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    Cubical Work (my verse)

    $$T-Bone$$ feat. Luigi - Cubical work

    My Verse ($$T-Bone$$)

    First arrive at work, cuticals hurt, nervous as birth
    Dish out a few words about the clerks low tops and short skirts
    Fish out of my pocket a rocket ready to plug a socket
    It hurts, got jock itch, settled it down in my cock pit
    proud to make a profit, pay homage to the hottest
    she's the bombest when she's topless, double d's are flawless
    Xena Warrior Princess Lucy Lawless, next girl on my call list
    into bondage, loves to be choked til she vomits
    brutally honest and modest, a bitch who's pompous
    made her drop the image, go back to being vintage
    Back to the Future sex, De Lorean is still in it
    don't spill in it, for i will kill in it..........
    had many thrills in it, and many chills in it
    took the whip around the strip, flew back to my crib
    played some Barry White, made sure the candles were lit
    i was lit too after a bowl with my boo..........
    fought between the sheets, couldn't get a hold of you
    slip right through my fingers like Canseco assisted dingers
    catch her off key, quickly turn into an R&B singer
    she melts in my mouth, as i note my tongue in her

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    Re: Cubical Work (my verse)

    she's the bombest when she's topless, double d's are flawless
    Xena Warrior Princess Lucy Lawless, next girl on my call list
    ^^
    haha nice... didn't expect this to be the topic of your rhyme when i came in here. had some good rhymes and pretty good descriptive lines. was this in a audio?
    whatever it takes

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    Re: Cubical Work (my verse)

    "First arrive at work, cuticals hurt, nervous as birth
    Dish out a few words about the clerks low tops and short skirts"

    that was a great line; i think using words like cuticals add a bit of intellect to rhymes, and the line about the clerks low tops and short skirts was brilliant.

    the lines about the kinky sex were pretty good aswell. i thought the ending was a bit weak, could have maybe done with another bar or so just to finish the story.

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