The Intellectual Artist - & Nique, Engivale, Ledge

[Witty]

This was definitely a very impressive piece. All of you held your own very well in this OM so props to you all for that. I was feeling Ledgenz the most though, I just love his style.....I think Engivale should have been given more to do in this collab other than narrate, because even though he did a dope as fuck job at that (and held the piece together may I add), his talents deserve to be displayed more...Jonathon had a solid verse, no huge mistakes and has definitely shown us here that he has a lot to offer, he still has some elevation left, but I like his style and if he can work with it, he can certainly become very very good. Nique, well Nique you know I'm a fan and you certainly didn't disappoint here, your part was very dope and the last two lines were geniu lol dope shit from all of you, very dope read. Props.

If you could hit up 'Close your eyes' I'd appreciate it.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...23#post5817423

[Nique.]

Your love of the game causes you to want to improve the game. To pass men, to teach men that women are equal and capable of surpassing man?

wtf. ok, i'ma just explain it.

Hip Hop is a CHICK. refer to Common's song "I love H.E.R", which was Hip Hop.

What's every man's dream? a two girls together. If this intellectual artist made love to Hip Hop (her) she is cultivating a man's dream.

[Jon]

wtf. ok, i'ma just explain it.

Hip Hop is a CHICK. refer to Common's song "I love H.E.R", which was Hip Hop.

What's every man's dream? a two girls together. If this intellectual artist made love to Hip Hop (her) she is cultivating a man's dream.

So you are a lesbian?

[Engivale]

... sorry nique ...

you shoulda just let that one go, very few are gonna look into things that deeply. =D

(no, she's not a lesbian)

[Jon]

^ oh, ok..
didn't know because someone was talking about that and i heard a rumor i guess.. rofl.. i didn't know what to think after that line..

but yeah, thanks everyone for helping me out and collabing with me. i really love to see results like this..

[Domain 9]

Not a rapper, but lover - with intellect in grand schemes
Making love to Hip Hop.. cultivating in a man's dreams

You know Nique I actually sat there when I first read it and was trying to figure that line out. It's a dope complex line here's what I came up with.

Lesbian action Brownie points for me! Need I explain more?

[Possible]

Anyway, I was looking at it using cultivate in differant context, but I see what your saying.

[Domain 9]

damnit, I didn't know there was a second page... I left ^ that post not ever seeing the 2nd page so... I got it right!

[Nique.]

So you are a lesbian?

Ignorance is a bliss. It's figurative language, but this causes me to question you guys ability to think outside the box. Metaphors. Up your writing game.

[Nique.]

So you are a lesbian?

Ignorance is a bliss. It's figurative language, but this causes me to question you guys ability to think outside the box. Metaphors. Up your writing game.

[Jon]

chchchchchilll...


it was meerly a question. I've heard it before so hell, i didn't know. I was just asking. But whatever.

Uppin

[Nahlidge]

Word. This came out nice. I liked the transitions between the piece a lot. Nice shit Eng. Every1`s part read smooth. Like no1 had any less of a flow then the next (wo)man. Holla Nique! But word. Nice shit. Thought all the parts came together good word to Eng again cuz them little parts added some nice spice to it.

[Jon]

I'm still sorry bout leavin you out Nah, your verse was dope as fuck!

[Jon]

more feed'd be nice.

[Bounce]

Nique even a reference as plain as day as the one held in those lines you called out, will go undetected by 95% of the forum. I know it's frustrating at times, but that is the beauty of your writing. Kids have grown on your drops... What they don;t pick up today, they are going back and grasping later as they also progress in their skill. So even if today it's over their head, it's cool to know that eventually you will get a PM or two out of the blue with kids going... Man, those lines in that old peice of your just hit me! wow, I can;t belive I didn't pick that up before...


Over all this was a great read. I mean, come on the names onthis thing alone were impresssive. I wish I could have got my lines done for this, but I think it is much better this way. Nice way to tie in the variious verses there, who ever did the transitional writing between. Shit was rather impressive how that was done. Shows some insight into their ability to weave the works of a few together well. I don't see anyone here, I see everyone, which if you get my drift is rather dope in itself. Great cast of writers here. Much respect...