HW: Feeble Minded 5-0 VS COM 4-1

[Marvman]

HW: Feeble Minded 5-0 VS COM 4-1
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[Richard Parker]

What's up...

edit: sure, 20 is fine...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-2-342550.html
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-0-342546.html

[Erupt]

heya man, 20 lines?

[Richard Parker]

I think we're pretty good friends so this aint clever to test
Sad how you've always been 'up there' but NEVER 'the best'
you ain't a rapper, I've been told he's weak so I fold this geek
so wack - even your fucking ear drums can't hold a beat
you're just another rusty faggot I'm known to embarass
so fucking dumb your mental faculties wrote home to your parents
I always get to thinking you're dope but I dismember the facts
its a form of amnesia
cuz as soon as you post I suddenly remember you're wack
Only bringing dope punches - I got the finest resolved..
I taught your bitch how to bagpipe without the Irish involved
never were on my level, just acting like a bitch dude..
and you can have a standoff... but you're still off if you sit too
you'll never hold half the clout that my best lines vamp..
we only call you the winner as in 'maybe next time, champ'
You're putting ya battling skill together again and trying to care
you've gotten over the rust - at this point, no use denying it's there
when I peep your accomplishments my feet are stamping with reason
nerve to waste FOUR YEARS to say you're champ of a season
poor ass motherfucker you get extensively whored
even my brainchild has a crib more expensive than yours

[Erupt]

Fucking virgin my word's true, This match? watch me whirl through,
S'funny I'm taking your belt off you...yet you can't get your girl to
Bitch your whole world's through, and you know I'm prepared better...
...coz you've been ducking me for years.. like I'm ya fucking hairdresser
Prick you know I'm the baddest kid, I'm here to fucking damage shit
So try stretching your imagination, to fit your skull when I've flattened it
I wanted this and I'm mad as shit, watch it unfurl on your body
I know you've got the will to battle, just make sure your girl has a copy
You've never champed think with reason, you'll be dismembered and bleeding
You're like a seed the way you'll need sewed by the end of the season
Allready got the belt and beat Lay... but all that this prick's proved...
...is he'll come out scratching and biting, and any other bitchmove
Now I've a whole site to get through to, the fact I can school you
But I've seen trenches spend less time in the frontlines than you do
It ain't hard to make you fold... remember bitch I'm the champ,
Watch me go postal on this bitch, finish him with licks and a stamp
And although you've never champed.. you're ranked as one of the best
Coz if at first he doesn't succeed, this bitch redefines success
You don't impress, you ain't nice, the prick looks like he spreads lice
Come and watch my verse scare this bitch half to death...twice

[Born To Kill]

I think we're pretty good friends so this aint clever to test
Sad how you've always been 'up there' but NEVER 'the best'
Weak opener...just a statement...
you ain't a rapper, I've been told he's weak so I fold this geek
so wack - even your fucking ear drums can't hold a beat
Eh...better, but ya starting off slow...
you're just another rusty faggot I'm known to embarass
so fucking dumb your mental faculties wrote home to your parents
Again, nicer...
I always get to thinking you're dope but I dismember the facts
its a form of amnesia
cuz as soon as you post I suddenly remember you're wack
Blah!
Only bringing dope punches - I got the finest resolved..
I taught your bitch how to bagpipe without the Irish involved
Funny...best one so far...
never were on my level, just acting like a bitch dude..
and you can have a standoff... but you're still off if you sit too
Witty, but kind of soft...
you'll never hold half the clout that my best lines vamp..
we only call you the winner as in 'maybe next time, champ'
Blah again!
You're putting ya battling skill together again and trying to care
you've gotten over the rust - at this point, no use denying it's there
Sly wit...ok...
when I peep your accomplishments my feet are stamping with reason
nerve to waste FOUR YEARS to say you're champ of a season
Eh to blah...
poor ass motherfucker you get extensively whored
even my brainchild has a crib more expensive than yours
Seen "brainchild" way too much...

Not ya best, sir...

