writers... but all the same, I was entertained by it. But, the fact that they are all just internet writers who do nothing with their lives is like, okay, but what do you do with yours?

Or for that matter, what do any of us do? Ah, well, none of that shit really matters, I suppose in the end this was a cry for attention one way or another. But beef is good, it makes ppl write with passion, so... more power to ya.

[QaaHolic]

Dis Dat Shit U Wanna Join My Crew

[Philly®]

u'll get 1 response since that's all that's needed for this.... even tho it aint worth responding too really.... attention granted

side note.... yea we all kno why u did it to get shit poppin, but yea rawk is right multies always help flow it's just if u can use them properly... another note there was tooooooo much info in our Bio threads to not have 100% clowned us really.. and nique of all people who's already been takin shots has the most shit to diss outta all of AI..


werd

[Lay Doubt.]

this was fucking annoying to read. you started every new bar with 'and then we have ____' ..like you're a narrator telling a story or some shit. M O N O T O N Y

[Derive]

u'll get 1 response since that's all that's needed for this.... even tho it aint worth responding too really.... attention granted

side note.... yea we all kno why u did it to get shit poppin, but yea rawk is right multies always help flow it's just if u can use them properly... another note there was tooooooo much info in our Bio threads to not have 100% clowned us really.. and nique of all people who's already been takin shots has the most shit to diss outta all of AI..


werd

I haven't been on the site for ages and don't even know who Nique is, or even if it's an alias of someone else.

this was fucking annoying to read. you started every new bar with 'and then we have ____' ..like you're a narrator telling a story or some shit. M O N O T O N Y

Well, not all of it, but some of it, yeah. The writer in me sort of took over. As stated, I'm just trying to get used to separating the writer side of me with the rapper side, since they both sort of mixed in this verse.

Just getting back in my game.