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around 16 is cool.
Been a real one.
Last edited by Phil Benjamin; September 2nd, 2007 at 07:20 PM
you'll get merked, leave pissed. and dawg we all doubt ya progression
if you hold a grudge..
..it's cuz you know doing that with the title is outta the question
i'm the king right now, call for help..why you always gotta be bitchin?
you can bring ya fam in.. n i'll just leave them fucking poverty stricken
your mack game's non existent so i dunno how you act conceited still
you stand n give girls a dirty face..but it only takes them 1 slap to Cetaphil
plus the only chick you DO got is dumb as rocks..n goddamn is she big
so fat n stupid..
..she signed up for free porn cuz i said they'd send her spam if she did
retarded prick, you can't gain an inch since ya brain's been minced
phil was like, 'i was just thinking'..n the other person felt his pain and winced
you ain't the shit so hop off the gangsta tip..you're shook and i'm iler
you got the look of a killer..
..meaning if you walked by a chick and she took one look it would killer
n pussy ya crew ain't nice, when the heat's on this joker will scatter
so the only thing you'll Takeover..
..is the role of the 'wack faggot who choked when it mattered'
you ain't dope so get shattered..you really oughta refrain from taunts
and ya check in was ironic..
..considering your verse will never get the same response
16.
you faggot
your gonna be left burnt to a crisp messing with flames here
the crossfire you'll get caught in'll make chrysler an joan of arc cheer
you act like your a thug, talkin gats out ya peddy mouth
so go ahead and draw ya guns, i'll have my eraser already out
son all ya verses are stretched, an i'll smash this clown
you carry's on so much,
...that you'd bring commerical planes crashing down
you neva get bitchs, no girls will ever let you call her wife
despite being a white guy, you've been hearing the N word all ur life
you prewritte for battles, if you key'd ya punchs wont be landing
the only time you'll come off the top, is in next week's standings
i'll leave ya teeth hurt, my fists feel like swingin bolders
ya head down wit bleeding gums even lisa simpsons mourning over
this is a easy title match, all of lays punchs are worthless
your a breeze a rocking chair an a glass of ice tea would set this perfect
phil dope? naw i shouldnt be concieted but i really could
so i'll just guilt trip over the sympathy of ya once being pretty good
lol. votes.
oh and..
n pussy ya crew ain't nice, when the heat's on this joker will scatter
so you'll only thing you'll Takeover..
..is the role of the 'wack faggot who choked when it mattered'
it's supposed to be 'so THE only thing you'll takeover..'
fixed
feeble
Last edited by Lay Doubt.; September 1st, 2007 at 04:07 AM
Been a real one.
your gonna be left burnt to a crisp messing with flames here
the crossfire you'll get caught in'll make chrysler an joan of arc cheer
..not terrible, but could'a been worded alot better..
you act like your a thug, talkin gats out ya peddy mouth
so go ahead and draw ya guns, i'll have my eraser already out
..naw, seen too many punches like these..
son all ya verses are stretched, an i'll smash this clown
you carry's on so much,
...that you'd bring commerical planes crashing down
..haha! i like the way this was worded and all. dope punch..
you neva get bitchs, no girls will ever let you call her wife
despite being a white guy, you've been hearing the N word all ur life
..omgz! this was actually made me laugh. nice onez..
you prewritte for battles, if you key'd ya punchs wont be landing
the only time you'll come off the top, is in next week's standings
..heh! not bad, yo..
i'll leave ya teeth hurt, my fists feel like swingin bolders
ya head down wit bleeding gums even lisa simpsons mourning over
..oh shit! this was my favorite punch. raw, yo..
this is a easy title match, all of lays punchs are worthless
your a breeze a rocking chair an a glass of ice tea would set this perfect
..haha! dope imagery! i liked it but breeze punches are gettin a lil play'd yo but this was flipped nicely..
phil dope? naw i shouldnt be concieted but i really could
so i'll just guilt trip over the sympathy of ya once being pretty good
..this was aiight i guess, nuttin special but not bad..
vs.
you'll get merked, leave pissed. and dawg we all doubt ya progression
if you hold a grudge..
..it's cuz you know doing that with the title is outta the question
..i've seen lines like this before, but aiight. weak for an opener..
i'm the king right now, call for help..why you always gotta be bitchin?
you can bring ya fam in.. n i'll just leave them fucking poverty stricken
..this was dope..
your mack game's non existent so i dunno how you act conceited still
you stand n give girls a dirty face..but it only takes them 1 slap to Cetaphil
..'nother dope nameplay..
plus the only chick you DO got is dumb as rocks..n goddamn is she big
so fat n stupid..
