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thanks for the personal. bwahahaha.Originally Posted by Texstyle
ayo...
hows this dude gettin jobs wit no aspiring specs
this fag'll steal an L an have dealers firin Tex
his quotables suck an his verses are worse in full
so ya know he wont win…an i GAVE him a personal
so dudes popular for L's like a lexus sig
an contradictions…cuz nothin on texas big (Tex is)
no one likes this faggot…hes not bringin crowds fast
he's beggin to die so he can be up in Clouds ass
ya said it yourself wats the point for you to diss dudes
lets make it easy…ill call Arch an you can forfeit on this too
links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=424831
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=424747
This loser posting first is no excuse after beating him
You got 'dropped early kid', simply cause you're preemie M
Too weak, even using permanent ink he wouldn't leave one mark
Watch American Pie if you wanna see this geek Pre cum hard
With such retarded structure beating me would be pure luck
Especially after I've turned his train of thought into a short bus
Admit you came to dickride - we know you got somethin hoeish in mind
He shows up to battle like Beowulf..leaving his clothing behind*
To me, seeing you use a buncha nameplays is nothin new
I could just as easily flip a M and leave with the W..
*look at his avy
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Prems verse...
hows this dude gettin jobs wit no aspiring specs
this fag'll steal an L an have dealers firin Tex
alright...
his quotables suck an his verses are worse in full
so ya know he wont win…an i GAVE him a personal
lol..
so dudes popular for L's like a lexus sig
an contradictions…cuz nothin on texas big (Tex is)
little lol...was ok.
no one likes this faggot…hes not bringin crowds fast
he's beggin to die so he can be up in Clouds ass
ha...
ya said it yourself wats the point for you to diss dudes
lets make it easy…ill call Arch an you can forfeit on this too
eh was ok..
Texs verse...
This loser posting first is no excuse after beating him
You got 'dropped early kid', simply cause you're preemie M
lol aiight..
Too weak, even using permanent ink he wouldn't leave one mark
Watch American Pie if you wanna see this geek Pre cum hard
ok...
With such retarded structure beating me would be pure luck
Especially after I've turned his train of thought into a short bus
nice..
Admit you came to dickride - we know you got somethin hoeish in mind
He shows up to battle like Beowulf..leaving his clothing behind*
eh ok....
To me, seeing you use a buncha nameplays is nothin new
I could just as easily flip a M and leave with the W..
alright...coulda been better but...
well this was a cool battle....i seen hits from both of you...though my favorite bar in the battle came from tex...and pre had ok's and alright's throughout the whole verse but nothing stood out like the short bus line....eh meh...good battle no hate pre you know your my dude and i told you before you got potential so keep doin yah thing fam...cool shit tex..
v / texstyle
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v/ TexStyle
Good battle here. TexStyle surprise me honestly. the American Pie line was nice, but could have been a little better with wording, nice concept though. Premiumm alot of your shit was filler, and not very well structured. didn't flow as smoothly as Tex's. good battle.
uppp
no one likes this faggot…hes not bringin crowds fast
he's beggin to die so he can be up in Clouds ass
vs
This loser posting first is no excuse after beating him
You got 'dropped early kid', simply cause you're preemie M
Too weak, even using permanent ink he wouldn't leave one mark
Watch American Pie if you wanna see this geek Pre cum hard
With such retarded structure beating me would be pure luck
Especially after I've turned his train of thought into a short bus
this was kind of one sided but Tex gets this.
hows this dude gettin jobs wit no aspiring specs
this fag'll steal an L an have dealers firin Tex
-meh
his quotables suck an his verses are worse in full
so ya know he wont win…an i GAVE him a personal
-ok ish, set up needed help though
so dudes popular for L's like a lexus sig
an contradictions…cuz nothin on texas big (Tex is)
-decent
no one likes this faggot…hes not bringin crowds fast
he's beggin to die so he can be up in Clouds ass
-ok
ya said it yourself wats the point for you to diss dudes
lets make it easy…ill call Arch an you can forfeit on this too
-lmao personal
vs
This loser posting first is no excuse after beating him
You got 'dropped early kid', simply cause you're preemie M
-nah kinda forced
Too weak, even using permanent ink he wouldn't leave one mark
Watch American Pie if you wanna see this geek Pre cum hard
-hell no @ a cum line
With such retarded structure beating me would be pure luck
Especially after I've turned his train of thought into a short bus
-ok
Admit you came to dickride - we know you got somethin hoeish in mind
He shows up to battle like Beowulf..leaving his clothing behind*
-lol
To me, seeing you use a buncha nameplays is nothin new
I could just as easily flip a M and leave with the W..
-nah, played concept
Overall - not a bad battle, Pre your bar length is killing you dog, make it longer by like 2 or 3 more words and you can fit more in it which will be a better set up and punch, your concepts for the most part are decent but with less words you can only do so much with ya know? Tex you had an ok verse aswell. but you dropped a line with cum with it and your closer was uber played man. i've seen that line since 02 dawg. work on concepts and maybe strengthen your rhyme scheme out, you didnt have a bad one but it wasnt really solid imo. overall i think tex BARELY takes this. can't believe its showing other wise in the votes, up
v- Tex
his quotables suck an his verses are worse in full
so ya know he wont win…an i GAVE him a personal
so dudes popular for L's like a lexus sig
an contradictions…cuz nothin on texas big (Tex is)
no one likes this faggot…hes not bringin crowds fast
he's beggin to die so he can be up in Clouds ass
vs.
This loser posting first is no excuse after beating him
You got 'dropped early kid', simply cause you're preemie M
Too weak, even using permanent ink he wouldn't leave one mark
Watch American Pie if you wanna see this geek Pre cum hard
Admit you came to dickride - we know you got somethin hoeish in mind
He shows up to battle like Beowulf..leaving his clothing behind*
To me, seeing you use a buncha nameplays is nothin new
good battle.
Tex came lil harder.
tex- nice wordplay and good punches
prem- seen u come harder. need harder hittin punches
v/tex
I could just as easily flip a M and leave with the W..
Good shit Premiumm. Couple people didn't poll so uppin.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...759/index.html
^^^hit it
so dudes popular for L's like a lexus sig
an contradictions…cuz nothin on texas big
vs
This loser posting first is no excuse after beating him
You got 'dropped early kid', simply cause you're preemie M
With such retarded structure beating me would be pure luck
Especially after I've turned his train of thought into a short bus
To me, seeing you use a buncha nameplays is nothin new
I could just as easily flip a M and leave with the W..
v/tex...an all around better verse...premm i like ur ryhme scheme its gettin betta ur punches and creativity have to step up
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