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    My Leaving.

    The Leaving
    Last Piece By: Ghost Element


    Leaving no note or a suitable sign
    of exiting the house. Creeping through
    the rooms like the sneaking of a modern
    day mouse. Seizing to say goodbye to my
    spouse, opening the door slowly to be sure
    that this is what I want. Thinking to myself
    like a note to self whether or not I am truly
    done. Realizing that there is always a time
    where you just have to run. Turning the handle
    counterclockwise, tightly closing my heavy eyes.
    Taking a quick look back at the family that raised
    me, then wiping away the tears before they stick
    and dry. This is the start of a new life, and I must
    be strong and stay loyal to my own decision. For
    if I stopped to listen, I'd know that I am not one
    to be the person that would be worth missing. As
    I take my first step out of the house, the atmosphere
    falls down on me heavier then ever expected. But
    this is the new life I’ve selected, so this is the decision
    that must be respected. Packing my clothes and belongings
    in two bags, one on my back and another in my free hand.
    Now I stand here alone, standing as a fourteen year old
    and a free man. I know for a fact that no body will remember
    my name, I never made an accomplishment. Causing nothing
    but trouble so I grant myself a punishment. By leaving the one
    place where I could speak free and moving on too a world where
    I have to earn the right too even eat. Maybe I am wrong about
    this choice ..but this is my leaving.

    Goodbye Rap battles.

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    Re: My Leaving.

    im not a poet or anything.. but good piece... all i kno is that i heard u say that athousand times.

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    Re: My Leaving.

    a little dramatic, but very poetic. a great piece but not of any intricate detail. the piece is a bit bland being it's called leaving, it describes forms of goodbyes and leaving, and it ends in leaving. so everything seemed predictable but at the same time you had a couple hard hitting lines and good descriptions. not a great piece, but a decent one.


    hope to see you back, because you're not done elevating.

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    Re: My Leaving.

    NIgga not leaving, thats all I have to say

    *waits for belligerent to make new alias and pose as his.........great aunt*

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    Re: My Leaving.

    lol LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    glycerine.

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    Re: My Leaving.

    el poeta101101: *imagines bell sitting at his desk writing that piece with a lone candle and a tear running down his face*


    ROFLFFLFLFLF

    DEAD @ you writing a piece about leaving a website... seriously... incredible.... by the way, your magazines suck.

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    Re: My Leaving.

    uhm...

    you pm'ed me to see this?

    why?

    it's uh... lame...

    "Taking a quick look back at the family that raised
    me, then wiping away the tears before they stick
    and dry. This is the start of a new life, and I must
    be strong and stay loyal to my own decision"

    might wanna check into an asylum after this.
    READ MORE

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    Can't teach you my swag! D. Josey's Avatar
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    Re: My Leaving.

    Hahahahhahahahha

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    Re: My Leaving.

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    wow.

    *laughs again*

    are you kidding me?

    most people when they hear "MAN THE INTERNET IS YOUR LIFE" they get pissed, but you'd probably agree. Wow... you've got to be kidding me... ROFL, honestly, you weren't ever good... so i don't see why you're clowning yourself over leaving RB..

    wow.
    Artificial.Intelligence

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    Re: My Leaving.

    lmao like if RB was his boyfriend and they are breaking up

    sad

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    Re: My Leaving.

    ^roflmao

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    Re: My Leaving.

    Dude'll be back.

    He's one of the gayest things to cross this site, he's like a limpet on the ass of a walrus.

    This piece is yet again, the 'sellout chart song' of the site. He's so predictable i knew it would be something corny like this from the second it got HoS'd.

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    Re: My Leaving.

    OMFG


    -DEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDD- x 29044



    LMFAOFF&3H3^7FHB@#@HD4@^h#HH#YBD$&#4^&$HGJ

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    Re: My Leaving.

    Personally, I thought you wrote it well man
    There was alot of imagery, very poetic indeed ya kno.

    Take care

    Peace & God Bless.
    ~*~Pure~*~



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    Re: My Leaving.

    Your not leaving Bell. You "quit" three weeks ago. I'd give you another week to make another name.

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