Beef( Wrote this when I was mad)

[Withersman]

Pull da arm out ya soocket
like the three stooges
I got a gun in my pocket
and bitch it's an oozie
say some dumb shit again
and you'll end up like a groupie
dead on the ground
and it's lookin really oogly
I've been there
I've done that
Bitch ass mutha fucka where you and your mens at
cuz I'll leave you with four words
rat-tat-tat-tat
gun blast
in da air
the looks on your face can tell that you scared
cuz all you is worried about
is me hittin your mans and their mans
blood trippin off their fuckin hand
I don't give a damn
Wut the fuck I do to you mutha fuckas
Breathe breathe bitch
you breathin your last air

In like two fuckin minutes
your ass will be done
I don't need my fuckin gun
I'll just get my bat and make you run
knock your fuckin head off
make you fall down
and sooner or later bitch
it'll be all over town
make your mom buy da black dress
I didn't want to tell her I had to drill a hole in your chest
I don't like killin niggas
but when they talk shit
excuse me bitch
I'm gonna steal in your fuckin lip
I'll be like a disease
make you say lord help me please
I'll come around
and smack you down
I won't give a fuck
Who ever fuckin see me is their fuckin luck
I'll come up in your grill and smash your assests
make those fuckin teeth the shape of dandruff

I see niggas runnin
I'll let that slide
but it doesnt mean your ass is gonna die
You can tell that I'm pissed
this shit is fuckin rip off
you gonna make me slip off
the edge
like the American pledge
you'll go in the war and comeback with a bullet in your head
stabs wounds
all over your body
who is responsible for that shit?
I said it was nigga named Scotty
I didnt get caught killin your ass
and that shit is in the past
but remember these lines
it's what I said as you was dyin

You got beef?
through these streets
it's like a gunshot it will make you sleep
You got beef?
always startin shit
good night bitch
I'm gonna spray you with this clip
You got beef?
it aint no mess
this shit is serious
I'll leave your ass delirious

*If you gonna review it just be honest. It might not be my best but I had to let my anger out*

[Low Key]

yo dog,
its cool to blow off steam like this once in a while, but it seems to me you didn't put a lot of thought into this rhyme...try to be a bit more creative next time...

nothing really worth quoting, keep workin...

Peace

[inspire]

^^^agreed... and if you wanna let anger out try spitting about the topic your angry about it works a lot better than venting out gangster rap... keep rhymin