..she signed up for free porn cuz i said they'd send her spam if she did
..oh shit! on a rollz!..
retarded prick, you can't gain an inch since ya brain's been minced
phil was like, 'i was just thinking'..n the other person felt his pain and winced
..naw. wasn't really feeling this here..
you ain't the shit so hop off the gangsta tip..you're shook and i'm iler
you got the look of a killer..
..meaning if you walked by a chick and she took one look it would killer
..naw! this was too basic and worded pretty bad..
n pussy ya crew ain't nice, when the heat's on this joker will scatter
so you'll only thing you'll Takeover..
..is the role of the 'wack faggot who choked when it mattered'
..naw! nuttin too witty here..
you ain't dope so get shattered..you really oughta refrain from taunts
and ya check in was ironic..
..considering your verse will never get the same response
..hah! pretty simple shit, but not bad..
well, after close observation, this was a dope battle. pretty good verses from both. lay came off pretty raw wit some lines. i was feelin some his shit just cuz of the way he worded it. nice shit. the spam line was my fav from ya. but phil had dope shit as well and wayy more consistent, imo. had some dope lines and punches. just better verse. the bleedin gums was nice as well as a few others. nice verse, yo.
v/ phil benjamin
i'm the king right now, call for help..why you always gotta be bitchin?
you can bring ya fam in.. n i'll just leave them fucking poverty stricken
plus the only chick you DO got is dumb as rocks..n goddamn is she big
so fat n stupid..
..she signed up for free porn cuz i said they'd send her spam if she did
you ain't dope so get shattered..you really oughta refrain from taunts
and ya check in was ironic..
..considering your verse will never get the same response
vs.
you act like your a thug, talkin gats out ya peddy mouth
so go ahead and draw ya guns, i'll have my eraser already out
you prewritte for battles, if you key'd ya punchs wont be landing
the only time you'll come off the top, is in next week's standings
this is a easy title match, all of lays punchs are worthless
your a breeze a rocking chair an a glass of ice tea would set this perfect
quotables were even, but in the lines I didn't quote from Lay some of them were just bleh...and Lay knows exactly what I mean...you know you could've done better with your verse, and I'm not sure what to take from Phil's verse...he was more consistent, but it looks like he held back as well and probably dropped strong enough to win...I've personally seen you both do better, but Phil won this for not having as many lines that I disliked...and honestly all the lines I quoted were a little played...
Vote - Phil Benjamin
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um, wow. can we get some more votes in here?
Been a real one.
you'll get merked, leave pissed. and dawg we all doubt ya progression
if you hold a grudge..
..it's cuz you know doing that with the title is outta the question
ok
i'm the king right now, call for help..why you always gotta be bitchin?
you can bring ya fam in.. n i'll just leave them fucking poverty stricken
decent
your mack game's non existent so i dunno how you act conceited still
you stand n give girls a dirty face..but it only takes them 1 slap to Cetaphil
mehh
plus the only chick you DO got is dumb as rocks..n goddamn is she big
so fat n stupid..
..she signed up for free porn cuz i said they'd send her spam if she did
lmfao
retarded prick, you can't gain an inch since ya brain's been minced
phil was like, 'i was just thinking'..n the other person felt his pain and winced
haha
you ain't the shit so hop off the gangsta tip..you're shook and i'm iler
you got the look of a killer..
..meaning if you walked by a chick and she took one look it would killer
nah
n pussy ya crew ain't nice, when the heat's on this joker will scatter
so the only thing you'll Takeover..
..is the role of the 'wack faggot who choked when it mattered'
ok
you ain't dope so get shattered..you really oughta refrain from taunts
and ya check in was ironic..
..considering your verse will never get the same response
lol ok
vs
your gonna be left burnt to a crisp messing with flames here
the crossfire you'll get caught in'll make chrysler an joan of arc cheer
mehh
you act like your a thug, talkin gats out ya peddy mouth
so go ahead and draw ya guns, i'll have my eraser already out
ok'ish
son all ya verses are stretched, an i'll smash this clown
you carry's on so much,
...that you'd bring commerical planes crashing down
forced..
you neva get bitchs, no girls will ever let you call her wife
despite being a white guy, you've been hearing the N word all ur life
whack
you prewritte for battles, if you key'd ya punchs wont be landing
the only time you'll come off the top, is in next week's standings
decent
i'll leave ya teeth hurt, my fists feel like swingin bolders
ya head down wit bleeding gums even lisa simpsons mourning over
nah
this is a easy title match, all of lays punchs are worthless
your a breeze a rocking chair an a glass of ice tea would set this perfect
ok
phil dope? naw i shouldnt be concieted but i really could
so i'll just guilt trip over the sympathy of ya once being pretty good
ok'ish
mehh sorry i didnt feel this battle much. lay did have a couple witty lines that made him win this.
v/ Lay Doubt
hit the contendors match
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you'll get merked, leave pissed. and dawg we all doubt ya progression
if you hold a grudge..
