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Thread: Silenced vs TayTay

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    Silenced vs TayTay

    unlimitied lines
    check ins due ASAP
    pieces due tommorow by midnight
    Topic:Missing you
    crew members can vote if the vote is fully explained
    and all that other good shit


    good luck

    .Silenced.

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    Re: Silenced vs TayTay

    check in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .....................

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=346941
    Last edited by Silenced; August 30th, 2007 at 02:37 AM

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    Re: Silenced vs TayTay

    DONT VOTE HERE GO TO THE CREW BATTLES SECTION
    Last edited by Donald Trump; August 30th, 2007 at 01:46 PM

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    Re: Silenced vs TayTay


    called her a hoe and told her to go said my love was fake
    but as i grow old i cant let go and regret my mistake
    our past was bleak, lived down the street liked her too
    my reaction was weak, i couldnt believe she was gonna move
    if felt right, we had got in a fight i was really mad
    when she left sight, i thought all night and became sad
    i was a disaster, i tried calling her after, listened to our song
    she wouldnt answer and i eventually foundout the number was wrong
    i didnt like feeling like this, life is a bitch, and i was angered
    but then i saw her pic started to reminisce and felt better after
    i was having my doubts, i couldnt find out if she felt the same
    then i went to the place we first hungout and saw something strange
    there was a sign on the dirt, i cleaned my eyes with my shirt
    then read the writing again to see that it said "To Marcus the jerk"
    for a moment there was no sound, looked out and there was no one around
    then i quickly got on my knees and dug a whole in the ground
    i stared to dig, past some rocks and a twig, there was something i saw it!!!
    it was a box not that big and our picture was on it
    i thought it was a joke, but deep inside i was stoked
    i nearly choked, when i opened it and inside found a note
    it was from her and i nearly fell dead, i nearly hit my head
    i opened it up and it said

    Quote Originally Posted by Dear,
    Marcus
    I didnt want to leave, i loved you with all of my heart
    i want to tell you so many things, i dont know where to start
    just thinking about leaving makes my heart feel weak
    but i'll never forget you, and how you were always so sweet
    the day i left was horrible, when we fought i was scared
    but if this is you who found my note, im glad you really cared
    we had so many memories and i loved them all
    like the time we had our first kiss that day in the fall
    that day was so great, i remember my heart couldnt stop beating
    and i remember i wore that stupid blouse that you kept teasing
    did you feel how i felt? do you miss me is something i wonder
    but if you did love me i left behind the blouse and in it is my new number
    im sorry for the fake number, but i felt you needed the test
    im not sure if you'll call me, just know nobody will take your place
    i love you then now and always

    Love,
    Steph
    went back to house, to look for the blouse, and was dreaded
    when on the floor was a mouse and the number inside was shredded
    tried to put the paper together, couldnt get it but still tried
    then he finally gave up, broke down and started to cry
    got the papers put them in his pocket, and went home that night
    when he arrived home, he promised to look for her the rest of his life
    .
    .
    .
    the poor fool spent 30 years searching, for the woman he loved
    but then one cold December night his body gave up
    he died alone, with a gun shot to the head, he was a mess
    the police came and in the autopsy they found a note near his chest
    it said my love i coulnt find you on land, so i killed my self December 7
    and gave up my search in land to continue searching in heaven

    till this day the search continues...... will he find her?
    Last edited by Donald Trump; August 30th, 2007 at 01:34 AM

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    Re: Silenced vs TayTay

    Missing You



    As the stars fade away,I go off in a daze
    wipeing the tears off my face,because I think I am a discrace
    seeing you going away,leaving me without a notice
    one day your still here,the next day its hocus pocus
    you dissappeared in thin air,it felt like an air of mist
    just thinking if I was awake,could I get a last kiss
    cuz you know you'll really be missed,I got you locked in my heart
    and it would feel like a broken puzzle,if our love would fall part
    cuz its just another memory,tooken down the lost road
    and now the time is getting old,are you gonna take away my soul
    or are you gonna make me feel loved,like we were in a bed of flowers
    but I see you going back,to that a abusing coward
    who left scars on your skin,made you cry everyday
    he was a raging alcoholic,who didn't have his life made
    always depended on his mother,cuz he couldn't keep a job
    why would you want to be with him,if he can't even pay the cost
    I've kept a job for 3 years,and I got money to support myself
    and I want you to be in this life,and not getting beatin with the belt
    because you can live better than that,you weren't rasied to be abuse
    you were rasied to do better than that,and not being used
    but until this day I'll be thinking,will you come back to me
    so we can grow up,and start a family tree

    .Silenced.

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    Re: Silenced vs TayTay

    bump fuckers........................................... .................................................. .................................................. ....................................

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    Re: Silenced vs TayTay

    Ntalek - I understand that this is reposted elsewhere, and this isn't the thread I was pming you about. But still, don't delete threads with verses in them. Just explain that its reposted elsewhere, then move it to closed battles.

    -aiight my bad..
    Last edited by Nsight; January 10th, 2008 at 10:01 AM

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