Perpetual vs Scytsophrenia
10-20 Lines
Due Friday 11:59 est
Check Monday 11:59 est
Goodluck to both
Perpetual vs Scytsophrenia
10-20 Lines
Due Friday 11:59 est
Check Monday 11:59 est
Goodluck to both
is this the dude that was in LLL Jr? if so i wont go more then 10 .
^lol, but i believe its cuz we have a short supply of text heads, in which we are mostly writers. dont worry, just show up drop 10 then.
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Succeed Without Fear
Written Voices
Dude dont flatter your drunk ass,u aint fat girl pushin shit
you took more pushin for the cushion literly....
...and fucked the cushion bitch.
chevy weight?u gotta be kidding me you mud running bum
N ya you are all about animal rights - to b fucking one
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=342778
some wack kid with numbers in his name called for newbs only,fuck
n out for a good laugh i checked it - only 2 see ur name show up!
fuck this tool,blood,sweat n tears failed, ill easily leave u defaced
no more wondering news is Just-in - "Psycho just made this a brief case"
hes trying to put me down in the check in,thats immature you square!
im wholesome not tryn to butt in...put case just prefers it there!
Succeed Without Fear
Written Voices
Your alias says it all, and as for a vet? bitch your the worst
It's pretty rare for this clown to find spekz of dope in his verse
Come into my crib, we'll really find out who's harder...
He's not drownin in sorrows...the bathtubs full of water
The red lights flashing, a warning he throws makes all of us watch
Even bitches say he's a looker...and think they should be callin the cops
& i'm seen as a dog, your stereotype hardly gives power to geeks
If JW breaks the mold it's just cause this bitch ain't showered in weeks
So he's an invader? it's true, even fairys aint gayer then duke
Man i been around the block just to realize its straighter then you
Upping .
Succeed Without Fear
Written Voices
uppin this shit, c'mon lets start voting on this fo'real. 1 of the first battles in this forum. C'mon now, hurry up and close this.
HIT THESE UP WITH A HONEST VOTE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...bo-344883.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...cc-344781.html
Your alias says it all, and as for a vet? bitch your the worst
It's pretty rare for this clown to find spekz of dope in his verse
cool
Come into my crib, we'll really find out who's harder...
He's not drownin in sorrows...the bathtubs full of water
ok
The red lights flashing, a warning he throws makes all of us watch
Even bitches say he's a looker...and think they should be callin the cops
ok
& i'm seen as a dog, your stereotype hardly gives power to geeks
If JW breaks the mold it's just cause this bitch ain't showered in weeks
cool
So he's an invader? it's true, even fairys aint gayer then duke
Man i been around the block just to realize its straighter then you
kinda played but alright
vs
Dude dont flatter your drunk ass,u aint fat girl pushin shit
you took more pushin for the cushion literly....
...and fucked the cushion bitch.
cool.. coulda been worded better
chevy weight?u gotta be kidding me you mud running bum
N ya you are all about animal rights - to b fucking one
alright
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=342778
some wack kid with numbers in his name called for newbs only,fuck
n out for a good laugh i checked it - only 2 see ur name show up!
nice
fuck this tool,blood,sweat n tears failed, ill easily leave u defaced
no more wondering news is Just-in - "Psycho just made this a brief case"
ok
hes trying to put me down in the check in,thats immature you square!
im wholesome not tryn to butt in...put case just prefers it there!
lol
Overall this was a close battle.. but I think that Jus Write pulled through with a couple stronger lines and was a little more consistent than Justin was.. good battle but my v/ goes to Jus Write
vote - Justin Case
Close battle.. A lot of Jus Write's verse didn't hit that hard for me, maybe because I don't know the personals... but you should be able to get your personals across without use of links and stuff like that. Use your setup to begin the personal then use the next line for the punch part of it. The opener was kinda corny, witty but corny. Justin Case had a couple alright punches, but some of it was played too. The break the mold was played. The bathtubs was witty but it wasn't that hard hitting. You're not dissing him, you're telling him you'll kill him. Lol. Anyway I thought you won, liked your opener. It was pretty close though, I almost changed my vote, but I think you edged it.