..it's cuz you know doing that with the title is outta the question
gay, why do u always open wack ryan ur so gay
i'm the king right now, call for help..why you always gotta be bitchin?
you can bring ya fam in.. n i'll just leave them fucking poverty stricken
uggh what no
your mack game's non existent so i dunno how you act conceited still
you stand n give girls a dirty face..but it only takes them 1 slap to Cetaphil
*sigh*
plus the only chick you DO got is dumb as rocks..n goddamn is she big
so fat n stupid..
..she signed up for free porn cuz i said they'd send her spam if she did
uhh cringeworthy corniness, i unerstand its hard to make any effort here but damn lol
retarded prick, you can't gain an inch since ya brain's been minced
phil was like, 'i was just thinking'..n the other person felt his pain and winced
lmfao sick
you ain't the shit so hop off the gangsta tip..you're shook and i'm iler
you got the look of a killer..
..meaning if you walked by a chick and she took one look it would killer
*pukes at wackness*
n pussy ya crew ain't nice, when the heat's on this joker will scatter
so the only thing you'll Takeover..
..is the role of the 'wack faggot who choked when it mattered'
lol decent
you ain't dope so get shattered..you really oughta refrain from taunts
and ya check in was ironic..
..considering your verse will never get the same response
ha!
k you sucked then it was okay for the last 3 lines
VS
your gonna be left burnt to a crisp messing with flames here
the crossfire you'll get caught in'll make chrysler an joan of arc cheer
...
you act like your a thug, talkin gats out ya peddy mouth
so go ahead and draw ya guns, i'll have my eraser already out
lmfaooo lololzzzz nice
son all ya verses are stretched, an i'll smash this clown
you carry's on so much,
...that you'd bring commerical planes crashing down
uhm wtf happend toyour wording dog
you neva get bitchs, no girls will ever let you call her wife
despite being a white guy, you've been hearing the N word all ur life
lfmidoshxgkjkrdn,fm *deaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad*
you prewritte for battles, if you key'd ya punchs wont be landing
the only time you'll come off the top, is in next week's standings
oh rlyhow original
i'll leave ya teeth hurt, my fists feel like swingin bolders
ya head down wit bleeding gums even lisa simpsons mourning over
...
this is a easy title match, all of lays punchs are worthless
your a breeze a rocking chair an a glass of ice tea would set this perfect
ughh you worded this shittily, coulda been iller
phil dope? naw i shouldnt be concieted but i really could
so i'll just guilt trip over the sympathy of ya once being pretty good
nothing
both dropped some bullshit to be perfectly honest
really close, i had to re-read
and i think phil hit it more for me
v/ phil been jammin
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you'll get merked, leave pissed. and dawg we all doubt ya progression
if you hold a grudge..
..it's cuz you know doing that with the title is outta the question
k
i'm the king right now, call for help..why you always gotta be bitchin?
you can bring ya fam in.. n i'll just leave them fucking poverty stricken\
lol, k
your mack game's non existent so i dunno how you act conceited still
you stand n give girls a dirty face..but it only takes them 1 slap to Cetaphil
lol
plus the only chick you DO got is dumb as rocks..n goddamn is she big
so fat n stupid..
..she signed up for free porn cuz i said they'd send her spam if she did
k
retarded prick, you can't gain an inch since ya brain's been minced
phil was like, 'i was just thinking'..n the other person felt his pain and winced
liked it
you ain't the shit so hop off the gangsta tip..you're shook and i'm iler
you got the look of a killer..
..meaning if you walked by a chick and she took one look it would killer
this line would sound good on audio
n pussy ya crew ain't nice, when the heat's on this joker will scatter
so the only thing you'll Takeover..
..is the role of the 'wack faggot who choked when it mattered'
k
you ain't dope so get shattered..you really oughta refrain from taunts
and ya check in was ironic..