VS

Fucking virgin my word's true, This match? watch me whirl through,
S'funny I'm taking your belt off you...yet you can't get your girl to
Ok opener...good wit and hit...
Bitch your whole world's through, and you know I'm prepared better...
...coz you've been ducking me for years.. like I'm ya fucking hairdresser
Eh...reaching on metaphor unless this means something different in UK...
Prick you know I'm the baddest kid, I'm here to fucking damage shit
So try stretching your imagination, to fit your skull when I've flattened it
Cool...
I wanted this and I'm mad as shit, watch it unfurl on your body
I know you've got the will to battle, just make sure your girl has a copy
Cool wit, sure it's been done before, it's so obvious, but aight...
You've never champed think with reason, you'll be dismembered and bleeding
You're like a seed the way you'll need sewed by the end of the season
Nice-ish...
Allready got the belt and beat Lay... but all that this prick's proved...
...is he'll come out scratching and biting, and any other bitchmove
Eh...cool, but not so...
Now I've a whole site to get through to, the fact I can school you
But I've seen trenches spend less time in the frontlines than you do
Hahaha!
It ain't hard to make you fold... remember bitch I'm the champ,
Watch me go postal on this bitch, finish him with licks and a stamp
Hahaha again!
And although you've never champed.. you're ranked as one of the best
Coz if at first he doesn't succeed, this bitch redefines success
Clever...and ouch...
You don't impress, you ain't nice, the prick looks like he spreads lice
Come and watch my verse scare this bitch half to death...twice
Ha...kinda eh...but you'd already won.

Com...

Not so close.

Peace

[-Coop-]

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Feeble Minded
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I think we're pretty good friends so this aint clever to test
Sad how you've always been 'up there' but NEVER 'the best'
Eh... Maybe I'm missin something, but... Nah
you ain't a rapper, I've been told he's weak so I fold this geek
so wack - even your fucking ear drums can't hold a beat
This was so-so, not too great
you're just another rusty faggot I'm known to embarass
so fucking dumb your mental faculties wrote home to your parents
I get it, kinda funny
I always get to thinking you're dope but I dismember the facts
its a form of amnesia
cuz as soon as you post I suddenly remember you're wack
I thought this was nice
Only bringing dope punches - I got the finest resolved..
I taught your bitch how to bagpipe without the Irish involved
Pretty good, good wordplay. Set-up shoulda been more relevant though.
never were on my level, just acting like a bitch dude..
and you can have a standoff... but you're still off if you sit too
Pretty fresh, I think it shoulda been "And you can standoff..." instead of "have a...", but it's aight.
you'll never hold half the clout that my best lines vamp..
we only call you the winner as in 'maybe next time, champ'
Kinda reachin here, almost decent.
You're putting ya battling skill together again and trying to care
you've gotten over the rust - at this point, no use denying it's there
Not as witty as it seemed @ first, somewhat decent.
when I peep your accomplishments my feet are stamping with reason
nerve to waste FOUR YEARS to say you're champ of a season
Statementish, coulda been much better.
poor ass motherfucker you get extensively whored
even my brainchild has a crib more expensive than yours
Somewhat funny, but hardly had much sting to it.

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COM
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Fucking virgin my word's true, This match? watch me whirl through,
S'funny I'm taking your belt off you...yet you can't get your girl to
Lmao.
Bitch your whole world's through, and you know I'm prepared better...
...coz you've been ducking me for years.. like I'm ya fucking hairdresser
Dissin his pic? Pretty good way of doin it.
Prick you know I'm the baddest kid, I'm here to fucking damage shit
So try stretching your imagination, to fit your skull when I've flattened it
Damn fresh, haven't seen this.
I wanted this and I'm mad as shit, watch it unfurl on your body
I know you've got the will to battle, just make sure your girl has a copy
I think I've seen similar, but this was worded pretty nicely.
You've never champed think with reason, you'll be dismembered and bleeding
You're like a seed the way you'll need sewed by the end of the season
Idk, I think I missed somethin. I don't see the "seed" and "sewed" comparisons here...
Allready got the belt and beat Lay... but all that this prick's proved...
...is he'll come out scratching and biting, and any other bitchmove
Not really creative, meh.
Now I've a whole site to get through to, the fact I can school you
But I've seen trenches spend less time in the frontlines than you do
Decent comparison yet it really aint that much of a diss.
It ain't hard to make you fold... remember bitch I'm the champ,
Watch me go postal on this bitch, finish him with licks and a stamp
So-so...
And although you've never champed.. you're ranked as one of the best
Coz if at first he doesn't succeed, this bitch redefines success
Ok, funny, personal, and witty.
You don't impress, you ain't nice, the prick looks like he spreads lice
Come and watch my verse scare this bitch half to death...twice
I get what you're tryna say, but technically he would have 1/4 of his life left.

