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    A God's Son.


    A God's Son

    Problems Wont Solve Themselves.

    Cast away for days upon the deep waters of the sea
    For if my daughter has a child that child will kill me.
    Interpreted easily. He lacked belief in my child's decency.
    Thinking he'd grow up to become a beast says the preist he sees.
    The oracle's horrible mention of my childs hystorical mission.
    Has given my father thoughts of a deplorable vision.
    Sending his child and her children in a chest floating
    over the fishes.For days not seeing land in the distance.
    Guided by the winds of Zeus with Poseidon's assistance.
    Heighten's the gifted and enlighten's the wind shift.
    Upon riding the wind swift I reached land
    and there reached a hand of a fisherman.
    His speech is bland. As I greet the sands and ask his christening.
    Not listening. We began to walk and I should've paid attention then.
    Not know what lies ahead this land of wicked men. Who live in sin.
    Made a slave among the rain drips. as they're glistening
    on the window seal and I wonder will I ever live again.
    As my son grows I'll live in him.
    Tortured in the ways of their wickedness. In which he lives.
    As the sun has now dried up the rain drops.





    Misinterpreted Opinion.


    Threw the firey fields. Heads my soul, pride and my will.
    Yet my soles have wings and I can fly with my heels.
    and the helmet of Haides that's invisibly real.
    A Mirrored Sheild cause rumor has it her reality kills.
    And then it feels. Like I've just got a message from up above.
    Just my father telling me that's the woman Poseidon loved.
    Says he can only contol the winds now from higher up.
    I agree as he hugs and the wind's his love.


    I look down as I'm flying up.
    beneath the waves a beast rises
    as father throws a thunder bolt
    at the water lighten struck.






    Life Without Substance.

    No questions asked. Father slashes the beastly waters.
    with his thunderbolts. as the waves try and grab me.
    and the thunder rolls. Father Martyr's the God of waters soul.
    while the waves immense forced formed a horse.
    that kick'd the course well as Zeus realized his rain
    added to his force field. The pain from the rain made
    the horse real. He Used the sun to save his
    son then of course the horse yields. He's eyed the kill.
    Calming the waters as Poseidon kneels.




    The Sum of All Fears

    Now flying still. I find her lying shy in a field. sleep.
    Postion the shield I ain't trying to die within 10 ft.
    Approaching the beasts praying to Gods
    hoping she's sleep.
    Head filled with serpents through the mirror
    I'm afraid to peek. Cause the glance might stone my soul.
    In the land where by man sticks and stones are throwed.
    Noticing here huge bronze hands. Thinking how she could fly
    with her wings of gold. Focused on her reflection.
    raising my weapon to strike once and leave her headless.
    Beast beheaded. Yielding the force of evil.
    As the blood from it's neck drips into the sea pool.
    both sides become equal.
    Then out sprung a winged horse from the
    dead. And a Giant Man with a gold sword in his hand.
    and they were peaceful.
    Figure I'll show Poseidon the head before I show
    him these two.



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    Re: A God's Son.

    Surprised this was left with no feed for 8 hours.

    I appreciated the imagery here. The pictures helped this. Mainly as the tale went on describing each phase is what mattered most to me here. From a child to a man, an important stage in a man's life was shown most here:
    Misinterpreted Opinion.:
    And then it feels. Like I've just got a message from up above.
    Just my father telling me that's the woman Poseidon loved.
    Says he can only control the winds now from higher up.
    I agree as he hugs and the wind's his love.
    The coming of reality to see clearly that someone loves you and not be afraid to accept shows the true mindstate of a man and not a boy.
    Your wording helped in a major way as well. Never falling off point making sure each word was supported with it's follower. Grammar was well used as well. & most of all you stuck to the story which kept me wanting to read more as I went on.
    Thank You Ntalek.
    But...
    He can never touch her again


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    Re: A God's Son.

    appreciated..Ups.

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    Re: A God's Son.

    2 da Top.

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    Re: A God's Son.

    Feed Me Seymor. !

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    Re: A God's Son.

    ups.

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    Re: A God's Son.

    Got damn it..@ 1 piece of feed..man wtf..i've been hitten om's all week..lol..this is a shame...

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