..considering your verse will never get the same response
lol k
Nice verse here. Some funny shit, nothin bad here......nothin all tha memorable, but you had a good verse.
your gonna be left burnt to a crisp messing with flames here
the crossfire you'll get caught in'll make chrysler an joan of arc cheer
nah
you act like your a thug, talkin gats out ya peddy mouth
so go ahead and draw ya guns, i'll have my eraser already out
nah
son all ya verses are stretched, an i'll smash this clown
you carry's on so much,
...that you'd bring commerical planes crashing down
k
you neva get bitchs, no girls will ever let you call her wife
despite being a white guy, you've been hearing the N word all ur life
alright
you prewritte for battles, if you key'd ya punchs wont be landing
the only time you'll come off the top, is in next week's standings
lol, k
i'll leave ya teeth hurt, my fists feel like swingin bolders
ya head down wit bleeding gums even lisa simpsons mourning over
k
this is a easy title match, all of lays punchs are worthless
your a breeze a rocking chair an a glass of ice tea would set this perfect
k, good
phil dope? naw i shouldnt be concieted but i really could
so i'll just guilt trip over the sympathy of ya once being pretty good
good, worded oddly
Good verse here...........there were some good lines in here. I jus felt like some of em didn't hit as hard. Straight verse though
v/ Lay
I guess it's just that time...............
i'm the king right now, call for help..why you always gotta be bitchin?
you can bring ya fam in.. n i'll just leave them fucking poverty stricken
you ain't dope so get shattered..you really oughta refrain from taunts
and ya check in was ironic..
..considering your verse will never get the same response
both these lines were real nice,but first one was fiya. nice wordplay and wording, good shit
vs
you act like your a thug, talkin gats out ya peddy mouth
so go ahead and draw ya guns, i'll have my eraser already out
you prewritte for battles, if you key'd ya punchs wont be landing
the only time you'll come off the top, is in next week's standings
this is a easy title match, all of lays punchs are worthless
your a breeze a rocking chair an a glass of ice tea would set this perfect
these were good, last one was real nice, and the others jus added to your consisancy
V/ Phil for havin more quotables and consitancy.
you'll get merked, leave pissed. and dawg we all doubt ya progression
if you hold a grudge..
..it's cuz you know doing that with the title is outta the question
haha i get it
i'm the king right now, call for help..why you always gotta be bitchin?
you can bring ya fam in.. n i'll just leave them fucking poverty stricken
iight
your mack game's non existent so i dunno how you act conceited still
you stand n give girls a dirty face..but it only takes them 1 slap to Cetaphil
meh
plus the only chick you DO got is dumb as rocks..n goddamn is she big
so fat n stupid..
..she signed up for free porn cuz i said they'd send her spam if she did
lmfao, dope
retarded prick, you can't gain an inch since ya brain's been minced
phil was like, 'i was just thinking'..n the other person felt his pain and winced
haha
you ain't the shit so hop off the gangsta tip..you're shook and i'm iler
you got the look of a killer..
..meaning if you walked by a chick and she took one look it would killer
blah man
n pussy ya crew ain't nice, when the heat's on this joker will scatter
so the only thing you'll Takeover..
..is the role of the 'wack faggot who choked when it mattered'
iight @ best
you ain't dope so get shattered..you really oughta refrain from taunts
and ya check in was ironic..
..considering your verse will never get the same response
iight @ best
vs
your gonna be left burnt to a crisp messing with flames here
the crossfire you'll get caught in'll make chrysler an joan of arc cheer
iight
you act like your a thug, talkin gats out ya peddy mouth
so go ahead and draw ya guns, i'll have my eraser already out
draw wordplay is done to death
son all ya verses are stretched, an i'll smash this clown
you carry's on so much,
...that you'd bring commerical planes crashing down
meh
you neva get bitchs, no girls will ever let you call her wife
despite being a white guy, you've been hearing the N word all ur life
meh
you prewritte for battles, if you key'd ya punchs wont be landing
the only time you'll come off the top, is in next week's standings
another overused concept
i'll leave ya teeth hurt, my fists feel like swingin bolders
ya head down wit bleeding gums even lisa simpsons mourning over
meh
this is a easy title match, all of lays punchs are worthless
your a breeze a rocking chair an a glass of ice tea would set this perfect
a breeze punch... smh.. iight flip tho
phil dope? naw i shouldnt be concieted but i really could
so i'll just guilt trip over the sympathy of ya once being pretty good
haha, coo
V/lay easy... phil... my dude get with the played program n the witty boat... u were so much better when LLL first started
plus the only chick you DO got is dumb as rocks..n goddamn is she big
so fat n stupid..
..she signed up for free porn cuz i said they'd send her spam if she did
n pussy ya crew ain't nice, when the heat's on this joker will scatter
so the only thing you'll Takeover..
..is the role of the 'wack faggot who choked when it mattered'
you ain't dope so get shattered..you really oughta refrain from taunts
and ya check in was ironic..
..considering your verse will never get the same response
vs
you act like your a thug, talkin gats out ya peddy mouth
so go ahead and draw ya guns, i'll have my eraser already out
phil dope? naw i shouldnt be concieted but i really could
so i'll just guilt trip over the sympathy of ya once being pretty good
idk i think Lay took it he had the more consistant verse and the more quotables phil had some really good lines but i think he wasnt consistant like lay was
v-Lay
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