---

I always get to thinking you're dope but I dismember the facts
its a form of amnesia
cuz as soon as you post I suddenly remember you're wack
never were on my level, just acting like a bitch dude..
and you can have a standoff... but you're still off if you sit too

VS

Fucking virgin my word's true, This match? watch me whirl through,
S'funny I'm taking your belt off you...yet you can't get your girl to
Prick you know I'm the baddest kid, I'm here to fucking damage shit
So try stretching your imagination, to fit your skull when I've flattened it
And although you've never champed.. you're ranked as one of the best
Coz if at first he doesn't succeed, this bitch redefines success

---

Damn, I think they had almost the same amount of hard-hitters, but the rest of COM's verse was much more interesting than the rest of Feeble's. IMO, this was one of Feeble's worst this season, while COM dropped his best so far. This battle had a clear winner after just readin through each verse once. COM had the 'Ooooh' factor here. Good battle to both.

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VOTE: COM
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[Icarus]

I think we're pretty good friends so this aint clever to test
Sad how you've always been 'up there' but NEVER 'the best'
ehhh
you ain't a rapper, I've been told he's weak so I fold this geek
so wack - even your fucking ear drums can't hold a beat
aite
you're just another rusty faggot I'm known to embarass
so fucking dumb your mental faculties wrote home to your parents
aite... the wording/concept was just like the last line tho... "so ___ your _____"
I always get to thinking you're dope but I dismember the facts
its a form of amnesia
cuz as soon as you post I suddenly remember you're wack
lol, nice. I likey
Only bringing dope punches - I got the finest resolved..
I taught your bitch how to bagpipe without the Irish involved
okay
never were on my level, just acting like a bitch dude..
and you can have a standoff... but you're still off if you sit too
okay
you'll never hold half the clout that my best lines vamp..
we only call you the winner as in 'maybe next time, champ'
LMAO... i was feeling this a good bit
You're putting ya battling skill together again and trying to care
you've gotten over the rust - at this point, no use denying it's there
nice
when I peep your accomplishments my feet are stamping with reason
nerve to waste FOUR YEARS to say you're champ of a season
its okay
poor ass motherfucker you get extensively whored
even my brainchild has a crib more expensive than yours
nah

Two or three lines I was really feeling. The champ line was niceness fa sho

Fucking virgin my word's true, This match? watch me whirl through,
S'funny I'm taking your belt off you...yet you can't get your girl to
lol. Nice opener
Bitch your whole world's through, and you know I'm prepared better...
...coz you've been ducking me for years.. like I'm ya fucking hairdresser
aite... decent personal
Prick you know I'm the baddest kid, I'm here to fucking damage shit
So try stretching your imagination, to fit your skull when I've flattened it
ohhhh. fucking harsh shit man. niceness
I wanted this and I'm mad as shit, watch it unfurl on your body
I know you've got the will to battle, just make sure your girl has a copy
niceness
You've never champed think with reason, you'll be dismembered and bleeding
You're like a seed the way you'll need sewed by the end of the season
ehhhh
Allready got the belt and beat Lay... but all that this prick's proved...
...is he'll come out scratching and biting, and any other bitchmove
okay
Now I've a whole site to get through to, the fact I can school you
But I've seen trenches spend less time in the frontlines than you do
ehhh
It ain't hard to make you fold... remember bitch I'm the champ,
Watch me go postal on this bitch, finish him with licks and a stamp
okay
And although you've never champed.. you're ranked as one of the best
Coz if at first he doesn't succeed, this bitch redefines success
okay
You don't impress, you ain't nice, the prick looks like he spreads lice
Come and watch my verse scare this bitch half to death...twice
okay

Man ya verse started off with pure fire in the beginning, but it slowly started to wane as it went further. With that said, you had more quotables than Feebs, a bit more consistency too, so overall i gotta give the battle to you.