Dude dont flatter your drunk ass,u aint fat girl pushin shit
you took more pushin for the cushion literly....
...and fucked the cushion bitch.
chevy weight?u gotta be kidding me you mud running bum
N ya you are all about animal rights - to b fucking one
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=342778
some wack kid with numbers in his name called for newbs only,fuck
n out for a good laugh i checked it - only 2 see ur name show up!
fuck this tool,blood,sweat n tears failed, ill easily leave u defaced
no more wondering news is Just-in - "Psycho just made this a brief case"
hes trying to put me down in the check in,thats immature you square!
im wholesome not tryn to butt in...put case just prefers it there
this verse was blah nothing real stand out had some decent punches and some not so decent ones was funny ill give u that much overall 6/10
Your alias says it all, and as for a vet? bitch your the worst
It's pretty rare for this clown to find spekz of dope in his verse
Come into my crib, we'll really find out who's harder...
He's not drownin in sorrows...the bathtubs full of water
The red lights flashing, a warning he throws makes all of us watch
Even bitches say he's a looker...and think they should be callin the cops
& i'm seen as a dog, your stereotype hardly gives power to geeks
If JW breaks the mold it's just cause this bitch ain't showered in weeks
So he's an invader? it's true, even fairys aint gayer then duke
Man i been around the block just to realize its straighter then you
decent verse somewhat simple had some good personals but also had some weak punches was decent verse overall 6.3/10
this was a close battle but imma give it to jc for better punches and personals
v/justin case
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uppin............................................. ..this shit for them.. damn, close it, its a crew battle.
upping, for justin #2 up for him .
Dude dont flatter your drunk ass,u aint fat girl pushin shit
you took more pushin for the cushion literly....
...and fucked the cushion bitch.
nah.. didn't like this
chevy weight?u gotta be kidding me you mud running bum
N ya you are all about animal rights - to b fucking one
meh..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=342778
some wack kid with numbers in his name called for newbs only,fuck
n out for a good laugh i checked it - only 2 see ur name show up!
decent @ best
fuck this tool,blood,sweat n tears failed, ill easily leave u defaced
no more wondering news is Just-in - "Psycho just made this a brief case"
belh.. no
hes trying to put me down in the check in,thats immature you square!
im wholesome not tryn to butt in...put case just prefers it there!
no gay. :/
vs
Your alias says it all, and as for a vet? bitch your the worst
It's pretty rare for this clown to find spekz of dope in his verse
ok..
Come into my crib, we'll really find out who's harder...
He's not drownin in sorrows...the bathtubs full of water
nah..
The red lights flashing, a warning he throws makes all of us watch
Even bitches say he's a looker...and think they should be callin the cops
nah..
& i'm seen as a dog, your stereotype hardly gives power to geeks
If JW breaks the mold it's just cause this bitch ain't showered in weeks
ok..
So he's an invader? it's true, even fairys aint gayer then duke
Man i been around the block just to realize its straighter then you
nah..
well overall a semi decent battle. wasn't really feeling anything from both but i think justin took this one easily imo. spekz jus didn't bring anything this time. and case had atleast 2 ok lines. so..
V. Case
Jus Write - opener was whack honestly. so he fucked an animal too? lol. meh punch bad. badly worded too. see your name show up was okay i guess. just in was meh. closer was whack. bad verse man. truly horrible wording with some even worse concepts at times. step it up.
Justin Case - opener was okay. drowning in sorrows was meh. looker was meh. bad wording. breaks the mold was actually a little funny. lol. closer was whack. meh verse. wording was okay i guess. just work on your concepts a little.
Overall - Justin Case. better verse. Jus Write came real bad so he wasn't hard to beat.
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