About The Guardian

[Guardian]

16 lines for a warm up. 4 lines for each paragraph. My introduction...


Some of you kats on Rapbattles wack so I'm a just cop a tool - Cause I don't dance, Mainly just pop, lock, and drop a fool - Your life is propable when them thangs pop at you - And you gettin double cause your girl's brain is sloppy too.

And yea I'm sicc wit it, You plannin a entourage? - Definately gettin sabotaged when you messin with Guard's squad - Send somethin that'll make your heart slide - Wait for 5-0 to open the garage so I can make your parts glide.

Tha kid is wicked, Knock on doors?, My goons burst in - The birds chirpin, Have your whole crew reimburstin - And I ain't talkin bout cash, Talkin bout havin your souls perched atop your hood's church and

Ya boi Guardian, Louisiana's upcomin - Yall can come 'round here frontin and catch somethin in your nuggin - Same as I grew up, No stuntin just huntin - But, yall messed up your career comin at Greats like Buddens.

I've Replied To:
Train Of Thought - YungVik
Street-Hop - (S)a(V)a(G)e

[big j da fat boy]

you had a well thought verse. your ryme scheme was put together very well. i also liked how you highlited the rymes for the dumbasses. overall you had a good verse keep doin ya thang man. peace out BIG-J

[Guardian]

Thanks for the reply. Up!

[Saint Classic]

Wtf?,

If you're a "boi", why're you braggin' about "pop, lock, and drop..."?? Son, you were missing rhythem, an' a proper subject. You'd never get signed to a real record label writin' about that stuff...Who could relate? Or...lol...who would WANT to? Never know though...a couple girls from the local clubs might relate to that pop, lock, and drop line...

[Johnny 6-feet]

Closed. Send me the LINKS of the pieces you've replied to with decent feedback and i'll reopen this.