Good battle guys, some really good punches in here fa sho

v/ COM

[dizz_y_im_hot]

I think we're pretty good friends so this aint clever to test
Sad how you've always been 'up there' but NEVER 'the best'

right..

you ain't a rapper, I've been told he's weak so I fold this geek
so wack - even your fucking ear drums can't hold a beat

ok i guess. i'd personally scratch if i thought of this and realised i REALLY ain't facing a rapper, seems like you had to fill some space here.

you're just another rusty faggot I'm known to embarass
so fucking dumb your mental faculties wrote home to your parents

i didn't like this at all bruvva

I always get to thinking you're dope but I dismember the facts
its a form of amnesia
cuz as soon as you post I suddenly remember you're wack

roflmfao, sick

Only bringing dope punches - I got the finest resolved..
I taught your bitch how to bagpipe without the Irish involved

correct me if i'm wrong...but i'm pretty sure bagpipes are MORE associated with scotsmen so, no

never were on my level, just acting like a bitch dude..
and you can have a standoff... but you're still off if you sit too

haha, took me another read cus of the wording but nice

you'll never hold half the clout that my best lines vamp..
we only call you the winner as in 'maybe next time, champ'

nyeh, not really feeling this, suttin that you should've scrapped IMO

You're putting ya battling skill together again and trying to care
you've gotten over the rust - at this point, no use denying it's there

rolmfoaooaoajfvl hahahahahaha

when I peep your accomplishments my feet are stamping with reason
nerve to waste FOUR YEARS to say you're champ of a season

ouchhhh

poor ass motherfucker you get extensively whored
even my brainchild has a crib more expensive than yours

ahem no.



IMO you'e stepped dwn a level from last week. had some standouts, a couple of what i beleive to be fillers, and the rest were decent.


VS



Fucking virgin my word's true, This match? watch me whirl through,
S'funny I'm taking your belt off you...yet you can't get your girl to

was it something you drank? cool wording

Bitch your whole world's through, and you know I'm prepared better...
...coz you've been ducking me for years.. like I'm ya fucking hairdresser

rofl. to clarify for those that couldn't get this, you're a dumbass. this was a reference to his pic, if that wasn't obvious enough, well duuuuhoink.

Prick you know I'm the baddest kid, I'm here to fucking damage shit
So try stretching your imagination, to fit your skull when I've flattened it

ehh wtf you coulda worded this much harder. seemed too straight forward to me and it lacked the umph

I wanted this and I'm mad as shit, watch it unfurl on your body
I know you've got the will to battle, just make sure your girl has a copy

again, wasn't executed so nicely

You've never champed think with reason, you'll be dismembered and bleeding
You're like a seed the way you'll need sewed by the end of the season

ehhh i guess

Allready got the belt and beat Lay... but all that this prick's proved...
...is he'll come out scratching and biting, and any other bitchmove

lmfaoooo hmmmhaha

Now I've a whole site to get through to, the fact I can school you
But I've seen trenches spend less time in the frontlines than you do

no way

It ain't hard to make you fold... remember bitch I'm the champ,
Watch me go postal on this bitch, finish him with licks and a stamp

wow sick shit

And although you've never champed.. you're ranked as one of the best
Coz if at first he doesn't succeed, this bitch redefines success

lmfaooooo you coulda worded this differently actually but whoooa nice

You don't impress, you ain't nice, the prick looks like he spreads lice
Come and watch my verse scare this bitch half to death...twice

lol okay


consistently doing better and better. still rough on some excution but you had one or two more standout lines than feeble, and that takes it for me.

good battle fellas. i think i might stay on next week actually after reading this battle.

v/ COMputer

[Richard Parker]

lol, com took this shit pretty easily... nice battle com.

I'ma be signing out for a few weeks fellas, just not motivated anymore. I'll be back though.

[Big Question]

I think we're pretty good friends so this aint clever to test
Sad how you've always been 'up there' but NEVER 'the best'
NAH
you ain't a rapper, I've been told he's weak so I fold this geek
so wack - even your fucking ear drums can't hold a beat
EH, S`OK
you're just another rusty faggot I'm known to embarass
so fucking dumb your mental faculties wrote home to your parents
OK
I always get to thinking you're dope but I dismember the facts
its a form of amnesia
cuz as soon as you post I suddenly remember you're wack
LOL
Only bringing dope punches - I got the finest resolved..
I taught your bitch how to bagpipe without the Irish involved
HEHE
never were on my level, just acting like a bitch dude..
and you can have a standoff... but you're still off if you sit too
DECENT
you'll never hold half the clout that my best lines vamp..
we only call you the winner as in 'maybe next time, champ'
MEH
You're putting ya battling skill together again and trying to care
you've gotten over the rust - at this point, no use denying it's there
NAH
when I peep your accomplishments my feet are stamping with reason
nerve to waste FOUR YEARS to say you're champ of a season
NOPE
poor ass motherfucker you get extensively whored
even my brainchild has a crib more expensive than yours
SEEN BRAINCHILD BEFORE, DIDNT LIKE THIS

VS

ucking virgin my word's true, This match? watch me whirl through,
S'funny I'm taking your belt off you...yet you can't get your girl to
LOL
Bitch your whole world's through, and you know I'm prepared better...
...coz you've been ducking me for years.. like I'm ya fucking hairdresser
HEH, THIS WAS AIIGHT, PERSONALLY IDVE PUT BATH INSTEAD BUT YEAH
Prick you know I'm the baddest kid, I'm here to fucking damage shit
So try stretching your imagination, to fit your skull when I've flattened it
AIIGHT
I wanted this and I'm mad as shit, watch it unfurl on your body
I know you've got the will to battle, just make sure your girl has a copy
HA
You've never champed think with reason, you'll be dismembered and bleeding
You're like a seed the way you'll need sewed by the end of the season
NOT REALLY, WORDING
Allready got the belt and beat Lay... but all that this prick's proved...
...is he'll come out scratching and biting, and any other bitchmove
SEEN BITCHMOVE BEFORE, KINDA PLAYED
Now I've a whole site to get through to, the fact I can school you
But I've seen trenches spend less time in the frontlines than you do
AIIGHT
It ain't hard to make you fold... remember bitch I'm the champ,
Watch me go postal on this bitch, finish him with licks and a stamp
NOT TOO BAD
And although you've never champed.. you're ranked as one of the best
Coz if at first he doesn't succeed, this bitch redefines success
AIIGHT
You don't impress, you ain't nice, the prick looks like he spreads lice
Come and watch my verse scare this bitch half to death...twice
PRETTY CLEVER


YEAH, COM TOOK THIS HE WAS FAR MORE CONSISTENT.FEEBS VERSE WASNT HIS BEST AT ALL THIS WEEK


V/COM

[Richard Parker]

wtf @ com being rusty all season then merkulating my face out of nowhere. *leaves - will be back to own kiddos*

[I Got Pwnd]

Fucking virgin my word's true, This match? watch me whirl through,
S'funny I'm taking your belt off you...yet you can't get your girl to
^pretty funny.
Bitch your whole world's through, and you know I'm prepared better...
...coz you've been ducking me for years.. like I'm ya fucking hairdresser
^nah.. I dont get the ducking me/hairdresser part.
Prick you know I'm the baddest kid, I'm here to fucking damage shit
So try stretching your imagination, to fit your skull when I've flattened it
^good.
I wanted this and I'm mad as shit, watch it unfurl on your body
I know you've got the will to battle, just make sure your girl has a copy
will concepts been used,but this one was fresh to me.
You've never champed think with reason, you'll be dismembered and bleeding
You're like a seed the way you'll need sewed by the end of the season
^Huh?explain this one.. im not hatin but i just dont get it.. i read it 3 times.. yea,yea,im slow.. w/e... just hip me to the lingo homey
Allready got the belt and beat Lay... but all that this prick's proved...
...is he'll come out scratching and biting, and any other bitchmove
^Nah,I say this bcz ive seen it.. by either Spit or YOU.. before.. but u flipd it quite intresting,bt nah.
Now I've a whole site to get through to, the fact I can school you
But I've seen trenches spend less time in the frontlines than you do
^lol.
It ain't hard to make you fold... remember bitch I'm the champ,
Watch me go postal on this bitch, finish him with licks and a stamp
^this was strange fruit.. pretty cool tho.
And although you've never champed.. you're ranked as one of the best
Coz if at first he doesn't succeed, this bitch redefines success
^hee,hee.
You don't impress, you ain't nice, the prick looks like he spreads lice
Come and watch my verse scare this bitch half to death...twice
^pretty good,simple but still the.. twice thing got me with its short but effective method of saying scared to death as in a whole.. cool,but not really whoa-ish,or wow.. but still cool.

vs.


I think we're pretty good friends so this aint clever to test
Sad how you've always been 'up there' but NEVER 'the best'
^ha.
you ain't a rapper, I've been told he's weak so I fold this geek
so wack - even your fucking ear drums can't hold a beat
^pretty good.
you're just another rusty faggot I'm known to embarass
so fucking dumb your mental faculties wrote home to your parents
^lol.
I always get to thinking you're dope but I dismember the facts
its a form of amnesia
cuz as soon as you post I suddenly remember you're wack
^damn.made me laugh.
Only bringing dope punches - I got the finest resolved..
I taught your bitch how to bagpipe without the Irish involved
^oooooh.. lmao.
never were on my level, just acting like a bitch dude..
and you can have a standoff... but you're still off if you sit too
^good.
you'll never hold half the clout that my best lines vamp..
we only call you the winner as in 'maybe next time, champ'
^hee,hee.. but aight.. a lil corny.. but i liked it
You're putting ya battling skill together again and trying to care
you've gotten over the rust - at this point, no use denying it's there
^whoa.Lmao
when I peep your accomplishments my feet are stamping with reason
nerve to waste FOUR YEARS to say you're champ of a season
^ah,not really.
poor ass motherfucker you get extensively whored
even my brainchild has a crib more expensive than yours
^Yeeeeaaaaaaa!!!!!!!! nice closer.. maybe not harsh but damn funny..

EDIT:My bad.I mistakin Feebles drop for COMs,not really cool on my part.. but still.. My mistake. COM pointed it out in his sarcastic waayyy of voting.honest mistake

[Chrit.]

v/ com


for winning

[Phil Benjamin]

I think we're pretty good friends so this aint clever to test
Sad how you've always been 'up there' but NEVER 'the best'
^^^not a strong opener
you ain't a rapper, I've been told he's weak so I fold this geek
so wack - even your fucking ear drums can't hold a beat
^^^not bad decent at best
you're just another rusty faggot I'm known to embarass
so fucking dumb your mental faculties wrote home to your parents
^^^lol good
I always get to thinking you're dope but I dismember the facts
its a form of amnesia
cuz as soon as you post I suddenly remember you're wack
^^^played i wasnt feeling
Only bringing dope punches - I got the finest resolved..
I taught your bitch how to bagpipe without the Irish involved
^^^nice
never were on my level, just acting like a bitch dude..
and you can have a standoff... but you're still off if you sit too
^^^decent
you'll never hold half the clout that my best lines vamp..
we only call you the winner as in 'maybe next time, champ'
^^^nah
You're putting ya battling skill together again and trying to care
you've gotten over the rust - at this point, no use denying it's there
^^^lol good
when I peep your accomplishments my feet are stamping with reason
nerve to waste FOUR YEARS to say you're champ of a season
^^^nope
poor ass motherfucker you get extensively whored
even my brainchild has a crib more expensive than yours
^^^weak closer

vs

Fucking virgin my word's true, This match? watch me whirl through,
S'funny I'm taking your belt off you...yet you can't get your girl to
^^^Lol good opener
Bitch your whole world's through, and you know I'm prepared better...
...coz you've been ducking me for years.. like I'm ya fucking hairdresser
^^^good personal cause of his pic
Prick you know I'm the baddest kid, I'm here to fucking damage shit
So try stretching your imagination, to fit your skull when I've flattened it
^^^nah didnt hit really
I wanted this and I'm mad as shit, watch it unfurl on your body
I know you've got the will to battle, just make sure your girl has a copy
^^^LOL i liked this one
You've never champed think with reason, you'll be dismembered and bleeding
You're like a seed the way you'll need sewed by the end of the season
^^^decent
Allready got the belt and beat Lay... but all that this prick's proved...
...is he'll come out scratching and biting, and any other bitchmove
^^^good personal
Now I've a whole site to get through to, the fact I can school you
But I've seen trenches spend less time in the frontlines than you do
^^^Nice best line so far
It ain't hard to make you fold... remember bitch I'm the champ,
Watch me go postal on this bitch, finish him with licks and a stamp
^^^okay at best
And although you've never champed.. you're ranked as one of the best
Coz if at first he doesn't succeed, this bitch redefines success
^^^good
You don't impress, you ain't nice, the prick looks like he spreads lice
Come and watch my verse scare this bitch half to death...twice
^^^okay closer didnt hit that hard

V/com, he gets my vote with a pretty solid verse but it was on an off in some parts but the frontlines punchs was nice an the copy will shit too,
feeble your verse wasnt bad but you feel off in the middle and end the bagpipe line was good and the parents line but the rest didnt hit hard, not a bad champ match.